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message 1: by ✯ Nikki ✯, You screw me, I screw you back. I'm a lady like that. (new)

✯ Nikki ✯ | 8711 comments Mod
So I've started writing poetry. Something that I've never done before but now I just get random ideas and boom! Poem. I hate poetry... For the most part... So this doesn't make sense. But it's happening. So I'm gonna post it here.


message 2: by ✯ Nikki ✯, You screw me, I screw you back. I'm a lady like that. (new)

✯ Nikki ✯ | 8711 comments Mod
This is under major construction...



Falling.

Falling in a good way.

Falling in a bad way

Falling in every way you can imagine.

Falling in love

Falling hard too

Yes it's true, I'm falling

Falling drives me mad

Falling keeps me sane

Falling hurts horribly

Falling is beautiful

Falling keeps me on my toes

Falling makes me look forward to my day

Yes it's true, I'm falling.

Falling makes me cry.

Falling makes me smile.

Falling is the worst thing I've ever done.

Falling is the best decision I've made yet.

Falling is dark.

Falling is magical.

Yes, it's true I'm falling.


message 4: by ✯ Nikki ✯, You screw me, I screw you back. I'm a lady like that. (new)

✯ Nikki ✯ | 8711 comments Mod
Thanks. ^.^


Loki ~ If you can dream it, you can do it (lokithegr8) | 1161 comments It's all quirky and deep and kinda sad. PERFECTO


message 6: by ✯ Nikki ✯, You screw me, I screw you back. I'm a lady like that. (new)

✯ Nikki ✯ | 8711 comments Mod
XD thanks I think. Quirky, deep, and sad? I'll take it.


Loki ~ If you can dream it, you can do it (lokithegr8) | 1161 comments Yes. I got a question though. How can you create this amazeball and hate poetry?


message 8: by ✯ Nikki ✯, You screw me, I screw you back. I'm a lady like that. (new)

✯ Nikki ✯ | 8711 comments Mod
I don't know. It just randomly comes to me I guess. It's a lot like stories that come to me and sounds amazing but I lose interest in.


Loki ~ If you can dream it, you can do it (lokithegr8) | 1161 comments Yeah that's how I get. Or I get this idea and I'm like "yeah that's awesome" and I never write it.


message 10: by ✯ Nikki ✯, You screw me, I screw you back. I'm a lady like that. (new)

✯ Nikki ✯ | 8711 comments Mod
For me I just wish I could transport every idea in my head into an already written book because I'm too lazy to physically write because I'm one of those people that try to put hidden meanings and all sorts of things in my stories.


message 12: by Lara (new)

Lara Kowalcyk | 1 comments I actually have started writing poetry but I'm really bad at it. You're really good though.❤️❤️


message 13: by Talia (new)

Talia (talia_kennedy_) You're so good!! Much better than me!


message 14: by ✯ Nikki ✯, You screw me, I screw you back. I'm a lady like that. (new)

✯ Nikki ✯ | 8711 comments Mod
Oh.. Thanks guys :) I had good inspiration :P


message 15: by ~Madasen~ (new)

~Madasen~ (madasen) | 647 comments Good for you Nikki! I suck at poetry


message 16: by ✯ Nikki ✯, You screw me, I screw you back. I'm a lady like that. (new)

✯ Nikki ✯ | 8711 comments Mod
Oh I'm awful at it... If someone told me to sit and write a poem it would be something along the lines of

Cats sit on mats
I like hats
I'm gonna take a nap


message 17: by ✯ Nikki ✯, You screw me, I screw you back. I'm a lady like that. (new)

✯ Nikki ✯ | 8711 comments Mod
I'm dying inside
Because I realized I can't hide
The obsession
And rejection
A game I can't play
When it's hard to live day to day

Save me from me
Make me free
From the insults
I need some results
Otherwise I'll lose
And I'll no longer have the blues


Loki ~ If you can dream it, you can do it (lokithegr8) | 1161 comments That sounds like lyrics.


message 19: by ✯ Nikki ✯, You screw me, I screw you back. I'm a lady like that. (new)

✯ Nikki ✯ | 8711 comments Mod
I took the obsession and rejection part from a song. Sort of. Just those words.


message 21: by ✯ Nikki ✯, You screw me, I screw you back. I'm a lady like that. (new)

✯ Nikki ✯ | 8711 comments Mod
It's never going to be mine,
Just a dream lost in time.
The hours I've spent studying and reading,
Have just left me broken down and weeping.
The only thing I ever wanted is gone,
Not thanks to my wit but my brawn.
Lost by insecurity,
Not saved by my maturity.


message 22: by Svetlana (new)

Svetlana (tfiostumblrgirl) | 96 comments Your poems are really good!
I like writing in general, mostly stories, but I write poetry whenever I just have an emotion or something that can't really be a story


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