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{Name}

{Gender}

{Age}

{Rank}

{Clan}

{Personality}



{Appearance}



{Current Apprentice/Mentor}


{Trained Apprentices}


{Former Mentor}


{Mate/Crush}


{Kits}



{Family}


{History}

{Other}

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Name: Willowshine

Age: 22 moons

Gender: Female

Clan: Fireclan

Rank: Warrior

Personality: Funny, cheerful, does not give in easily, lovable, smart

Description: Willowshine is a dark/light brown European shorthair with emerald green eyes. She is very slim, quiet pawed, and blends into her surroundings.

Picture: https://d.gr-assets.com/users/1413392...

Mate/Crush: none

Kits: none

Family: Lilytail mom (open)
Thistlefoot dad (open)
Silvertail sister (open)
ShadeTail brother (open)

Other: She is a descendant of Firestar

:) Willowshine is Approved

YAY!

{Name} Sunray

{Gender} she-cat

{Age} 23 Moons

{Rank} warrior

{Clan} Fireclan

{Personality}
Warm.


{Appearance} http://www.wallpaperup.com/2753/White... (BUT WITH GOLDEN/YELLOW EYES)

fire red/gold eyes
white but also tabby.

{Current Apprentice/Mentor}
none

{Trained Apprentices}
none (open)

{Former Mentor}
Sharpwhisker (open)

{Mate/Crush}
none...yet

{Kits}
none...yet


{Family}
Mother (UNKNOWN) - IceGaze
Father (UUKNOWN) - FireGaze


{History} she has a sister in Iceclan, there twins but she had Ice/blue eyes. no-cat knows why they were parted.

{Other}...nope!

{Name} Silverstream

{Gender} She-cat

{Age} 23 moons

{Rank} Medicine Cat

{Clan} Fireclan

{Personality} Nice, likes kits, dreams of going to Starclan, likes to please, she will do anything for her clan mates.



{Appearance}

https://d.gr-assets.com/photos/141797...

{Current Apprentice/Mentor}
None yet

{Trained Apprentices}
None yet

{Former Mentor}
Swifttail (deceased)

{Mate/Crush}
Forbidden

{Kits}
Forbidden


{Family}
Mother: Foxtail (Open)
Father: Unknown
Siblings:
Blacktail Brother (Open)
Whitefur Sister (Open)

{History}
Silverstream was dropped off at the border. A patrol found her and brought her back to camp. Foxtail had just given birth to kits so she raised her as her own. Only the leader and Foxtail know that she's not Clan born.
{Other}
N/A

{Name} Ravenfeather

{Gender} she-cat

{Age} 43 moons

{Rank} deputy

{Clan} Fireclan

{Personality}
Ravenfeather is rather strong witted and bold. She knows what she wants after she makes up her mind. Ravenfeather can be very emotional at times, but is very good at clearing her mind to make important decisions. She's caring, charming, and bubbly.


{Appearance}


Ravenfeather has long, dark brown fur. She keeps it well groomed, so it's a very pretty' silky pelt. Her eyes are a brilliant green, which sparkle with intelligence, curiousity, and passion.

{Current Apprentice}
(Open)

{Trained Apprentices}
Lightningpaw
Stormpelt
(Open)

{Former Mentor}
Shadowclaw---Shadowstar

{Mate/Crush}
None, open

{Kits}
None, but wants kits.


{Family}
Lilynose-mother-deceased
Brownfur-father-deceased
Littlekit-brother-deceased
Flamepelt-brother-alive

{History}
Ravenfeather was born an only kit. Her mother had been sick when she was pregnant with her, so some say that is what happened. Ravenfeather was born a happy, healthy kit. She had her fathers brown coat, but her mother's eyes and long fur. Ravenfeather grew up fairly lonely, getting into all sorts of trouble since she was the only kit in the clan at the time. Eventually, she got along quite well with the elders, and she started to become very observant and intelligent.
Ravenfeather became an apprentice when she turned 12 moons old. She was very curious and impatient. She would always ask why, and wanted to know what she could do better. Her mentor, Shadowclaw, was a very patient, older cat. At the time, he was deputy. He found her to have great promise, and pushed her harder than any apprentice he had ever had before. And she became an amazing warrior.
Not too long after becoming a warrior, she got her first apprentice, Lightningpaw. At the same time, her mother was moved back into the nursery. Ravenfeather would have younger siblings! Lightningpaw was very ambitious daring, which Ravenfeather was proud of. She was careful not to let him become too cocky or full of himself, which he was prone to doing. Eventually, while on a late night border patrol, they ran into some rogues. They had a nice fight, but in the end, Lightningpaw died. He had been seriously injured but continued to fight, even after Ravenfeather told him to go back and tell the rest of the clean about the rogues.
Ravenfeather was very upset with herself, believing that it was her fault that Lightningpaw died. But it wasn't. A few moons later, after admitting to her old mentor how she felt, Racenfeather got her second apprentice. This time, she was not going to let her clan down. She trained Stormpaw well, even when her mother had a stillborn, Littlekit, and her new little brother, Flamekit. When Stormpaw became a wonderful warrior, Flamepelt became an apprentice.
Ravenfeather got to know her little brother, and found him to be a lot like herself. He wanted to be great, but he was more vengeful and eager to fight, while Ravenfeather was more level headed. And in battle with rogues, including those that killed Lightningpaw, their leader was killed. And Shadowclaw became Shadowstar. This is when Flamepaw became Flamepelt, but also when Ravenfeather became deputy.

