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Home of superman and many other great heroes




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The architect flew into the city has he was asked to help rebuild a sky scraper that got damaged in a fight of superman vs. the toymaker. in return half the money that was going to be saved he had be put into the american cancer foundation.


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On his platform of darkness he flew over the city and sensed the life, it needed to be even out


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The architect saw the platform of darkness and knew it kneaded to be investigated, Seeing has he was the nearest person able of checking it out, well in truth has he was in the sky he was the only person near by has they were in the sky but besides the point.

"Um, Scuse me sir? Has a super i guess its part of my job to ask what are you doing?"

((Just checking seeing how you didn't put any points into flying, the platform doesn't do any fancy flying right?))


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((I put points into flying, check again))
Jordan stopped the platform and looked at the man next to him " so your the architect I have heard about" Jordan said


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"Well um…."Thomas looked around has he saw there was no one else floating on a block of crystal while being covered in crystal skin from the top of his head to his toes. he was stationed out in chicago though, if this guy knew about him he must be smart."Yes?"


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THe shadow nodded "Good to finally meet you, they call me the shadow but I prefer deaths hand." death hand said as he streached his hand forward, a skinny thing


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He doubled up the lair of diamond crystal skin onto himself knowing he never has gotten sick before, though he never faced a major virus that he knew of before. It was just who would outright trust a man called deaths hand? he then tentatively shook it.


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Deaths hand laughed "I understand why you would be scared, but trust me, I don't have disease outside of being unable to walk, although I am sorry to say we are likely to be enermies" deaths hand said as he started to lower himself towards the ground


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"its not much of fear more of not trusting people who i deem suspicious."he then looked at the mans health and said. "you seem like a man who has lived a life that can relate to my words." The architect told him has he backed away from his platform "May i ask of you of your attentions?"


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deaths hand nodded "I am on a mission from death, the balence between life and death is breaking and needs to be fixed, the only way to do that is by killing people, thats why we will most likely be enermies" deaths hand said as he arrived on the surface of the earth


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The architect landed in front of him has he made about 10 six inch crystal daggers float around him ready to launch like bullets."Cant death be satisfied with the grief and suffering from around the world? Sure the worlds population has been on a drastic rise the past 200 years but with it so many other sins."


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((I am just going to ask, what can magic do exactly? I am maxed in it and outside it's knowledge is their anything I can do with it?))


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((Oh plenty, for your character he could easily summon ghouls, zombies, wraiths, and such along with any low level monsters from the realm of hell who have partnered with him. With prep time he can even summon high level demons. Shoot various elements without wands or words. for more check out this page at the bottom for powers, http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Klarion_Blea... or watch this fight scene https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=URbvT... ))


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((okay thank you))


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((your post :) ))


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Deaths hand laughed "if death goes the world will be an awful place, disease will still exist world hunger will continue to go up, as much as people deny it death is a mercy, it creases pain" Deaths hand as shadows started to wrap around him and he got out the staff of death. "I do not wish to fight, let me do my duty and you can do yours, all I ask is that money you raise for chaity to give it to povety and world hunger, not diseses" deaths hand asked the architect


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"Cant really do that…..I already promised both the company asking for my help and the charity the money is going to that it was a done deal, Gotta keep up my reputation and all."The architect explained simply."Instead…." he then surrounded both of them in a wall of crystal."How about you killed those whom have sinned and are getting away with it? like those dictators in africa?"


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"Already got my assassins on it, you should be hearing about their deaths soon, although war will still be going on their for a while" deaths hand said smiling


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"Great then not to be rude but, either stop with the killing here or…"The architect launches a crystal that was clearly going to miss. but never the less showed off a portion of his power."Were going have to fight if you don't."


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Jordan smiled "well it look like were going to fight" Jordan said letting loose an eldritch blast


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Immediately Thomas dropped to the ground has he made a foot thick wall of crystal between them. It appears that thomas's dive was not needed however has once again his crystals prove hard to break even with an eldritch blast. though what might be hard to see though for Jordan was that it showed a few faint signs of cracking that Thomas could feel. If he had to estimate then hiding behind this wall he made could last ten more shots.


