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(view spoiler)[ When the rain falls down
I listen to all the sounds
Knowing I cried out
Stuck with living in the doubt
Wisdom is powerless
Mind being a complete mess
The tear part of my heart
Has poured into your soul
Leaving me to lose control
For when the rains storm strikes
Carries me to fight through the nights
Tossing and turning with my might
Still wondering where is my knight
But the rain storm still rumbles
No site of the sun breaking the crumbles
Wind is pushing me forward
Time telling me no more words to be spoken
And when the lighting bolt hits my core
Not even sure if I could risk it all
My small heart turning to save you
Cause the next bolt from the rain storm
Will be coming after to you
Did you leave me here alone
To burn in the ashes of memories
I thought you would hold me tight
Since you were right about my family
There would be no one to love this soul
Poor, and unwise my no choice
But to only give into you
I was wrong to look through your eyes
Never saw those black storm skies
Hidden behind mask of shame and power
Rejected your offer to run away
Then you left in alone in dark to stay
For the storm was rising up
And the sun got taken away from me
All in all the storm I had to watch out
Was the storm starring back at me (hide spoiler)]

Marvelous

Thank you!

Wow, I have to say, this is probably my favorite out of all of them! You have some really good lines in there!

Thank you, that means a lot!