Struggling Writers discussion

Hello there. I'm not entirely sure if there's an exact folder threads like this are supposed to go so I'll just post it here for now. Anyway, I'm looking for feedback on the first six chapters of my novel. Here's a little information on it:

Title: Kenji and Yuki: A Japanese Tale

Genre: Coming of Age, Young Adult, Romance, Fiction

Setting: Late 2016 in Japan

Target Audience(s): Western Young Adults and Adults

Blurb: Meet Yuki Sakamoto, an easily distracted sixteen year old girl who has been living in Shinjuku Japan ever since she left her Aunt Chizuko’s place in Nagoya six months prior. One night, she discovers a shocking secret in the abandoned apartment she’s currently staying at and reluctantly decides to leave the next day, as she has nowhere else to go for the night. As she spends time in different parts of Japan, such as Shinjuku, Ginza, and Denenchofu, she’ll have more misadventures than she can possibly imagine!

If you're interested in giving feedback on my chapters, let me know in the comments below and I will send you a PM that'll give you more details about it. In your reply to the PM (not in the comments), please include your email address so I know where to send the chapters.

Thank you and have a nice day!

would love to discuss this with you and perhaps have a favor for you in return.

Hi Hailey! Charmed by your story's blurb already! I'm not sure if I can committ to 6 chapters...but I would certainly like to review a few chapters of your work!