Write, Wrote, Written discussion

Oooooooo Emmeline - this is amazing!!!!!!

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

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I really think this is great, Emmeline!!! Do you mind CC:

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So I know that you might think this isn't true, or maybe it's just me, but whenever I look at the title, it looks an awful lot like "Cancer" not "Cancaster", and though this is super minor and all, just a thought, nothing big! I'm not saying the title is bad, but if you plan on doing a lot with this story, maybe change the title a bit, I will NOT be offended at all if you choose not to :) (hide spoiler)]

@Julane - I see your point, it was just the only thing I could come up with at the moment XD. So it's more temporary. But, thanks for your input! Some names stick, some names don't. I'm glad you like it though! I was a bit worried.

I'll post more tomorrow.

I kinda like, it, but I see what you mean Julane.......





Yes!

O.O

SOOOOO different from what I expected!!!!


Just one CC:

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Oh, and also, are ya doing the picture story thing with Alice and I? You can if ya want - in fact I think it would be really fun to have another person!! I've already started mine!:D Don't look, though! Not until we all are done!

@Ruby - oh thanks! I'll get that changed. As for the picture story, I want to make a few changes before I post it.

:D Mmkay!!


Ooooo more more more more!

:O



I love Matty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D

OMIGOSH THAT IS HORRIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oooooooooooooooooooooooooo

:D This is so goooood!!!!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh more!!!!


oooo and for some CC:

'Which is fine, but after a while it looses it's charm.'

'loses' not 'looses'

Other than that - :D :D :D

Haha! Beautiful typos.

- I guess that's what happens when you write on your phone. XD

XD

MORE!!!!!!

Ooooo I love it so much!!!! This is a really good story!

Just a bit of helpful CC again! XD

'Matty lead her down to a smaller building where she opened the door.'

Instead of 'lead' 'led' is the correct spelling

aaaaaand

'...she explained how hard it is to enter into a craft you didn't inherit by birth, and told Gwendolyn about all the possibilities that lied for a wood carver...'

Instead of 'lied' 'lay' is the past tense


Other than that - MORE PLEASE MORE!!!!

Darn, I really need to start editing before I post. Oh the crimes of the first draft!! XD

XD

Oooooooooo loverly loverly loverly!

:O

(Hey guys! So I deleted parts of my story on here because it's doing better than I expected, and I just don't want anyone to steal it. So, I won't be posting anymore, but I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and I hope one day you will be able to read the entire thing -without those annoying grammar mishaps- but yeah. Thanks for your support and everything! You guys are amazing!)