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message 1: by Amburger (last edited Oct 20, 2014 03:09PM) (new)

Amburger | 32 comments HOUSE


Jae

Full Name: Jae-Hwa Baek
Gender: Male
Blood: Pure-blood
Age: 11
Birthday: July 15
Appearance:
Height: 4'9"
Build: Thin; athletic
Hair: Dark brown
Eyes: Dark brown
Vocal Qualities: Soft; gentle; slight Korean accent
Persona (External): Quiet; stubborn; cocky
Personal History: His parents met in Korea, where he was born. They moved to London when Jae was three due to a job opening. Jae grew up as an only child, but recently, his parents had another child. Jae is very protective of his little sister.
Family: Si Won Baek (father; 39; Pure-blood); Young-Ja Baek (mother; 38; Pure-blood); Mia Yoon-He Baek (sister; 2; Pure-blood)


Cat

Name: Aura
Gender: Female
Age: 5 months
Appearance:
Description: Aura is a young Tonkinese cat with blue eyes. She is very cunning and sneaky, and she is easily excited.


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s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» | 331 comments You're welcome to create a topic for him in Ollivander's at your discretion.


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» | 331 comments Blood: The b of "Pure-Blood" should not be capitalized.

Vocal Qualities: The s of "Slight" should not be capitalized.

Persona (External): No semicolon at the end.

Personal History: Please spell out "3".

Family: The f of "Father", the m of "Mother", and the s of "Sister" should not be capitalized. Space needed in the sister's parenthetical after the semicolon behind "2". Semicolons after the parentheticals of the father and mother, to separate each family member. Please capitalize all three p's of "pure-blood".

Pet: Fox...? Foxes are more wild animals than pets so I'm going to have to say no unless you have an especially compelling reason.


message 4: by Amburger (new)

Amburger | 32 comments Because they have domesticated foxes T-T hehe okie I'll change it.


message 5: by Amburger (new)

Amburger | 32 comments but tomorrow tomorrow. I'll fix it. tomorrow


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» | 331 comments Is that actually a thing...?


message 7: by Amburger (new)

Amburger | 32 comments domesticated foxes? yeah... but like... they aren't common hahaha.... xD it's okie. I'll change it to the next best thing. a kittie


message 9: by Amburger (last edited Oct 20, 2014 03:09PM) (new)

Amburger | 32 comments Did I fix everything?


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» | 331 comments Yep! Go ahead and send him into Ollivander's!


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