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He laughed "time to let loose some REAL magic!" jordan said as he summoned wraiths to attack him through the crystal while he let loose his dark powers to try and break through the wall infront of him


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Thomas saw the wraith creatures come out of thin air and could feel his wall cracking. one more blast like that and he would only have the crystal armor and tough skin. Taking the offensive he launched a barrage of crystal bullets about a hundred in total. Thanks to their size, shape, and hardness they made up for being a bit slower then most bullets and were even has powerful has anti tank sniper rounds. He then dove out from his wall and made a box of crystal around the devils hand trying to stop him.


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Jordan frowned, and summoned shadows to protects him, he could hear them dropping to the floor but knew that his crystals were stronger than his shadows so collected the crystals that droped for study and let loose 6 eldritch blasts 3 upwards for an exscape 3 towards tomas to keep him busy.


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((I am just going to say, how will fighting work? because different people will do different things and I was just wondering your take on it))


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((Honestly i want this to be has much of a relaxed group has possible, Where members create and solve problems like fighting themselves. but if you thinks its needed then i can think up one.))


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((yeah, I think it's needed because then battles will probably go on forever))


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((Hmmm…..well going off on how their is a point system, next would be putting in some sort of health system has well, Which most groups don't have so it'll be a new thing to do. ((Seriously why add superpowers when you can't fight properly with them.))The problem with a health system is how to integrate it. without having people complain on others cheating or not using the system properly. ))


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1000ideas2say(yes/i/am/a/guy/and/yes/i/like/to/play/the/guy) wrote: "((Hmmm…..well going off on how their is a point system, next would be putting in some sort of health system has well, Which most groups don't have so it'll be a new thing to do. ((Seriously why add..."

((I say we talk about this in another thread))


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((Too the mod thread!! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yic7I... ))


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((et's continue))


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the dome that he put around them was nearly three feet thick, The dark hands eldritch blasts barely put a crack into it. The Architect felt him pick up the crystals has they were kind of apart of him. though from what he have studied upon them so far no harm done to them was brought back upon him. Proof of this was how his crystal wall nearly shattered and yet he was still fine. He made a fast made crystal Kite shield that took the eldritch blasts then threw a crystal javelin at the Dark hand.


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((deaths hand))
noticing the conection between the crystal and the so called hero, he needed to get out of here to study the crystal, time for some help from under! "Time for you to see some of my power" Jordan smiled and summoned a lower demon of disease to fight the Architect with some zombies as back up. While doing that he studied the crystals structure. All Crystals have a strong structre but if hit right it will shatter


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((Sue me, i was tired. lol))

Has deaths hand studies its structure.(Im guessing he he has a way to look at its molecular make up.) He would soon discover like the Architect that not only was it five times harder then diamond, but easily five times ,if not more, complex. Bringing into question if such a item could even exist in this time of year and part of the universe, or even in this dimension.

The Architect knew that to keep the city safe he can't let Deaths hand out until help has arrived. Luckily all civilians outside the dome have left the premise and cops were beginning to show up. They were a bit unsure however on who was the good guy, has they never heard nor seen the Architect before. though has the fight dragged on they came to realize just who the hero was has he battled the zombies.

Sending 2 razor discs made of crystal he decapitate the zombies then put a giant spike on his fist and uppercutted the demon in the jaw with his superhuman strength. Inside of the crystal suit, thomas was sweating has the dome itself took 1/3 of his crystals to make and maintain.


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((I don't know much about the dc universe, how powerful are lower demons?))


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((Not entirely sure. if i would guess about half as strong has bane?))


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((and higher demons?))
The demon was staggered and bleeding but he laughed and charged towards him. Deaths hand set out a wave of shadows towards the architect, he them blasted the side of the crstal dome with fire and water, quickly heating and cooling it to weaken it and blasting with another magic blast


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((mmm, along with powers you can decide on for the demon about has strong has wonder woman ))

The fire and water had little to no effect but the Blast magic cracked it quite a bit. Its clear now to you that elements that follow the rules of this dimension such has fire and water(essentially temperature) And probably higher forms of energy like kinetic, lightning, and radiation would have a hard time breaking through this structure. Though your Magical blasts that don't follow the rules of this realm appear much more powerful against it.

