Write, Wrote, Written discussion

This is good at a very high level. It is serious in dealing with facing death. Thus it is hard to mention a few things that might need SLIGHT improvements:
(1) "The rode was quiet ..." should be either "road"or "ride." [It's curious that both would read well.]

YOU are welcome!

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I almost wish you could add it to the rest of the story, it really shows Grace in a different light.

Yeah. I was thinking of a sad face, but this didn't make me cry-sad. More like....... Happy-sad. You know? Like when you watch Robin Williams as Genie in "You Ain't Never Had a Friend Like Me" from Alladin...

@Julane - it is. The story makes her death sound sad (don't get me wrong - it is), but this shows it in a different heartfelt way.

Yeah... More.... Nostalgic, as Charlotte said...? I don't know.../

Never seen either of those, but you are probably correct.

:'( This is really good but really sad...

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My history teacher's name is Andy Griffith

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I liked Andy Griffith in his 'heyday.' It's nice that you write "Go to netflix. NOW."

Au contraire, I do some of my school online.