The Wonderful World of Hogwarts—A Detailed And Advanced Roleplay discussion

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Owen

Full Name: Owen Alexander Kent
Gender: Male
Blood: Pure-blood
Age: 11
– Birthday: December 21
Appearance:
– Pictured With: Jason Kent (right)
– Height: 5'1"
– Build: Thin; broad-shouldered
– Hair: Brown; soft; left-swept; messy; ear-length
– Eyes: Brown
– Vocal Qualities: Tenor; reserved; occasionally has a really bad voice crack
Persona (External): Insightful; intuitive; uncompromising; orderly; stubborn; protective; inadvertently apathetic; hard-working
Personal History: Owen has grown up being the perfect child. Because his brother Jason is wild and difficult to control, their parents decided that Owen was to be the prodigy of the family (without his consent). For this reason, Owen bears a grudge against his twin, though he finds himself admiring his brother's free spirit when Jason isn't needlessly pestering him.
Family: Joseph Kent (father; 39; Pure-blood; former Ravenclaw); Charlotte Kent (mother; 37; Pure-blood; former Slytherin); Jason Kent (brother; 11; Pure-blood)


Cat

Name: Mewmew (Mimi)
Gender: Female
Age: 4
Appearance:
Description: Mimi, named "Mewmew" by accident, is a sweet but needy cat that causes Owen more problems than his brother does. She enjoys stowing away in his book bags and causing a ruckus in class, as well as intentionally sitting on his papers while he's studying. Her favorite pass-times include play-hunting Nico, Jason's ferret, and climbing the dormitory drapes.


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Appearance: I'm thinking "Owen Kent (left) and Jason Kent (right)" before the picture. Idk, mind trying it?

Height: No space in between the " and 1

Build, Hair, Eyes, Vocal Qualities: The first letter of the first word on each of these lines should be capitalized.

Persona (External): Only the first letter of the first word should be capitalized (with the exception of proper nouns).

Personal History: When who's not being needlessly pestered...?

Family: The parents should both be listed as "former" regarding the Houses.

Description (Pet): Delete the "who was".

Fixed.

Hm... I don't like how it pushes the picture down to the next line... (You two can create a topic in Ollivander's whenever you want, btw. I'm assuming they'll go to the shop together, but it's perfectly fine if you want them to go separately as well.)

Personal History: For this reason, Owen bears a grudge against his twin, but though he finds himself admiring his brother's free spirit when Owen Jason isn't being needlessly pestereding him.

^^ Does that appropriately work in what you're trying to say?

Maybe put that bit about the picture on the line below, but instead of "and", use a semicolon? Or... Hm... (Try that. Depending, I might change something...)

Should I just put "on the left", then?

And yes, we were planning on putting them into the same topic for Ollivander's.

See message 7.

Persona (External): The first letter of the first word should be capitalized, please.

I didn't see the updated list of messages, dang. Sorry about that. Fixed again.

No worries!

What do you think about (this would be on the line beneath Appearance):
– Pictured With: Jason Kent (right)

Tada? I think it looks pretty alright.

Do you think it would look better another way? I could live with this, but I am open to suggestion. (You and Lupine can start a topic in Ollivander's whenever you guys want.)

I'm writing up the opening post for our topic in Ollivander's, no worries. Also, I like the way that it looks right now, so I think it's fine C:

Okay, thanks!