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(I'M QUOTING FROM THE MOVIES!)

Loki's History:

"Cast out from the frozen rock." (Odin. Thor 2.) When Loki was just a baby, Laufey (Evil FrostGiant. Thor 1.) abandoned him after birth. Because Loki was a small and weak baby. So Laufey abandoned him out of hatred. When Odin found Loki, he immediately went to Frigga. Frigga fell in love with her new son. So they adopted Loki into the family. During Loki's teen years, he often wonders why he wasn't like any other Asgardian. "Am I a monster?" (Loki. Thor 1.) "No. You're my son." (Odin. Thor 1.) "TELL ME!" (Loki. Thor 1.)

As years went by, Loki tried to prove himself worthy again. But he failed that attempt and was put into the dungeon. "We are not gods. We born. We live. We die. Just as humans do." (Odin. Thor 2.) Loki was still not understanding. "IT'S MY BIRTHRIGHT!" (Loki. Thor 2.) "YOUR BIRTHRIGHT! Was to die as an child. Cast out from the frozen rock." (Odin. Thor 2.) Loki was now thinking on his behaviors. As weeks went by, Loki. (SPOILERS: Loki faked his death in Thor 2.)

LOKI RETHINKING:
Loki was in his room rethinking on what he done in the past. He felt really stupid and feeling like a fool. Loki looked at the forest. (Loki: Am I a monster? Odin: No. You're my son. Loki: TELL ME!) Loki was now feeling really guilty for his foolish behavior. (Thor: I wish I could trust you.) Loki clenched his fists for being such a jerk towards his family. (Frigga: Loki. Please. Don't make things worst.) Loki couldn't take it anymore.

Loki was remembering when he joined the Chitari. ("He holds the scepter, has great knowledge." Chitari.) Loki felt like he was a nobody. Loki started thinking about Thor, Sif, and the Warriors said. ("Betray and I'll kill you.") The deep flashback thoughts made Loki think more of his foolish actions.

WARNING: HALLOWEEN THEME. CHARACTER DEATH. HAUNTINGS.

It was after Halloween and Stark Tower still haunted me(LOKI), Bucky Barnes, my brother Thor, and the Avengers. Something killed Nick Fury. A murderer still haunted us and was trying to destroy us. Being a new Avenger, this was haunting for all of us, but we had to stop the killer or the killer will kill us. I still can hear the screams since Halloween when we thought it was a joke of Nick Fury was killed, but no. It wasn't a joke. It was living in a nightmare for real. My thoughts were racing on who could've done this. It went from Thanos to the Chitari to the Dark Elves to maybe the haunting ghost of Phil Coulson. If only some of the Avengers would quit saying, "IT'S THE END OF THE WORLD! WE'RE HAUNTED AND DOOMED!" Which that was very annoying. Suddenly, we all heard glass shattering and ghostly screams coming near us. My heart began racing. "Is this end of us?" I asked in my mind.


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(More Coming Soon.)


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(With some new characters.)


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Name: Loki Odinson. (Real Last Name: Laufeyson.)
Age: 24
Birthday: Unknown.

Looks: See Photo and Gif.

Asgardian:

image: description

http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mcs1bu...


Jotun:

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http://24.media.tumblr.com/5fb06323be...

Outfit: His Usuals.

Family:
Real Father: Laufey. (Abandoned Loki when Loki was a newborn)
Real Mother: Unknown.

Adoptive Father: Odin.
Adoptive Mother: Frigga.
Adoptive Sibling: Thor-brother.

Weapons: Knives, Scepter, and Dagger.

History: "Cast out from the frozen rock." (Odin. Thor 2.) When Loki was just a baby, Laufey (Evil FrostGiant. Thor 1.) abandoned him after birth. Because Loki was a small and weak baby. So Laufey abandoned him out of hatred. When Odin found Loki, he immediately went to Frigga. Frigga fell in love with her new son. So they adopted Loki into the family. During Loki's teen years, he often wonders why he wasn't like any other Asgardian. "Am I a monster?" (Loki. Thor 1.) "No. You're my son." (Odin. Thor 1.) "TELL ME!" (Loki. Thor 1.)

As years went by, Loki tried to prove himself worthy again. But he failed that attempt and was put into the dungeon. "We are not gods. We born. We live. We die. Just as humans do." (Odin. Thor 2.) Loki was still not understanding. "IT'S MY BIRTHRIGHT!" (Loki. Thor 2.) "YOUR BIRTHRIGHT! Was to die as an child. Cast out from the frozen rock." (Odin. Thor 2.) Loki was now thinking on his behaviors. As weeks went by, Loki. (SPOILERS: Loki faked his death in Thor 2.)


What He Remembers From His Past: Loki was rethinking on what he done in the past. He felt really stupid and feeling like a fool. Loki looked at the forest. (Loki: Am I a monster? Odin: No. You're my son. Loki: TELL ME!) Loki was now feeling really guilty for his foolish behavior. (Thor: I wish I could trust you.) Loki clenched his fists for being such a jerk towards his family. (Frigga: Loki. Please. Don't make things worst.) Loki couldn't take it anymore.

Loki was remembering when he joined the Chitari. ("He holds the scepter, has great knowledge." Chitari.) Loki felt like he was a nobody. Loki started thinking about Thor, Sif, and the Warriors said. ("Betray and I'll kill you.") The deep flashback thoughts made Loki think more of his foolish actions.


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I SERIOUSLY WANT TO SQUISH HUG LOKI VERY TIGHTLY.


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

I cried in this part while watching it on YouTube
a month ago. I was saying in my mind, "NO! LOKI!
DON'T DIE!"

When I saw the ending of Thor 2, Loki was back to
his normal self. After Thor left the room. I was speechless.
I was saying in my mind, "Loki. I thought. You. What?
How? Why?" I almost fainted.

I was sad when Loki was in the chains, in the dungeon.
He was all alone with nothing to do. Other than, reading books.

In the middle of the movie, Loki was being nice. He saved
Jane Foster more than a few times. He let the dark-elf
stab him. That made me cry in that part.

At the end of the movie, when Thor left the room,
Loki was back to his normal self. I was shocked on
that part.



What my avatar said, "Sometimes at night, I'll pretend that Loki's holding me.
I would love more than to fall asleep to the beating of his heart. As I cuddled
up next to him."


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DARK ELVES AND THE CHITAURI STARTS SHOOTING UP THE WALLS AND CEILINGS. THE FROSTGAINTS STARTS DESTORYING THE FLOORS. THE AVENGERS AND THE ASGARDIANS JOINS IN THE TORTUREMENT FUN. THANOS AND THE OTHER HELPS DESTROY THE WHOLE PLACE. ULTRON STARTS THINGS ON FIRE.

(GUNS SHOTS)
(HULK SMASHS)
(CHITAURI RUNNING THINGS OVER)
(YELLING)
(SCREAMING FOR MERCY)
(SHOUTING ORDERS)
(FLAMES)
(ICE)
(WAR)

THIS MEANS WAR.


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