Writer's Myriad discussion

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ok, i need help with my title

i have a story about a girl who becomes a knight and causes the death of her friends and family

I do, I do!

A story about a robot getting groceries for his owner on a city in the middle of the ocean. No idea what I could call it, but that's obviously why I need help.

That sounds like a funny story Baxter!!

I need help to, I'm not sure if my story should be called The Music Box or not...

What is your story about?

I like the name The Music Box. it sounds like something you'd want to at least pick up in a bookstore.

Well, it's about four friends who discover a music box, when opened, lets one see the magical world(I don't know what to name it) and they have to stop their school principal, who went over to the dark side, from destroying it.

i think the music box is a good name

Yeah, The Music Box has a nice ring to it. I mean, it makes me want to read the story.

ok thanks. have you read my story yet?

Yeah,

I'm thinking of changing Dragoons to Shadow Walk for something..

I like Dragoons. What's the story about?

Well Hannigan finds this world, but there's this war going on, and you can only survive if your in the shadows really, if your in the light, you can get caught.

The creatures she makes friends with are called Dragoons, it's rather confusing. It's in my writing, you should look at it.

kk, I'll check it out soon as I have the chance!

Okay.

Hmm...okay, I guess your right. Thanks.

Have you read Dragoons yet?

Thanks!

yeah,but see there are such things as dragoons, they're a branch of the military from the civil war and earlier

Oh really? lol, I just made it up when I was about..i dunno, ten, and I've started with that ever since, (yes, I have been writing this story for three years..maybe longer..)

Wow that is a long time! I haven't read it yet but will when I have the time

lol, i think it's cool

Hey guys, I need help with a title. For serious.

It's for a story about a pretty darn brutal murder in a mannequin factory. The entire thing takes place in the factory, and...yeah.

Right now it's called 'Beautiful', but that's just a tentative title.

is it a girl or boy that is murdered?

Yes, that would probably help.

Janeen-san wrote: "Wow that is a long time! I haven't read it yet but will when I have the time"

School you know *sigh*

Girl. You know what? I'll just post the description of her body. It's a pretty important part of the story.

"The body was distorted to a point where it no longer looked human. The skull was caved in, with the blood forming a perfect circle around her head. The only part of her head still intact was her mouth, which was smiling. Her arms were both twisted and snapped into impossible shapes. The left standing up and forming a triangle, a bone jetting out from the elbow, the right broken down and reaching to her knees, twisting like a snake. Both legs suffered the same treatment, with each flung into a different, unnatural, position. The most striking feature however, and the thing that I will never be able to forget, is the light. At 8:08, the sun rose and a column of light and color burst through the door. It made its way through the entire room, blinding all of us for a moment, and encased Susanne Thatcher in a brilliant display of blood and shadows."

Eww...lol.

Um... How about:

Distorted
Twisted Mind

I dunno..?

Dark Humor?

O.o♥Pudding♥o.O wrote: "Dark Humor?"

You know, I actually like the sound of it. But unfortunately it doesn't quite fit. At least not yet.

yeah, im just saying it because of her smile, if you kill more ppl and do the same smiley thing it could

Baxter wrote: "Girl. You know what? I'll just post the description of her body. It's a pretty important part of the story.

"The body was distorted to a point where it no longer looked human. The skull was ca..."

Yuck

Smiling Death?
Dagger in the Darkness?

Janeen-san wrote: "Baxter wrote: "Girl. You know what? I'll just post the description of her body. It's a pretty important part of the story.

"The body was distorted to a point where it no longer looked human. ..."

hey, i think it's kinda cool

It's good writing, I didn't mean to offend you Baxter. I said 'yuck' because the desription is very errie, that's all.

Janeen-san wrote: "It's good writing, I didn't mean to offend you Baxter. I said 'yuck' because the desription is very errie, that's all."

Me, offended? Ha, that could never happen. And I got what you meant.

By the way, there is no longer any smiling in the description. I'm writing the story for Creative Writing and I only have tomorrow to finish it. So I had to cut a bit out. You can read what I've got on my review topic thing here.

Ok!

i have my title trouble. my story tree of memories...fist had something to go with trees, but not really anymore, i think i need a new name, so if you've read my story tree of memories, could you help me please?

it's on my profile just read it pleases!

Emma₪Universal wrote: "i have my title trouble. my story tree of memories...fist had something to go with trees, but not really anymore, i think i need a new name, so if you've read my story tree of memories, could you h..."

Nooo!!!!I love that name!!!*sigh*

Okay..I guess I can work something out.

Lol..sorry I didn't help!!I'll think about it and tell you!!

Haha, no it's okay, I got the whole story idea after watching "Speak"

speak?

It's a movie, that was originally a book. This girl got...dare I say it...raped...and it's how she deals with it, it's actually good!

I think I've heard of it somewhere....

Lol, Speak..????

Oh...after she doesn't speak at all.

lol, I know.

Hmm, that's nice. I'm more of a cat person though, lol.

lol.