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P.D. Atkerson
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P.D. wrote: "They found him in the desert, with no memories and only his ID tag for a clue to who he was.He was a Beta member of the Inner Circle (meaning he was important to them), so why was he Rebooted? Is ..."
Oooo! I love where you're going with this idea. It has a lot of potential, especially with the questions he'll have!
Oceane wrote: "P.D. wrote: "They found him in the desert, with no memories and only his ID tag for a clue to who he was.He was a Beta member of the Inner Circle (meaning he was important to them), so why was he ..."
Thanks. I’m hoping to start on it soon, but right now I’ve got three other books I working on.
Yeah, I think maybe when I'm finished with the spy book, I'll start working on this one. Fingers crossed.
There was darkness. Complete and utter, darkness. There had never been light and there never would be light. At least that’s how I felt, until I sat up and hit my head against something hard. Then light flashed across my eyes and pain shot through my skull.
My head spun and I dropped back against the floor.
It was then that I realize the ground was vibrating. We must be moving, and pretty fast too.
Once the pain in my head began to leave, I carefully sat up and rose to my feet. Keeping my hands above my head, just in case there was something else I might hit.
When I was fully standing, I groped around to figure out my surroundings, and I soon got a rough idea of what it might look like, if I could see anything in this darkness.
There were smooth metal crates all around me, different sizes, but all of them were locked. I must be in some kind of supple transportation vehicle. It was the only thing that made sense. But how did I get in here? I still wasn’t sure and before I had a chance to think about it, the vehicle lurched and I hit against one of the crates, nearly toppling back to the ground.
I grabbed the edge of it and steadied myself, that’s when I realized we weren’t moving anymore.


He was a Beta member of the Inner Circle (meaning he was important to them), so why was he Rebooted? Is that reason enough to make him a member of the Outer Ring, and fight against his own, instead? Or does their propaganda run deep?
He may just be the key to bringing down the Firewall that separates the two groups, but to who's destruction?
What do you think?