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. (bestguy) sup


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. (bestguy) write your own story here!...people can continue it...or go to Story 2! and make their own.


message 3: by Booklife (new)

Booklife | 136 comments George was a lonely 15 year old and ever since he met the shadows they've been his only friends. His parents died in a tragic car accident last year, a little while before he met the shadows.


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. (bestguy) The shadows were a gand of darkness, now George lived with his grand parents.


message 5: by Erlyn (new)

Erlyn (18es01) | 128 comments Mod
Powers only one could contain.


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. (bestguy) Powers that could kill him painfully.


message 7: by Erlyn (new)

Erlyn (18es01) | 128 comments Mod
"only one person could take the power. One that could destroy or save the world." They whispered.


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. (bestguy) However, they hid a key that could open more power that anyone could imagine.


message 9: by Erlyn (new)

Erlyn (18es01) | 128 comments Mod
But the knowledge has been lost through them.


message 10: by Booklife (new)

Booklife | 136 comments George was on a hunt to find this mysterious key and unlock the grand powers. What he didn't know was that faith put its on little twist on his journey to find the key.


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. (bestguy) George would have to bring five friends to continue the journey, and lose five friend on the way.


message 12: by Erlyn (new)

Erlyn (18es01) | 128 comments Mod
He never knew that his loyalty, love, trust and faith would be tested through out his journey.


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. (bestguy) He brought his most trusted friends, Erlyn, Booklife, Erick, Max and Bob to die.


message 14: by Booklife (new)

Booklife | 136 comments The friends George brought with him didn't know they were just pawns in the game of death and that they weren't getting any mystical powers.


message 15: by Erlyn (new)

Erlyn (18es01) | 128 comments Mod
But considering their lives were really boring they would continue with George no matter what. I mean this is the adventure of a lifetime.


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. (bestguy) However, he knew he might die too.


message 17: by Booklife (new)

Booklife | 136 comments But George would stop for nothing to get the powers he most desired.


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. (bestguy) his dad's dad's dad's dad's dad's dad's grand dad's uncle who knew a friend gave him a half key, to open the chest, however, the other hlf is sealed inside a demon's lair.


message 19: by Booklife (new)

Booklife | 136 comments The only twist to this was that not only was the other half in the demon's lair, but it was inside the demon itself.


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. (bestguy) and the demon's body is one thousad digries hotter than the sun and more.


message 21: by Booklife (last edited Dec 19, 2014 06:02PM) (new)

Booklife | 136 comments "How will we kill the demon?" Booklife asked George.


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. (bestguy) George chuckled, "First you will have to...burn, but we will get the key soon enough." George said, with a evil grin.


message 23: by Erlyn (new)

Erlyn (18es01) | 128 comments Mod
Kyler, the most sensible of the five shook her head. "Maybe we should go about this more thoughtfully. I mean we don't even know what this demon is capable of. And you are going off the things that the ghosts are telling you. Don't you think that we should train and plan?"


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. (bestguy) George smriked, "Nah."


message 25: by Booklife (new)

Booklife | 136 comments Only if Kyler knew he was going to be the first to die and frankly George could care less about him.


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. (bestguy) George smacked booklife on the head, "shh...gimme water."


message 27: by Erlyn (new)

Erlyn (18es01) | 128 comments Mod
Booklife shook her head and hissed, "oh, no, you don't. Get your own. Besides you said to bring what we needed."


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. (bestguy) George suddenly got water and poured water all over Erlyn and booklife together.


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Then wolf shoved him in a pool


message 30: by . (new)

. (bestguy) George laughed after he got up. "Wolfy..." George smirked. "Okay, sword fight duel to the death. or, are you a chicken? Bwack? Bwack?" George laughed, unsheathing his sword, which also was enchanted by the cyclops to be light but makes hard strikes for the enemy, also if the owner wants it could shoot fire.


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

"wouldnt want to kill such a good friend"
(sorry forgot)


message 32: by Erlyn (new)

Erlyn (18es01) | 128 comments Mod
Erlyn stod up but only to be knocked down again.


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. (bestguy) George laughed at the sight and sheated his sword and sat down on a log. "You know, i am bored, right?"


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