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Sage

Full Name: Sage Sachin Sargent
Gender: Male
Blood: Half-blood
Age: 11
–Birthday: July 18
Appearance:
–Height: 5'4"
–Build: Athletic; muscular
–Hair: Brown
–Eyes: Brown
–Vocal Qualities: Mid-ranged; gentle; thick British accent
Persona (External): Tough; outgoing; protective; kind
Personal History: Sage was born as a twin in London. He gets along well with his twin sister, but not with his older sister. He gets along with his parents. When he was seven, a small accident happened for both him and his twin sister. This was how they find out they had magic, but they kept it a secret from anyone else except for their parents. When Sage turned eleven, he got his letter to Hogwarts. The same day, his older sister took him and his twin sister to Diagon Alley. The three of them bought their school supplies together, just not their wands.
Family: Stefan Sam Sargent (father; 59; Muggle-born; former Gryffindor); Lacy Lanie Sargent (mother; 57; Pure-blood; former Hufflepuff); Selena Saffwan Sargent (sister;17;Half-blood;Ravenclaw); Stefanie Cathleen Sargent (sister; 11; Half-blood; House-tbd)


Cat

Name: King Sparta
Gender: Male
Age: 4 months
Appearance:
Description: King Sparta, aka Sparta, is very interesting at least when he is around Stef's owl. Sparta often spends time during the summer playing with Karla. The two were side-by side pals for the time before Stefanie and Sage went to Hogwarts, while they ignored Helen, the pet of Sage's older sister.


Wand

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Information Discovered/Developed In-Story:

Currently unavailable.

Height: 5'4 » 5'4"

Build: The m of "Muscular" should not be capitalized.

Vocal Qualities: "Mid-Range;Gentle;Thick British Accent" » Mid-ranged; gentle; thick British accent

History: a) 7 » seven
b) "This had them find out they had magic, but they kept it a secret from anyone else except for their parents." » This was how they found out they had magic, but they kept it a secret from everyone else except for their parents.
c) 11 » eleven
d) "When Sage turned 11, he got his letter to Hogwarts and his school supplies." » See my note on the similar sentence in Stef's profile.

Family: See my notes with Stef. The only thing different between their two sections here is each other. In this case:

Stefanie Cathleen Sargent (Sister;11 years old;Has yet to be sorted. Current 1st yr.;Half-blood;) » Stefanie Cathleen Sargent (sister; 11; Half-blood; House—tbd)

There should be two blank lines before Cat, but there are currently three.

Cat (Felis Demesticus) » Cat

Anything else?

Build: Athletic but muscular » Athletic; muscular

Vocal Qualities: Spaces after the semicolons.

Persona (External): Spaces after the semicolons.

Family: Should look like the following:

Family: Stefan Sam Sargent (father; 59; Muggle-born; former Gryffindor); Lacy Lanie Sargent (mother; 57; Pure-blood; former Hufflepuff); Selena Saffwan Sargent (sister; 17; Half-blood; Ravenclaw); Stefanie Cathleen Sargent (sister; 11; Half-blood; House tbd)

Name (pet): King Sparta (Sparta) » King Sparta

Done, anything else?

Family: The formatting, please. Look at what I gave you.

You can create a topic for him in Ollivander's when you would like.

Fixed it...almost

Not quite hon'. Look here.

It okay now?

Yes, thank you very much. :)