Writing discussion

Hi everyone

might need some work but here os what i have so far

Thud, thud, thud....
"Alexa!" The voice of my mom boomed through the other side of the bedroom door.
I slowly open my eyes really why can't she let me sleep just five more minutes, that's all I ask.
I roll over about to close my eyes until the settle on my my digital clock...8:30am...
fuck...
I jump out of bed and begin to dig though my draws grabbing the first part of dark trousers and long sleeved top I could find and dashed into the bathroom.
I quickly use the facilities, have a wash, bush my teeth, put my clothes. Pulling my auburn hair into a messy bun and I head out the bedroom door to go downstairs.
As I bounce down the stairs I see my 17 year old brother purched on the back of the sofa
"About time you get up, shrimp" Stuart teased.
Scowling I stick my tongue out at him... That stupid name. One of these days...
"Enough you two! We are all late as it is " mom shouted as she came into view from the kitchen. She walked past us opening the door holding it ajar "Get in the car now!".
"Yes mom" , both me and stuart say at the same time as we walked through the door.