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Realistic Fiction > hope.ful.ness

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message 1: by Allison (new)
Sep 01, 2014 08:52PM

Allison | 679 comments Okay, I only read a little bit so far, but I'm liking it. I like the hook, I like how you word things.

I just think that coming out and stating the character's name like, "I am Alex and I'm writing this book" is a little too sudden.

That's my only suggestion so far though.

Keep going:)


message 2: by Allison (new)
Sep 01, 2014 09:06PM

Allison | 679 comments :)


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