Language & Grammar discussion

The new issue of Shot Glass Journal is out, with two of my poems, Orange Being Done, and Too Late. Here's the link. Click on page 2 for the second poem.
http://www.musepiepress.com/shotglass...

Very nice! "Unfinished" on p. 2 is powerful stuff in a small package. Nice work!

Thanks, Ken.

Oh! Short and to the point.

A thumbtack not a spear?

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Ruth wrote: "?"

I was saying the poems are short but telling and precise.

Carol wrote: "Ruth wrote: "?"

I was saying the poems are short but telling and precise."

I understood you, Carol. The question mark was for Doug. But now I realize what he meant.

Pin the tail on the elephant.

poignant