{Other}
I'm done!!!

There. She's done. If you'd rather, if could always make her leader... Since I don't think Fireclan has one yet.

No.

Ravenfeather is approved

{Name} Petalstar

{Gender} female

{Age} 25 moons

{Rank} Leader/Queen

{Clan} FireClan

{Personality} Petalstar is kind, just like her father was when he was alive and leading at the time of Shadowstar, who at the time was deputy. Petalstar is also very protective and fierce. She loves making friends, but not with those who kill. She is strict when it comes to cats betraying the clan. Petalstar is extremely fond of meeting new cats, especially those that could be of good use to the clan in the future. She loves talking to other cats, but like any other cat sometimes Enough is Enough. When it all comes down to it, Petalstar is a very simple cat. She just likes things to go smoothly. Like Shadowstar, Petalstar only cares about the wellfare of the clan.

{Appearance}

{Theme Song (I will be using this to make a Youtube Video about my cat, so just ignore it for now)} How to Save a Life by The Fray

{Family}
Stonestar (Leader of FireClan when ShadowStar was ShadowClaw and Deputy, DECEASED. In StarClan.) {Cause of Death: Murdered in Battle right after Petalkit and her siblings were born.} - Open to Roleplay
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Petalfang (Former Elder, Grandmother, Juniperheart's mother. DECEASED) {Cause of Death: Drowned} - Open to Roleplay, Looks to be decided by whoever picks her

Juniperheart (Mother, DECEASED.){Cause of Death: Murdered in Battle after Petalkit [now Petalstar] became a warrior} - Open to Roleplay
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Oakclaw (Mate) - Open to Roleplay, Just Ask but Preferablly I would Like a Mod to Roleplay him. Has Brown fur.

Leafkit (Daughter, 2 moons) - Roleplayed by Crimson | Celestia or Tia | Castiel's Sister| Supernatural | Sugar Cube | Just Trust me|

Open (Younger Sister, Alive. Apprentice) - Roleplayed by Crimson | Celestia or Tia | Castiel's Sister | Supernatural | Sugar Cube | Just Trust Me |

Open (Younger Brother, Alive. Apprentice)

Open (Younger Sister, Alive. Apprentice)

Open (Younger Brother, Alive. Apprentice)

{Current Apprentice/Mentor} Snowpaw (Current Apprentice, Yellowheart's little sister) - Ask to Rp Snowpaw

{Trained Apprentices}
Yellowpaw/Yellowheart (First Apprentice, Alive. Current Warrior.) - Ask to Rp Yellowheart

Stonepaw/Stonestorm {Cause of Death: Drowned} (DECEASED, second Apprentice. Was a Warrior, currently In StarClan. Was named after Petalstar's father.) - Roleplayed by Me

Silverpaw/Silverflame {Cause of Death: Murdered in Battle}(DECEASED, third apprentice. Was a warrior, currently in StarClan.) - Ask to Rp as SilverFlame

{Former Mentor} Heatherclaw {Cause of Death: Fell off a cliff} (DECEASED, Currently in StarClan) - Ask to rp Heatherclaw

{Other} While Leafkit is really young, Petalstar has put Ravenfeather in charge of the clan. Petalstar was named for her grandmother, Petalfang.

Oh, Shatterkit was going to be 2 Moons old but you can pick :)

2 moons is fine, what about gender

kk, let me pick a photo for her :)

k

This is Mine and I have ful coppy right over it!

{Name}
Leafkit/Leafpaw/Leaf-fall/Leafstar ( I changed the name)

{Gender}
She cat

{Age}
2 Moons

{Rank}
Kit/Apprentice/Warrior/Deputy/Leader

{Clan}
Fire clan

{Personality}

Sweet Leafkit is very sweet, playful and would do anything to get a laugh within reason.

Loyal Leafkit is already very loyal, and has stuck up to her littlemates from others.

