Write, Wrote, Written discussion

Great start. Well written, I like your description of Hope at the beginning, very deep.

:D Soo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love the cover!!!!!!! How'd you make it?

And how did you get it on a post? I can't figure out how...

What Ruby said!

:D So good!!!

XD LOVE IT

:D :D :D love it!

But i do have some Constructive Critisism, if you're up for it.

(view spoiler)[In the Messege 24: I red back over the letter for my mom.

read instead of red

Also: In Messege 24: Back in my bedroom I was writing an email to my mom when my phone ringed, alerting me to a new text. It was from Lucy.

rang instead of ringed

I don't think there is anything else, but yeah. :D (hide spoiler)]

Only read that if ya want some CC

AWESOMESAUCE

O.O








I LOVE YOU, CHARLOTTE. *big breath*

MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE

also, I have one more grammar thing... but if you don't want to hear my ranting and english-loving brain, then pleasee press this big SHUT UP button, and I will stop.

BUUUUUUUUUUUT - if ya wanna hear my small eensy weensey thing...

(view spoiler)[scary instead of scaring (hide spoiler)]

OOOOOOOOh

who's Katie?!?!?!?!?!


and what is the important thing???? I neeeeeed to know!!!!!


GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRr



(message 30, very top, sixth paragraph, and i am saying paragraph as in groups of sentences or one sentence on here that are seperated by the huge space things, not actual paragraphs)

I NEED MORE

I NEED MORE I LOVE THIS

NO NO NO YOU CAN'T GIVE ME THAT AND NOT TELL ME THE REST NOOOOOOOOOOO

DO YOU THINK I LISTEN TO WARNINGS?????? IF YOU TELL ME NOT TO DO SOMETHING, FOR REAL, I'LL DO IT. REVERSE PSYCHOLOGY!!!!!!!!!!

THE ONLY PERSON WORSE THEN YOU IS RICK RIORDAN

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I read at my own risk. I regret it. But, now the story is going to be even more A-MAZE -ING!

!!!! I can't wait!!!!

YES

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO


HOw could you do this to me????? WHY DID I READ THOSE SOILERS?!?!?!/1

hmph

O.O


MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! I wanna know what happens!!

hmph

Hi....

Nope. I have to go, bye

Is this Katie?

O.O

WHATISITWHATISIT!!!!!

O.O

WHO IS ELSIE???

IS THAT HIS MOM??? DID SHE DIE???

ELSIE IS THE SISTER??? WHAT HAPPENED????????

O.O

WHAT HAPPENED??????

grr

You leave me to DIE in suspense. hmph

You are so good!!!!!

How could you do this??????? Wahhhhhh!!!!!!!! (And I was totally planning on Ally (Lucy+Alex) and then you made Katie!!!!!!!!!!!) XD

Kalex is soooooo a better ship name, but...... :( Or Lucy should be in love with him secretly or Katie betrays him! MWAHAHAHAHA sorry, I have something against Katie.... :) And I was reading the RP, and you were all "Katie is my GF, Lucy my BFF" and I was like NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Sorry.... XD

WHAT LUCY IS PREGNANT ARE YOU KIDDING ME I DIDN'T EVEN SEE THAT WHEN I WROTE THE PREVIOUS COMMENT HOW COULD SHE I IMAGINE HER TO BE....... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU ARE KILLING ME CHARLOTTE, YOU ARE AN EVIL BEING HOW-FREAKING-COULD YOU??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

YOU JUST THOUGHT "HMMMM JULANE WANT ALLY.... HOW BOUT I MAKE LUCY PREGNANT THAT WILL SOLVE IT!" WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HOW COULD YOU YOU PERSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay.... I have calmed down.... at least you made the decision easier for me (I guess it's gonna be Kalex... cuz I'm assuming Lucy has a boyfriend.....) :(

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH IM MAD AGAIN HOW COULD I NOT HAVE NOTICED IT YOU ARE THE MOST AMAZINGLY BEST HORRIBLE-IST PERSON I HAVE EVER NOT MET !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Charlotte wrote: "LOL, what do you have against Katie?"

I just- You know, I don't really know..... /:o

Charlotte wrote: "actually, she broke up with him..."

But- How- NO! Make Ally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And... and like Katie should abandon Lucy cuz she thinks she's stealing Alex away, and Alex breaks up with Katie cuz she's being mean, and Lucy and Alex get together!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay! :)

Yes yay! >:(

*dies*


THIS IS AMAZING CHARLOTTE!!!!!! I swear, this should be published!

I WOULD TOTALLY BUY IT!!!!!