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He was having the dream again. He was on the dais with his sister. He was holding her shoulders and telling her to kiss him, to show the others that she was his. That person doing that was sick and evil. Jonathan wasn't him. Yet sometimes he felt like that person. Others told him that wasn't him but her could tell they didn't believe that either. Like when he would refer to that time or Valentine and everyone would go silent and act like he would kill then then and there. He knew that wanted him to be better and be a new person, want him to have a new life. But how could he if he couldn't remember his childhood. He didn't even have one. Not one to call his anyway. All he had were fragments of a life that wasn't his. His only memory as a child before everything went black was his mother crying because he had the eyes of a monster. He had no childhood. No memory or pictures of him walking for the first time. No memories of his mother caring for him when he was sick. No memories of a father teaching him to catch and throw a ball. Nothing, Nothing at all. He was expected to jump into this new life. Look to the unknown future when there was an unknow past. He had fragments of the life that the thing that took over his body had. That thing that called himself Sebastian. Memories of murder and torture. Of possession and demon things. All those memories were wicked and evil. None of them were really his. So why? Why try to have a new life? Why try when you didn't know if the people around you really did care and love you. He was close with his sister and his mother was slowly excepting him as she son. She didn't look at him the way she did Clary but how could she? He needed something. Some reason to begin a new life and forget about the past life his body lived. But he had nothing. He had no one to show him and help him. He was hopeless.
{OK so i wrote this on word so if its short im sorry. I'M working on more so please bare with me. Comment please, please, please! This chapters question is...Who do you ship in TMI?}
[[Can I ask what TMI means? To Much Information?]]
(The mortal instruments. That is what this is based off of)
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Chapter Two: Rose
"Ahhhhh!" Rose screamed as her best friend Levi scared her. He held his stomach and hunched over with laughter.
"Every freaking time." He laughed.
Rose crossed her arms and looked at him with a frown. "I'm not laughing." She said. He rolled his eyes and draped an arm over her shoulders.
"Relax Ro. What's got your panties in a wad."
Rose rolled her eyes and ignored his comment. They had been best friends since fifth grade. Rose was always bullied a lot for doing, well, nothing. She was quiet and shy and always kept her head down. People thought she was weird because she liked it that way, and she had no friends. It was a normal day for her the day she met Levi. Her back was once again pushed against the lockers and she was clutching her books to her chest. Three guys in sixth grade were beating up on her. Calling her a weirdo and a freak. They were about to knock her books out of her arms and pull her pigtails when Levi stepped in front of them. He was small am scrawny. His head was too big for his body, his clothes fit him weird, he had to wear these gigantic glasses that fit him funny. But he had a mouth. And he had words. And he knew how to use them. He gave them an insult so big and so mean that they stopped messing with her. And whenever they tried to mess with her, he didn't have to say a word. He just gave them a look and they would shut up and walk away. Since then, they have been inseparable. They grew up together and got close and closer. Their families did as well. But as they got older so did their bodies. Now, Levi was no longer that shy, too big for his body boy. He was buff and handsome. With his headful of curly brown hair, and his brown eyes, as well as his fit body, and high cheekbones. He became the talk of the school. The it boy. While rose stayed the same. Sure, she grew into her body. Sure, she was pretty. With her diva curled chestnut hair and her porcelain skin. Her rosy cheeks and her ocean blue eyes. She was pretty. Beautiful even. But she wasn't popular like Levi. Sure, she could have been. But she didn't want to be. She was fine with books and school and trig. She enjoyed going to the library on the weekends instead of partying. She was happy. But having a best friend who was the hottest guy in school, well that, that was hard. Looks from jealous girls followed her everywhere. Girls from every grade, age, shape and size where all in love with him.no matter how many times she told them they would never believe that they were just friends. Now, with his arm draped over her shoulder she was getting the same looks. It was obvious to Rose that Levi used her. Not in a bad way though. whenever girls were looking at him or trying to flirt, he would put his arm over her shoulders. Or walk closer to her, or even take her hand. She didn't mind it. She was used to it. they were now at her locker and Levi was going on about some football game on Friday. She was pulling away her books and getting out the ones she needed so she wasn't paying attention when Levi was asking her a question. It wasn't until he snapped his fingers that she realized it. "What?" she said startled. He smirked and shook his head. "I said, do you want to go to a party with me after the game on Friday." Rose laughed. Levi looked at her with raised eyebrows. She saw and stopped laughing. "Oh, you were serious." She shut her locker. "Your crazy. Why would I do that." They began to walk to the classroom.