Brave Even though kits arnt aloud, Leafkit has already been training herself, giveing her the upper paw. She is brave because she as done so.

{Appearance}



{Current Apprentice/Mentor}
Too young

{Trained Apprentices}
N/A

{Former Mentor}
N/A

{Mate/Crush}
Too young

{Kits}
way to young

{Family}
Mother - Petalstar
Father - ???
Sister - ???
Brother - ???
Brother - ???

{Theam song}
Kit = Remember When
Apprentcie = Queen Of Hearts
Warrior = Shatter Me

{History}
Something will snap in her When shes going to be a warrior. Something will be lost.

{Other}
Looks up to her mother and hopes to become leader on day.

Done XD

Ivyshimmer
gender:she-cat
age:19 moons
rank:what are the ranks available?!
clan:fireclan
looks:beautiful white tabby with stunning sapphire eyes and three silver dots under her eyes
crush/mate/kits:none
theme song:Shatter me/Blown away
personality...:kind,loving,sweet,flirty,intelligent,brave,corageous,weird

some one has silverstream!

which ranks are available?

Sliversyream? You mean the name?

Ranks:
Kit
To-Be
Pray Hunter/Cave gard
How old is she?

oh um 19 moons

ok... Could you please edit you 'Ivypool' To Ivyshimmer or someting, add an age and rank and, also Personalty please. not one secntice. then she will be approved

(sure)
Ivyshimmer
age:19 moons
rank:still don't know ranks available...
personality:sweet,flirty,intelliegent,kind,helpful,loving, brave,adventurous,weird

-_- Edit your post on the other one.

ohhhhhhhhhh sorry...i'm new at this...

Ivypool wrote: "ohhhhhhhhhh sorry...i'm new at this..."

dont worry

sure!

Name: Halfpelt
Gender: Male
Age: 30 moons
Rank: Warrior
Personality: Making Waterfoot happy.
Appearance: https://sp.yimg.com/ib/th?id=HN.60804...
Clan: Fireclan
Apprentice: None
Mentor: Silverhalf
Crush: Waterfoot
History: Halfpelt had loved someone, once, from his clan. Her name was Midnightmoon. She was dark blue with white belly, paws, and had white speckles over her pelt. But in a fight with a strong group of rogues and had gotten killed. Halfpelt had tried to stop falling in love with cats until he met Waterfoot.
Likes: Warmness, summer, winter
Dislikes: Rain, cliffs
Fears: Falling off a cliff

HIstroy? Likes and Dislikes? Fears? Family? Clan? Other?

I didn't want to do that stuff.

Well you have too

sang it.

I meant sang it.

I know it sucks, but if you do it your cat is approved by the moderator, which I am not one but Crimson will Approve it if you add that stuff!

Yush I will.

Sorry if i seams unfare, but, If you dont edit it, other people will look at it and think that you can get away with making cats with the same name in the warrior cats book, and not following the outline as such. When you become a mod one day in some group, you Will understand.

{Name} Goldenpaw

{Gender} Female

{Age} 7 moons

{Rank} Apprentice

{Clan} Fireclan


{Personality} Smart, cunning, agile


{Appearance} Goldenpaw is a cat whose pelt is golden for the first half of her body, and her bottom half of her body is white. Her eyes are hazel colored, with a touch of emerald green.

Image: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia...

{Current Apprentice/Mentor} none yet (open)


{Trained Apprentices} none yet (open)


{Former Mentor} Ravenfeather (open)


{Mate/Crush} none yet (open)


{Kits} none yet



{Family} Silverjaw (father)
Mouseheart (mother)
Drystar (sister)

{History}

Goldenpaw was born in the Shadeclan, but her parents ran away when things started to get dangerous. Her parents were taken in by the Fireclan, and she was raised there. Shadeclan has still not forgiven them, but doesn't seek them. From when Goldenpaw was six moons old, she became an apprentice, taught well by Sunray. Afer many moons of work, Goldenpaw became a warrior, and hopes that one day, she will train her own apprentice.

Sunray is already taken

And for her current mentor please put it on the right spot so that the mod knows that she has a mentor.

Eliza DiNozzo, Briarthorn, Lilacburr wrote: "Sunray is already taken"

Yes, and also, please dont decide if shadeclan hates the cat. And whos 'Drystar'? her mother yes, but if she the leader, she the leader of what? and if shes a warrior shouldnt her name not be a 'paw' but 'Slash'? or 'Claw'? Or a nother name?

