Beta Reading Group for Marita A. Hansen discussion

Here's the page for Chapter 4 of The Cheerleader, and it's from Brooke's point of view. My editor thought Brooke was a crazy b*tch in The Cheat. Well... you'll see a whole different level of crazy in The Cheerleader! Brooke is definitely a bunny boiler.

Chapter 3 was great finally Reilly taking control of what he wants. Can’t wait for chapter four. A hope Reilly continues to get braver and take what he wants. Come on Reilly and Lucy!!! X

Emma carruthers wrote: "Chapter 3 was great finally Reilly taking control of what he wants. Can’t wait for chapter four. A hope Reilly continues to get braver and take what he wants. Come on Reilly and Lucy!!! X"

Thanks, Emma :)

I'm sorry that I haven't sent this chapter out yet, I've been a bit busy over the last week, along with a touch unwell, so haven't had much time to work on it, but it's almost finished now. Hopefully I'll be able to send it out in the next day or two.

Hope you feel better soon xx

Emma carruthers wrote: "Hope you feel better soon xx"

Thanks, Emma :) I've sent you chapter 4.

hey, so sorry I'm late but I don't have the wifi on in my kindle so I just received the chapter 4 and it was eefing amazing.

It was very interesting to go into Brooke's crazy mind and understand that in the middle of it all she really loves Riley.
Yes, she is perversely evil but good not all people are great.
I look forward to the next chapters and will be wifi enabled this weekend so I don't miss anything.

Savannah wrote: "hey, so sorry I'm late but I don't have the wifi on in my kindle so I just received the chapter 4 and it was eefing amazing.

It was very interesting to go into Brooke's crazy mind and understand ..."

Cool, glad you liked it :)