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Sep 23, 2014 05:56PM
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I hid the key, until you came along
In your company, my secrets did depart
They flowed out of my lips, like I was singing a song
Ehhh idk what to do now XD
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I hid the key, until you came along
In your company, my secrets did depart
They flowed out of my lips, like I was singing a song
Little did I know, you would only betray me
Break my heart, and then leave me in my tears
If only my vision was clearer, if only I could see
That wherever you were, trouble was always near
After you left, I did not move from my bed
I looked at our pictures, and then let the tears flow
And now from depression, my sleeves are stained red
And little did I know, that one day I would grow
Despite my isolation, I met another stranger
He's very beautiful – in his personality, not just his looks
And unalike you, he's no danger
Is this my happy ending, like it said in the books?
This may not be true, this may not be right
But I feel better with him, than I ever did with you
I've tried to forget, but that's a harder fight
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The flow on the first two stanzas is a bit choppy but the end blends together perfectly! I love it!
Just finish it lady! You only need one more line lol
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Tears stream down my face as I reread his letter
I honestly thought that he could make my life better
But there he goes, with his new girl
Leaving me alone with the rage that unfurled
I guess I was too young, too stupid, naïve
To see that he wasn't the one for me
I should've known that wherever he was, trouble was near
And yet I actually though, that with him, I'd have no fear
My world had been so joyful, but now filled with much pain
It's gloomy and sad, like a day of endless rain
He didn't deserve my love, didn't deserve my trust
Now my heart's shattered, and left to die in the dust
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