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message 1: by It’s.Annie (new)

It’s.Annie (itsannieeee) | 24 comments Fairytale

This isn't one of the Prince falls in love with the princess fairy tale, this is one where the princess will either die or live and her love ones will die for her. She makes the choice of her own will her heart tell her to choice her love ones and death or to live? This princess has one name that everyone know to well it is:Mariel. Mariel is a princess who lives in the forest, she had been living there since she was small. She has many animal friends there and not many human come around much, she also is a great fighter and will fight for her loved ones. Know don't go thinking she is a boring girl who just been a princess for her whole life but no, this story has to start from when she was small, bad things happen to magical kids. If you don't like deadly things I advise you to not read this!


message 2: by em_panada (new)

em_panada OOOOOooooooo.... *squeals with delight* can't wait!!


message 3: by It’s.Annie (new)

It’s.Annie (itsannieeee) | 24 comments Thanks and I love your writing


message 4: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Thank you! I'm glad you like it! Even though I have a lot to learn! --- PS is this fairytale based on something? It doesn't have to be, I'm just curious.


message 5: by It’s.Annie (new)

It’s.Annie (itsannieeee) | 24 comments It's just something I made up,but i got help for thinking of this because of the movie little princess the bringing with the forest picture helped me.


message 6: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Ah! Okay I see where you're going! Those pictures are awesome! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your writing!


message 7: by It’s.Annie (new)

It’s.Annie (itsannieeee) | 24 comments Thanks


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It’s.Annie (itsannieeee) | 24 comments Nami
Nami is a pretty girl. She is also the descendent of a queen of the forest. She hadn't known this until her mother told her before she died. She also is supposed to marry a guy from a place, his name is Alejandro. She is scared of this guy, he hits girls and he has a bad temper. Nami decides she must do everything to keep herself and the forest safe so she decides to run away. This may not be the best idea but at least she is safe,but what she doesn't know is that Alejandro and her both are meant to be and he can sense where she is so he will find her all the time. She tried to run away 5 times he found her and almost killed her her,so is this time different?


message 9: by em_panada (last edited Jan 14, 2015 12:45PM) (new)

em_panada Interesting! I have some critiques if you want. :)


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