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What Did They Say Competition #1! This was something new on the top of my head that I thought we could try! I hope it all makes sense. Enjoy! Perhaps next time it won't be as dark. :P

1. Same rules throughout the group matter here too.

2. Don't turn this into a story; please only a few sentences in response or unfortunately it won't count.

3. Contest starts NOW (2/20/20) and will end in one week (2/27/20).

4. You must reply to the prompt in a realistic way--nothing totally random that has nothing to do with the prompt. It needs to be a dialogue response!

© There will be no stealing of anyone's stories/work. We should all be mature enough to respect that if we are entering a contest. ©



Here is your prompt:
The man stepped towards me, old aging face decorated with sad lines. His clothes drooped just like his back as he stared sadly towards us.
"The problem is, child," he began, even though I was in my twenties and not at all a child anymore. "people take things for granted. Especially the earth we live on. But...then come along evil creatures, creatures who say they are human, and perhaps they are, but no longer act like the man walking down the street or the woman reading at the library." He shifted uncomfortably. "When these people come, they'll take you away. You won't be able to stop them. The earth won't be like you thought. In fact, it's not at all like anyone thinks."
I didn't understand his words. Nothing was making sense. I had just run about three miles to escape from the drones, and out of nowhere this man had stopped me, begging me to listen to his story and about how dangerous the earth was. The wars breaking out all over earth were surely trapping us against our wills.
"I've told you enough now, child," the old man sighed. "But most importantly, watch for the mist. The mist will choke you."
I frowned, opening my mouth to ask him a question. I said...

What did the character say to the old man? Feel free to think about whatever may be happening in this scene and supply a question!

Let me know if you have any questions. Please abide by the rules.

2. Don't turn this into a story; please only a few sentences in response or unfortunately it won't count.

3. Contest starts NOW (2/20/20) and will end in two weeks (2/27/20).

Here are my questions for YOU.
(I can't believe I'm going to say this but) Can you give us a general word amount so we know what you mean by only a few sentences?

Also, you said TWO weeks but the dates from the 20 - 27 is only ONE week. So which is it? How long do I have to be brilliant?

Thank you. Love LL

XD Oops I meant ONE week!! Thanks for catching that for me!!

Um...for the amount of words....maybe up to 150? Not more than that?

Thank you. LL

So far mine is the only entry. I'll probably still lose! :-)
I do hope someone else enters. It's just a few sentences. Why don't you try something that's just off the tip of your brain. Who knows what greatness will happen? Do you think it would help if it was extended for a day or so to allow people extra time?

Here's my entry.

THE ROPE

(I frowned, opening my mouth to ask him a question. I said …)


“Did you miss medication time at the Funny Farm, Pops?”

“Ah, arrogance. It’s something that I might tolerate, but will certainly not be met with understanding and patience by anyone else. But it is a good way for a young, arrogant fool to get killed.”

“Sorry. Guess I’m just trying to ignore what you said. I’ve known for quite a while now that things are way worse than we believe.
So, any advice for a ‘young, arrogant fool’?”

“Yes. Stop.”

“Stop what?”

“Stop being a young, arrogant fool. It can be accomplished. Especially if you have help.”

“But where on ‘Planet Hate and Chaos’ will I find help, Pops?”

“ A rope made of three strands can’t be easily broken.”

“Hey, I like that, Pops. You certainly have some smarts, even though you’re a physical wreck.”

“I’m not that smart either. I didn’t invent that saying about the rope, but I know it’s true. Are you game, Kiddo? You and me sticking together?”

“I’m with you, Pops. But where do we find the third strand for our rope?"

(view spoiler)[“He’s already here, Kiddo. He’s already here.” (hide spoiler)]


by Laura-Lee

Contest ends today! Get those entries in!!!! Or if anyone would like I can keep it open for longer if you want.

Thank you for your entry, Laura Lee!

Watch. I'll probably be the only Entry and STILL lose.

I have to admit, It was a bit difficult. But once I disciplined myself and forced myself to write something, what came out wasn't what I expected. I just really put myself in the situation and started with "what if I were in the young person's shoes and that guy had walked up to me and said all those strange things."

I don't mind waiting if anyone else wants to give it a shot. But if not, then, let us proceed with the next contest.
I had fun with this one and that's the most important thing. That Laura-Lee has fun. Please repeat that to yourselves every night before you go to sleep and first thing in the morning when you wake up. In fact, why don't you make it part of your prayers.
"Dear Lord. What can I do today that will help Laura-Lee have more fun?" He won't mind. He's helping me enjoy myself all the time.
Thank you, Jesus.

Love Laura-Lee

Good job, Laura Lee!!