"Oh, come on Ro. Come to celebrate our win."
She rolled her eyes. "You haven even won yet."
He clicked his tongue. "You know we will. Even if we don't.it will be fun."
They stopped in front of the classroom door. "Le, I have homework."
He groaned. "You always have homework. Pleeese." He gave her puppy dog eyes.
"No."
Bigger puppy eyes and a pouty lip.
"Noooo."
Even bigger.
A groan and sigh. "Fine."
He surprised her buy scooping her up into his arms, lifting her off the ground, and spinning her around. "You love me." He said when he put her down, his hands still holding her waist.
She blushed and stepped away. "Yeah yeah. Whatever."
He laughed, put hisarm over his shoulder and they walked into class.
((Chapter two. Comment, like, whatever. Thank you!!))
Chapter Two: Rose
"Ahhhhh!" Rose screamed as her best friend Levi scared her. He held his stomach and hunched over with laughter.
"Every freaking time." He laughed.
Rose crossed her arms and looked at him with a frown. "I'm not laughing." She said. He rolled his eyes and draped an arm over her shoulders.
"Relax Ro. What's got your panties in a wad."
Rose rolled her eyes and ignored his comment. They had been best friends since fifth grade. Rose was always bullied a lot for doing, well, nothing. She was quiet and shy and always kept her head down. People thought she was weird because she liked it that way, and she had no friends. It was a normal day for her the day she met Levi. Her back was once again pushed against the lockers and she was clutching her books to her chest. Three guys in sixth grade were beating up on her. Calling her a weirdo and a freak. They were about to knock her books out of her arms and pull her pigtails when Levi stepped in front of them. He was small am scrawny. His head was too big for his body, his clothes fit him weird, he had to wear these gigantic glasses that fit him funny. But he had a mouth. And he had words. And he knew how to use them. He gave them an insult so big and so mean that they stopped messing with her. And whenever they tried to mess with her, he didn't have to say a word. He just gave them a look and they would shut up and walk away. Since then, they have been inseparable. They grew up together and got close and closer. Their families did as well. But as they got older so did their bodies. Now, Levi was no longer that shy, too big for his body boy. He was buff and handsome. With his headful of curly brown hair, and his brown eyes, as well as his fit body, and high cheekbones. He became the talk of the school. The it boy. While rose stayed the same. Sure, she grew into her body. Sure, she was pretty. With her diva curled chestnut hair and her porcelain skin. Her rosy cheeks and her ocean blue eyes. She was pretty. Beautiful even. But she wasn't popular like Levi. Sure, she could have been. But she didn't want to be. She was fine with books and school and trig. She enjoyed going to the library on the weekends instead of partying. She was happy. But having a best friend who was the hottest guy in school, well that, that was hard. Looks from jealous girls followed her everywhere. Girls from every grade, age, shape and size where all in love with him.no matter how many times she told them they would never believe that they were just friends. Now, with his arm draped over her shoulder she was getting the same looks. It was obvious to Rose that Levi used her. Not in a bad way though. whenever girls were looking at him or trying to flirt, he would put his arm over her shoulders. Or walk closer to her, or even take her hand. She didn't mind it. She was used to it. they were now at her locker and Levi was going on about some football game on Friday. She was pulling away her books and getting out the ones she needed so she wasn't paying attention when Levi was asking her a question. It wasn't until he snapped his fingers that she realized it. "What?" she said startled. He smirked and shook his head. "I said, do you want to go to a party with me after the game on Friday." Rose laughed. Levi looked at her with raised eyebrows. She saw and stopped laughing. "Oh, you were serious." She shut her locker. "Your crazy. Why would I do that." They began to walk to the classroom.
"Oh, come on Ro. Come to celebrate our win."
She rolled her eyes. "You haven even won yet."
He clicked his tongue. "You know we will. Even if we don't.it will be fun."
They stopped in front of the classroom door. "Le, I have homework."
He groaned. "You always have homework. Pleeese." He gave her puppy dog eyes.
"No."
Bigger puppy eyes and a pouty lip.
"Noooo."
Even bigger.
A groan and sigh. "Fine."
He surprised her buy scooping her up into his arms, lifting her off the ground, and spinning her around. "You love me." He said when he put her down, his hands still holding her waist.
She blushed and stepped away. "Yeah yeah. Whatever."
He laughed, put hisarm over his shoulder and they walked into class.
((Chapter two. Comment, like, whatever. Thank you!!))
Other:This is my first story sosorry if the spelling is wrong or it runs together. Please feel free to comment and tell me what you think and what I could do to make it better.