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message 1: by Maddie (new)

Maddie (mysteria02) | 133 comments Hey guys, I thought for this competition since it is my first one, we would do beginnings. So any song about beginnings. It will start today and end February 24th. Have fun!


message 2: by Lana, Co-Owner: Lyricist Cookies Sunshine <3 (last edited Feb 18, 2020 07:23AM) (new)

Lana (ohmylily) | 298 comments Mod
Oooh, fantastic idea Maddie ^-^
This'll be great. *runs to my room to get 10 pounds of notebooks*


message 3: by Maddie (new)

Maddie (mysteria02) | 133 comments Thanks!


message 4: by Laura-Lee (new)

Laura-Lee (lauraleewashere) | 92 comments Unfortunately, I just received a message today (Feb. 26th) to tell me about this competition. which is 2 days after it's over. I'm not sure why it took so long for the message to get to me. (I have been having some technical problems at Goodreads.) Oh well, maybe I'll get into the next one.
Just a comment so you know that I didn't purposely not enter. I'm glad to see things are still progressing and I'm looking forward to when the song (from the first cycle of contests) is completed and we hopefully get to hear it.
LL


message 5: by Maddie (new)

Maddie (mysteria02) | 133 comments We extended the competition until monday, because I didn't send out the message to everyone. (I was sick, so). Anyway, It ends this monday. I would love to see a song you wrote.


message 6: by Laura-Lee (new)

Laura-Lee (lauraleewashere) | 92 comments Oops! I opened my big mouth again. But message received. LL


message 7: by Abbie (new)

Abbie (flying_high) Man I wish I had finished mine sooner I had one all lined up😩😩


message 8: by Maddie (new)

Maddie (mysteria02) | 133 comments You still have until Monday, Annie. if you still want to submit a song into the competition.


message 9: by Laura-Lee (new)

Laura-Lee (lauraleewashere) | 92 comments with my tablet busted and OFFLINE. I figured off the hook too. But at 3:00 am God hit me with my "Beginnings" song. So with some jury rigging of an old device and a LOT of typing on an ancient keyboard, all to bring you ...

FROM BEGINNING TO END

He began my faith and He will perfect it.
Each mistake I make, He will correct it.
He's the first to the last
The fresh morning dew
At the end of each day
His Word is still true.

When I take a new step He will commend it.
When my heart is in pieces His love will mend it.
He's the first to the last
The fresh morning dew
At the end of each day
His Word is still true

My sins are forgiven If I confess them
He becomes "more", I become "less than"
He's the first to the last
The fresh morning dew
At the end of each day
His Word is still true

BRIDGE:
We started this journey together so why do I fear?
In all of my pain and my sorrow you have been near.
You speak words of truth and I can still hear.
A Light to my path that you will make clear. (crescendo)

He's my light in the window all through the night
Behold a new day. Mercy bursts in my sight.
He's the first to the last
The fresh morning dew
At the end of ALL days
He makes all things new.

by Laura-Lee

PS. This may not be appropriate, but I want to dedicate this to Maddie. It was important that I enter your first competition so you know I'm behind you and think you will be great as our new Moderator. LL


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