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smile, WHAT DOES THE FOX SAY?!
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Mar 24, 2020 01:35PM

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I need help with my characters, they feel... Dull?

I might not be able to do it yet though because I've gotta go in less than 5 mins
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Sushie || "To gain your voice, you must forget about having it heard" -William Ginsberg
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Aggie
Josie
Addisyn
Sabrina
Funmilayo
Kristen
Ramneet
Violet
Oyindamola
Lydia
Demi
Olivia-Rose
Chantai
Jayden
Maheen
Cathy
Kulsuma
Emily
Aseya
Christy
Mireia
Cheryl
Alexa-Grace
Rishi
Areeba
Jamal
Esme-Grace
Saoirse
Callie-Rae
Aisling
Chenille
Alix
Lee
Raja
Yasin
Roisin
Kira
Zainab
Alexander
Arun
Ross
Eldrin
Albert
Tarathiel
Owain
Velma
Travis
Heather
Taylor
Kara
Harold
Morgan
Keaton
Valentina
Timothy
Maximus
Henry
Ismail
Evangeline
Inaya
Muhammad
Pola
Rufus
Sullivan
Ellis
Harley
Scott
Ariel
Maximilian
Syed
Nathaniel
Cole
Hamzah
Alfie
Yahya
Armaan
John
Ying
Luis
Moe
Suniya

I'm just tellin that those names r muslim names nd if u use them in story.. then u have to use a muslim pers..."
Okay, thanks for letting me know! Also, I don't think that that's necessarily true...especially if it's set in a different world, like a fantasy world, where the earthen ethnicities are not really present there. which is sort of how it is in the story I'm writing right now.
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Sushie || "To gain your voice, you must forget about having it heard" -William Ginsberg
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I'm just tellin that those names r muslim names nd if u use them in story.. then u have to use a muslim pers..."
Hm. Well I've read a few books with those names in them and none of them had Muslim personalities.
A really common old-fashioned name is Emma, Lucy is another one, Susan.
For men there's Wallace, Charles, Peter, Edmund, Reginald.
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just write down a bunch of words that describe what you want it to be, just any words. then take them and make a comprehensible description. (I do that for coming up with book idead)
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Sushie || "To gain your voice, you must forget about having it heard" -William Ginsberg
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This one is for fantasy names and you can find names for all sorts of creatures like elves, dwarves, etc. and names for cities, towns, countries. I believe you can find normal names as well but there's a lot of choices for what ethnicity the name should be from so it's sort of confusing. https://www.fantasynamegenerators.com/
![dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh)](https://images.gr-assets.com/users/1655308429p1/106560415.jpg)
there's one character in my book that I'm renaming
and I can't decide between the names Caliope and Ariah
![dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh)](https://images.gr-assets.com/users/1655308429p1/106560415.jpg)


You know when in books they say, "less than ___ circumstances"? Like, when something happens that is good or something goes well even though it was under "less than ___ circumstances"? I can't think of that word!!! It's driving me crazy, if anyone knows what word I'm talking about please answer! I currently have the word "adequate" in there but it just doesn't sound right! It's on the tip of my tongue, I keep remembering it for a second and then forgetting.

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Sushie || "To gain your voice, you must forget about having it heard" -William Ginsberg
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Like gathering all the stereotypical things and making it into one book.
Do you know any commonly used tropes in YA?
I already got this:
(I'll copy and paste it)

A Girl
Who is not like other girls (she’s special)?
She has Daddy Issues
Has a troubled past (preferably a death but an abusive mother will also do)
Doesn’t know she’s beautiful (a boy will have to tell her)
She’s so cool she stands up for people
Has Perfect hair and Captivating eyes (green or blue because no other eye colour exists)
But has a bland personality
A Boy
He’s a Bad boy with a troubled past
Always handsome and has special eyes (this is mentioned in every other sentence)
Pursues after girl even after she says no (because he can’t seem to get away from her captivating eyes)
He would be considered a stalker in any other situation but he’s way to handsome for that (plus it’s love)
Has perfectly messy hair
Rides a Harley and has a leather jacket (why wouldn’t he)
But has a bland personality
A Plot:
That’s so bad it’s almost non-existent
Very generic and predictable
Bad writing
Probably written by a teenage girl
Sentences like these:
Her eyes (insert random adjective)
His hair (insert random adjective)
I pull her close to me
The wind swept passed my hair
My heart was beating so fast
Gosh her hair smelt like flowers or anything else
My heart was breaking
Conclusion:
They’ll probably make a movie about this.