Sunrays ma cat

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ɴaмɘ:

Minnowkit
Minnowpaw
Minnowdream
Minnowstar

aɢɘ:

[Moons] 36 Moons
[Years and months ] 3 Years old

ɢɘɴdɘʀ:

Tom

cʟaɴ:

Fireclan

ʀaɴĸ:

Kit
Apprentice
Warrior
Medicine Cat/ apprentice
Loner/Rouge/Kittypet
Leader

cuʀʀɘɴт appʀɘɴтɪcɘ

Newtpaw [[ Open ]]

тʀaɪɴɘd appʀɘɴтɪcɘƨ

Blazingstorm [[ Open ]]
Clawberry [[ Open ]]
Bellystream [[ Open ]]

ғoʀмɘʀ мɘɴтoʀ

Applebelly [[ Open ]]

pɘʀƨoɴaʟɪтʏ Minnowdream is very straight-forward and is also very generous, he is known to be very nice and very kind. Minnowdream is a great listener and will always be a good friend.


dɘƨcʀıpтɪoɴ:

pɪcтuʀɘ:

мaтɘ Lilac-cloud [[ Open ]]


ĸɪтƨ:

Poppykit [[ Wren ]]
Drykit [[ Crimson ]]
Beetlekit [[ Open ]]
Lilykit [[ Crimson ]]
Snakekit [[ Open ]]

ғaмɪʟʏ(вʟood):

★ Mother: Dancingsun [[ Open ]]
★ Father: Darkcloud [[ Open ]]
★ Siblings-
☆ Sister One: Ivystream [[ Open ]]
☆ Sister Two: Dreampelt [[ Open ]]
☆ Sister Three: Flowercloud [[ Open ]]
☆ Brother One: Snailclaw [[ Open ]]

✣ Grandfather: Snapleaf [[ Open ]]
✣ Grandmother: Pathpelt [[ Open ]]
✣ Grandfather Two: Duneleaf [[ Open ]]
✣ Grandmother Two: Berrygorge [[ Open ]]
✣ Great-Grandfather: Birchclaw [[ Open ]]

✧ Aunt One: Volebirch [[ Open ]]
✧ Aunt Two: Featherpelt [[ Open ]]
✧ Uncle One: Mossygaze [[ Open ]]

✦ Cousin One: Starestorm [[ Open ]]
✦ Cousin Two: Stormyleaf [[ Open ]]
✦ Cousin Three: Mistfall [[ Open ]]
✦ Cousin Four: Dampflight [[ Open ]]

✩ Nephew: Clampkit [[ Open ]]
✩ Niece: Firekit [[ Open ]]

ғaмɪʟʏ(Iɴ-Lawƨ):

★ Mother: Shrewtalon [[ Open ]]
★ Father: Spikefrost [[ Open ]]
★ Siblings-
• Sister: Harebreeze [[ Open ]]
• Brother: Brightyew [[ Open ]]

нɪƨтoʀʏ: Minnowdreams history is a little bit wierd, one time he got sick from licking a tree, then he got sick licking a flower, then he got sick from licking a rock, Minnowdream is a wacky and fun, energetic cat,meh will not stop the fun until the leader of deputy tells him to stop. Minnowdream once got sick from eating a fish, he had a belly ache for two moons, then one time he sprained his paw from jumping to high and hitting the ground too hard, and then one time he dislocated his tail, don't ask, but he fell onto his but too hard from falling from a high spot on a tree.

oтнɘʀ: N/A

Eliza DiNozzo, Briarthorn, Lilacburr wrote: "And for her current mentor please put it on the right spot so that the mod knows that she has a mentor."

So what do I write as a mentor? Some other cat?

Yes

OK. SO my new cat mentor will be Ravenfeather (if not taken).

Hey Crimson or Rosella!

Is me kitty approved?

Clarissa wrote: "{Name} Goldenpaw

{Gender} Female

{Age} 19 moons

{Rank} Warrior

{Clan} Fireclan


{Personality} Smart, cunning, agile


{Appearance} Goldenpaw is a cat whose pelt is golden for the first half of..."

You still have a lot to fix! I am no Moderator, but if you want to be approved then here is a list of things you need to change.

Changes!

Age: 19 Moons? Uh that's a little to old for an apprentice
Rank: Warrior Umm she can't have the name Goldenpaw if she's a warrior.

Change these and she'll be approved by a mod!

Am I excepted?

Eliza DiNozzo, Briarthorn, Lilacburr wrote: "Clarissa wrote: "{Name} Goldenpaw

{Gender} Female

{Age} 19 moons

{Rank} Warrior

{Clan} Fireclan


{Personality} Smart, cunning, agile


{Appearance} Goldenpaw is a cat whose pelt is golden for ..."


Ok, thanks for letting me know! I fixed it, I hope I did it right.

Minnowdream is approved