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OX?? SAGE AND OX? AN OX WILL TRAMPLE ME!

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XD Dang, I died laughing when I saw that.

I DIED WHILE READING YOUR POST! XD

CHARACTERS:


Ashe: City/Country - black and silver tod with orange-brown eyes

Here's a list of characters I've thought of.

Ashe: Male, black and silver fox with orange-brown eyes.


Adair: Female, bright red-orange fox with light amber eyes.


Reed: Male, dark gray-red fox with light brown eyes.

Do you like them?

Here's territory I've thought of.

Forest on the mountain behind a human village with a river:


Village at the foot of the mountain:


Beyond that, a grassland/moor that is very muddy and marshy:

Like that too?

AWESOME!!!

Ok, now about the story line...

Ok, so here’s the idea I had for my book “Call Me Wonder.” We don’t have to do it, it’s just an idea. We can also totally change it up if you want. Like have there be two foxes or change the genders or anything like that!

A small fox named “Princess” was a pet to a little boy named Henry. They lived out in the country and she could roam free, but she always stayed nearby. One day, she the family moved to the city and she got left behind. She decided to take a journey and track down her boy. On the way, she meets a lot of animals including and band of raccoons who christen her Wonder. Finally, the gang reaches the city. But how can they find one young boy in a city of millions? [[Then there is a lot of searching and other stuff]] She meets a city fox and he tries to convince her to stop looking. [[And then a bunch of other stuff happens]]. Finally, she finds Henry. They are overjoyed o see each other once again. But Henry cannot keep Wonder. The small apartment where they live won’t even allow pets much less a fox. Henry and his best friend ____ look for another solution. [[And then somehow they decide on the city zoo that is close by his house.]] Wonder is happy there. She still meets up with her friend the city fox and gets the love and attention from her keepers. The best thing of all, Henry comes to visit her every day. [[The end!]]

Woah! I didn’t realize how long that was!!!

That's a good idea! But instead of her being in a zoo and all of that, why doesn't she decide to just go into the wild? We can add more details and whatever. Everything is fine, but the ending like that? Maybe she goes to the wild with the city fox or whatever?

Ok!

We can also change anything else you want. This is just an idea I’ve had for a while.

Oop.

It's awesome! I LOVE IT! But maybe she realizes that she's not going to get a happy ending with they boy? I mean, not in the way she wants? She can still visit him and whatever! It was your idea, so if you wanna leave it and me stop being bossy, we can!

Nope! I don’t care! How about she sees Henry and knows that he has a good life and then she leaves the city with the other fox?

Yeah! That sounds amazing. Now why is it called "Call Me Wonder" again?

(By the way, look at the group's description. Dedicated to you!)

AWWWWWWW!

Yeah!

Ok, so I named it Call Me Wonder because at first, her name was Princess [[I was just trying to think of the girliest, worst name for a fox]]. When she meets up with some more animals, they say that her name has to go so they just call her fox or something. Then I was thinking that she would show up at another person’s house and beg for food.p and the person would say something like, “Aren’t you just a little wonder.” And then the name would stick!

Wow. I didn’t realize how dumb that sounded. We can make the title whatever!

XD No, it's fine! I like it, but if we can think of a new title, then sure! It wasn't stupid at all! Have you read Warriors? Warrior Cats?

No, sadly I haven’t.

OMIGOSH you piece of actual garbage!

NO NO, that was a joke, you piece of actual treasure! BUT PLEASE READ THEM! THEY'RE so amazing! SO is Foxcraft!

I KNOW! My parents are super overprotective so I don’t get to read many of those books...

Whattttt? Really? Strange. Do you wanna start? I mean, we are not gonna role-play, but we'll take turns making pieces of the story. Also, did you know a fox's tail is referred to as their brush?

E.g.: Me: Princess stalked out of the house, her brush flowing freely behind her. Her boy failed to return home today for their play session, and she was upset.

You: The boy went to a friend's house and therefore hadn't returned on the bus that afternoon.

(See what I mean?)

Did you know a group of foxes is called an earth? Yep! It’s basically like RPing, but with more detail and description. Like we’ll have to describe the surroundings a bit more. Do you wanna be Princess? I can be the city fox!

We can take turns using each character, we don't need to own any. Is that okay? I AM UTTERLY EXCITED!

Oh yeah... that would probably work a lot better! XD SO AM I!!!

Yeah, they're called a skulk, leash, or earth. What do you wanna use? Earth might be confusing, and leash may make people think that they're owned by people. Skulk means keep out of sight or hide, and that is what foxes do. What do you think?

Hm... not a leash. Either Skulk or Earth.

Oooo! What if we have a country fox and a city fox join her?! Then they all end up living somewhere new like the forest where they are meant to be? What do you think?

OH! SO SMART!

I like skulk. That's what most people know a group of foxes by.

Ok!

I’m just going to create a whole new topic for the story, this one is too full! XD

What should the title be?

Hey! I'll do a glossary so that people know what they things are.

Brush: A fox's furry tail.
Skulk: A group of foxes.
Brutes: What foxes who don't know what humans are really called call them.
City-fox: A fox who lives inside of a city, but not with brutes.
Country-fox: A fox who lives outside of a city, but not in a skulk.

{{Can I comment an idea here real quick}}

Cool!

Or we could name it something like “Finally Home” or something totally different like that?

Sure, Dag. I'm calling you that. No objections.

Fox, humans kill wild foxes are are very cruel, so foxes that are in the wild call them brutes, because that's what they are to them. Foxes in zoos and that live with them know they're called humans. Is brutes okay? I thought savages, but that's what Americans called Native Americans back then. It'd be confusing.

Idea: If there's three foxes, make a love triangle and then have the center point reject both of them.

Yeah, I think Brutes is good. Haha! What if they called them Beasts?! Ok, never mind. Not a good idea.

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DAG! REALLY?? We can do a love triangle..... BUT NO REJECTIONS TO BOTH! XD