✎ Just Keep Writing ✐ discussion

I write irreguraly, sometimes I will rapid fire sometimes you might not hear from me for months, you can keep track of me if you wish, just a warning, I often write about death and sucide, it's what I write about mostly so please be warned

The calm ocean still
Empty of waves with nothing
Stirring the great sea

However beneath
The waves a different story
Is shown to happen

Creatures of brilliant
Colours of such beauty and
Diverse quality

Swimming together
In an endless flurry of
Emerald and ruby

Scales of such shine that
They are like small gemstones set
In a endless dance

Small or large does not
Matter all of the creatures
Are magnificent

the grand libary
full of knowledge and secrets
you only need to look


but knowledge is a
dangerous thing and disturbes
all who looks for it

explore it at your
own risk you might find something
about your morals

but if you succeed
and survive the trip you will
know your mind and soul

Wow! Thats so beautiful! I absolutely loved that one line in the first poem:
"They are like small gemstones set
In a endless dance"
Its beautiful! Great job! Can't wait to read more!

Thank you, for your comment

I love your work :)

Silent song

Wind spinning around
tree's shaking branches at the
recently placed earth

A raven flying
in the wind towards a house
of dispair and grief

Landing on a edge
it peered into a window
to see a sad scene

An old man crying
tying a knot to a beam
across the ceiling

The man not able
to hear the beautiful song
from under the earth

Like daisies floating
from the earth towards the men
but he ignores them

The men finishes
the knot and ties it around
his delicate neck

Still crying over
not being able to hear the song
that he wants so much

The man so close to
being able to hear it's beauty
he loses himself

The song so tempting
that he dosen't care about life
and only wants the song

At last he could hear
the song and its beauty and
he no longer cried




So what do you people think? being a while

Okay I am going to do a warning for this one, I made it while I was bored and well....let's just say people think I am a psycho and well if this is what comes from my head I am not surprise so it is not very good but its dark to say the least, I based it on a children ryhme

hush little child
don't say a word
mamma gonna smother you
and if you struggle
momma's gonna get hemlock
and if you choke on the hemlock
mamma's gonna slit your little throat
and if you screming in pain
mamma's gonna bask your head in
and if you survive that you will still die on day


yes you can see why people think I am sadistic

I like the silent poem :) it was really deep and sad