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message 1: by Erin (new)

Erin Continue here.


message 2: by Erin (new)

Erin (Just to recap, they are in the car and Clara just like violently pitched forward and grabbed her head with no explanation)


message 3: by Erin (new)

Erin ((No from the foot thing))


message 4: by Erin (new)

Erin ((Like when. I burned off the cast))


message 5: by Erin (new)

Erin She gasped. Her head felt like it was burning up inside. She felt someone pulling her back and she fell back against something. Her world faded to black.


message 6: by Erin (new)

Erin Her world was still black.


message 7: by Erin (new)

Erin Wait I thought we were in the car?


message 8: by Erin (new)

Erin Clara could see vague colours but mostly black. Her head was pounding, worse pain then she’d felt in her entire life. Her heart felt like it was going to explode. Suddenly she couldn’t breathe. Her heartbeat stopped and she started dying. She was crying in fear and pain.


message 9: by Erin (new)

Erin Clara felt a searing light pulling her out, but she had heard that before. She wouldn’t listen. She fell back. Deeper. Into the pool of black.

((I gtg))


message 10: by Mackenzie :) (new)

Mackenzie :) (book_girl_777) Melanie was sleeping in the car until she heard a scream them she rushed or of the car and ran to see what was going on." What happened!?"


message 11: by #Savagestorm, CHB head quest mod (MR. D) (new)

#Savagestorm (queen_miracle) | 223 comments Mod
((Wait. Where do I come in?))


message 12: by Erin (new)

Erin Clara was aware of only one thing. She was dying. She could feel herself spiralling down. Down to where she did not know. Then all of a sudden something slammed into her. And suddenly she could breathe again. Now she was floating up, up past the clouds and into Olympus once again. She saw Athena towering over her, glaring at her. “YOU HAVE WASTED TOO MUCH TIME ALREADY” Athena boomed. “I HAVE TOLD YOUR FREINDS TO CONTINUE ON THE QUEST, HOWEVER YIU WILL NEED TIME TO HEAL. YOUR POWERS ARE NOT YOURS TO CONTROL YET, BUT YOU WILL LEARN IN TIME WHEN AND WHERE TO USE THEM. NOW GO” and Athena disappeared. Clara fell into a dreamless sleep


message 13: by Erin (new)

Erin Clara could feel rumbling and a low monotone voice speaking. She separately tried to wake up, but it hurt so much. She whimpered in distres. Finally with one last pull she opened her eyes just in time to hear Athena say that she couldn’t go. ‘I’m going’ Clara muttered. ‘ and you can’t stop me’ with that she fell back and her eyes fluttered closed again.


message 14: by Mackenzie :) (new)

Mackenzie :) (book_girl_777) "Aw man, I just got out of the car thing we rode in. Well, I'm going back to sleep," Mel says under her breath.


message 15: by Erin (new)

Erin ((Lmho))


message 16: by Erin (new)

Erin ((Athena should leave, Clara needs to heal on her own with no help. It won’t take the long tho, like a day))


message 17: by Erin (new)

Erin ((So what now?? They should get ambushed in the car))


message 18: by Erin (new)

Erin ((Clara is 12))


message 19: by Erin (new)

Erin ((But almost 13))


message 20: by Erin (new)

Erin ((Ooh smh. I’m 14))


message 21: by Erin (new)

Erin ((Idk. Just pretend they got in the car lol))


message 22: by Disney_World (new)

Disney_World ((Nice. That’s definitely the reason why big groups aren’t that good.))


message 23: by Erin (new)

Erin ((Yea))


message 24: by Disney_World (new)

Disney_World ((It always turns out a mess with someone getting mad because you did a “important part’ without them.))


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

(Yeah)


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

(Lol, right?)


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

(;-;)


message 28: by Erin (new)

Erin Anyways, we’re driving


message 29: by Erin (new)

Erin ((Hold up. Who’s Naomi?))


message 30: by Erin (new)

Erin ((Kk))


message 31: by Erin (new)

Erin Clara knew she had to wake up. She was missing so much. She pulled herself back to consciousness. She opened her eyes, and momentarily froze in terror until she realized where she was. ((Imma make her have anxiety btw)) When she realized she was in the car, she relaxed and sat up. She immediately wished she hadn’t though, and fell back against against the seat. Her head felt like it was splitting open, and she groaned


message 32: by Erin (new)

Erin ‘I’m good’ she said shakily. ‘I don’t really want to get out anyways’ her head hurt worse then anything she had ever experienced, and she was trying so hard not to cry, or show that it hurt. She turned away from Forthenco and brought her knees up to her chin


message 33: by Erin (new)

Erin ‘I honestly don’t care’ Clara could feel tears coming to her eyes. ‘And don’t tell me some sob story because I’ve had my own share of bad things’. Tears were flowing down her face now. Not only from the pain but from past memories.


message 34: by Erin (new)

Erin ‘No. Not exactly. But I’ve had....controlling parents, and I’ve watched my younger sister die. I’ve also been left to die.’ So ya, I’ve had my fair share of horrible events


message 35: by Erin (new)

Erin ‘And that’s not even the worst of it’


message 36: by Erin (new)

Erin Clara opened her mouth. ‘You think that’s bad! You wimp, you are so ugh!’ She slammed the door closed,locking out the AI and cried


message 37: by Erin (new)

Erin ‘Go away’ Clara yelled.


message 38: by Erin (new)

Erin Clara went quiet, although the tears still fell down her cheeks. ‘I’ll take that into consideration’ she said quietly. Then she put her hands to her head and wept silently


message 39: by Erin (new)

Erin ((Great plot there btw))


message 40: by Erin (new)

Erin ((Also gross. But mainly interesting. Wait. Can the Greek gods like manipulate stuff, and make the same things happen to Clara as Naomi for like punishment or something? I feel like I should make this into a book lol))


message 41: by Mackenzie :) (new)

Mackenzie :) (book_girl_777) ((I'm really sorry. I had the day to spend with my family before I went back to school))
Melanie seen Clara crying and ran straight to her. "Clara are you alright?"


message 42: by #Savagestorm, CHB head quest mod (MR. D) (new)

#Savagestorm (queen_miracle) | 223 comments Mod
Sage had already gotten into the car. He had renewed respect for Forthenco now. Wow. That dude was 𝒜𝓂𝒶𝓏𝒾𝓃𝑔. No kidding.


message 43: by #Savagestorm, CHB head quest mod (MR. D) (new)

#Savagestorm (queen_miracle) | 223 comments Mod
Then Sage turned to Mel. He had always liked her optimism, and she was handling the situation pretty well.


message 44: by #Savagestorm, CHB head quest mod (MR. D) (new)

#Savagestorm (queen_miracle) | 223 comments Mod
((Did I mess up? I feel like missed most of the story line.))


message 45: by Erin (new)

Erin ((Idk. Claras in the car y’all r outside))


message 46: by Erin (new)

Erin Clara forced herself to stop crying as people came over, but her head still hurt and she was slightly dizzy. Actually, she was very dizzy.


message 47: by Erin (new)

Erin She was shaking, but she didn’t know what was happening to her.


message 48: by Erin (new)

Erin She fell back against the seat. She could hear some one calling her name. All she wanted to know was “why me?”


message 49: by Erin (new)

Erin ((Y’all abandon Clara woooooowww))

((Jk lol. She’s not dying. Imma make it a whole thing. Just wait))


message 50: by Erin (new)

Erin I’m feeling fine’ her voice shaking.


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