Out side a permitter of cop cars has been set up along with 20 to 30 cops. above you can see helicopter of both police and news circling above. The Architect now focuses less on Deaths hand and more at the foe in front of him. Putting another large spick on his other hand he uses his good fighting skill to doge then lay on the super strength, crystal spike fist punches onto the guy.


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((okay, as I don't know much about the dc universe, I am just going to ask, since I am so magically powerful, how many wraith and such can I make at once? also how easy is it for me to travel to another universe? sorry it took so long, my mum asked me to wash the dishes))


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((With wraith you could summon about 20 with ease. Countless mid level zombies who you give an order to and they'll follow it. multiple low level demons, maybe one high level demon, to get to another dimension it would depend on its place you could say in all of creation. to get from one spot to another on earth it'll take just a couple of minutes to think. From our world to another one altogether, about an hour worth of prep time at least.))


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((okay thanks))
The demon grabbed the spiked fist and wrestled with the him, forcing him back. Deaths hand smile and said "well that was fun, now to leave you with a parting gift" Death hand close his eyes and summoned 200 zombies through out the city with order to kill as much life as possible. "You should go now can't you hear the screams?" Jordan said as he got ready to transport out side the dome


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The architect glared at deaths hand through his crystal suit. then grew a spike on his forehead and head butted the demon before shooting about 30 large spear sized spikes at the demon at the speed of about 80 miles and hour. Killing it has he then left the fight to go handle the zombies along with the cops.


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((I am going to ask, I said I got a magic artifact that I can use to spead up how often a disaster happens or spread a disease, is this okay?))
Deaths hand transported above the city and he started flying watching the building burn through out the city, he smile and to help things along he summoned 5 wraiths to make sure the hero can't attack him by surprise


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((yeah sure,))

The Architect didn't have time to handle the deaths hand has he was to busy taking all the zombies and either killing them or funneling them to the cops to kill, he then Flew over to the building that was set on fire and incased the part on fire in a dome to starve it out. Leaving the Hero panting for air has he felt his powers almost depleted. he could tell were the deaths hand was has he could use the crystals he took earlier to detect him but unsure whether or not he was a in shape to engage him.


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((thank you))
Deaths hand smiled and got out his main crstal ball,
with it in his hand he could see that no disaster would strike the city but that won't stop disease. He help it in both hands and it started raining white flakes, disease will become rampant through the city, that should be enough death for this city he started to prepare to transport to his base, knowing the crstals will lead the Architect to him he droped the crystals and got ready to transport away, before doing so summoning another lower level demon to deliver a message to the architect.


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Has the rest of the fire and the zombies were handled the architect groaned miserably has he sat down for a few minutes to regain his strength, watching a bit helplessly, he wished he was stronger. Finally after resting he used his crystals to sweep away and isolate the flakes as emergency respondents came to the aid of the sick and injured, in the wake of the destruction, about 8 died and 40 of either sick or injured.


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sensing that not enough death has happened deaths hand frowned, the flakes were part of it but over the next few days the rain will carry the disease as well, almost out of energy he gave the demon the nessage and transported to his lair


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The architect saw the demon and heard its message before killing it. For the rain there was not much he could do. The city ordered everyone to stay inside and about 18 more died along with the normal amount of course. part of the death was able to be avoided by the architect be given a radio by the mayor of this city who has grown to love him much like superman. during these five days of rain he managed to get the building that was on fire along with the two superman accidentally damaged back to normal. Finally on the 5th and last day superman dropped by to pay him a vista finally back in town and thanked him for his work of protecting the city has best he could while away. the mayor along with the cites head of the health department and chief of police all thanked the Architect for his hard work and the city gave 20 million dollars in donation along with the original 5 million to the americas cancer foundation for a total of 25 million dollars.


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The message that deaths hand sent the architect was that he might be able to help him find the source of his power, even though they are enermies he explained that he actuly protected the balence both ways, he needed to bring more death still but he is willing to even though they are enermies help his find his true identity, he could study the crystal to find where it comes from, as it clearly dosen't belong on earth, he also apologived for the fires as he only wanted death not destruction and gave him a number to give to a swiss bank account for 50 million dollars for a charity of his choice, though he would prefer a world hunger one, and to repair the city, he also said thats its likely they will fight again and don't be surprised to hear about pamdemicss in asia


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