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Cookmancer Online
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Congrats on the release of your book! I just got it via Amazon and look forward to reading it tonight. If you want to add me to your ARC team (we've talked before, but I don't want to presume that I was added or anything), feel free!
Location 1227"Approaching authoritarian voices approached." - You don't need the first word in the sentence. Or you need to re-word it.
Location 2010 - Spiders are not insects. They are arachnids. I would suggest that you change the wording. Or, change the creatures to giant wasps or something else. But changing the word seems easier.



Cookmancer Online: A LitRPG / GameLit Novel
Her friends are a flesh-golem (think Frankenstein's Monster), a fairy illusionist, and a shape shifter.
I can give you a Google Form link which gives you the book if this sounds interesting to you. Technically you can just request the book and not get added to my ARC group. Just message me and I'll reply back with the Google link.
Thank you for your time. :)
Nera