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Annabelle

Full Name: Annabelle Mary Thom
Gender: Female
Blood: Half-blood
Age: 11
– Birthday: Febuary 21
Appearance:
– Height: 4'2"
– Build: Fairly skinny; lone legs; short torso
– Hair: Blonde; naturally curly; cut just before her shoulders
– Eyes: Light grey
– Vocal Qualities: High
Persona (External): Artsy; smart; quick-witted; rebellious; sarcastic; mischievous
Personal History: Annabelle was born in London to a young couple. Her mom died during childbirth and never told Annabelle's dad that she was a witch. Annabelle and her father lived in the center of London in a small apartment. Annabelle's father was a teaches chemistry at a local high school and young Annabelle loved to play with him. As a child Annabelle was known to talk back when people, like teachers or other adults, disrespected her because of her age and she never was one to follow the rules. Due to her mouth she got kicked out of three schools before she was even ten. Her father never cared though, he had quite the rebellious streak himself when he was young. Despite her rebellious streak Annabelle is a very caring girl and it shows in her artwork. Ever since she was young Annabelle has wanted to be an Artist. Annabelle does not have a lot of friends, but she met her two best friends, Daniel and Nicholas, when she was six and they have been pulling pranks together ever since. Annabelle and her father were very surprised when she received her letter, but they were happy to learn more about the wizarding world that Annabelle's mother had come from.
Family: Michael Wayne Thom (father; 34; Muggle); Danielle Mary Thom (mother; 33; deceased [22]; Muggle-born; former Ravenclaw)


Cat

Name: Flame
Gender: Male
Age: 2
Appearance:
Description: Flame is a bright orange cat whose name comes from his color. He has green eyes and is as mischievous as his owner.


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Build: a) The s of "Skinny" should not be capitalized.
b) Commas should be semicolons.

Hair: The s of "Skinny" should not be capitalized.

Eyes: The g of "Grey" should not be capitalized.

Persona (External): The a of "artsy" should be capitalized.

Personal History: a) child birth » childbirth
b) Annabelle's father was a taught chemistry at a local high school and young Annabelle loved to play with him. » wording
c) Did they stop doing certain things (like does her dad no longer teach chemistry) or are those things still going?
d) As a child Annabelle was known to talk back when people disrespected her and she never was one to follow the rules. | When people disrespected her...? Who? What?
e) You're telling us a lot about her personality. We don't want that, we don't care. Big events in her life. That's what matters.

Family: When did her mother die? Careful with the ages.

Age (Pet): Pick an age, don't be getting too complicated on me.

better?

Yep! There are a few more things but you are welcome to start a topic for her in Ollivanders in the meantime. :)

Personal History: Please spell out 3, 10, and 6.

Family: Please list the mother's little piece as (mother; 33; deceased [22]; Muggle-born; former Ravenclaw)

Age (pet): Please just list "2".

Ok thanks

Thank you! She's looking great. :)