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Zoeisbookhooked So this is where I’ll post my book :)


taylor ˚୨୧⋆。˚ ⋆ (taylorangelina) | 31 comments YESS IM SO EXCITED!!


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aarja (aarjak) | 23 comments Me too!


Zoeisbookhooked Aw thx😂


Zoeisbookhooked I would just like to say I will probably get to writing in late October or November. Sorry!! I just have a busy schedule!


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C.F. Frank (cffrank) | 3 comments Terrific!!!!


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aarja (aarjak) | 23 comments So start soon!


Zoeisbookhooked Lol I WILL!! I need to! But it’ll have to be in 2 weeks if I want to start!! Sorry!


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aarja (aarjak) | 23 comments No need to be sorry! We understand :)


taylor ˚୨୧⋆。˚ ⋆ (taylorangelina) | 31 comments i was wondering if any of you is participating in NanNoWriMo this year? honestly i don’t know much about it but i think it’s a place where you can write a story and then winners are chosen😂


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Zoeisbookhooked Ooh I’m not sure what it is but that sounds fun!!


taylor ˚୨୧⋆。˚ ⋆ (taylorangelina) | 31 comments right! i’m going to look into it because it sounds like a lot of fun😂


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Zoeisbookhooked It does!! I wouldn’t want to compete against you though😂


taylor ˚୨୧⋆。˚ ⋆ (taylorangelina) | 31 comments true ahahh😂


message 15: by Zoeisbookhooked (new)

Zoeisbookhooked You guys should be happy to hear that I finished working on my characters and am now attempting to make some sort of an outline😂 but am currently working on the blurb. Cause it didn’t sound professional before lol. I’ll get the blurb to you guys soon when I finish touching it up :)


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Akshita yay!! I am excited!! good luck!


message 17: by Zoeisbookhooked (new)

Zoeisbookhooked Believe it or not I just finished editing the blurb so it’s finished lol😂

Here it is:
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8 Kings and Queens will rule together, all Chosen. According to the prophesy there will be the King of Peace, War, Beasts, the Queen of Healing, Power, Prophesy, Nature, and the Queen of Protection. You are marked as a Chosen when you find a tattoo on the top of your hand with the crest of the Chosen. Every since Quill, King of Peace, was Chosen, it is destined that 7 more shall be Chosen in one years time. The end of the one year mark ends in exactly 2 months. And there is still 1 more spot to be filled. When you are Chosen you can’t tell a soul. Not even your own family. Instantaneously, you must leave to the castle of the Forgotten Warriors. Once every Queen/King has been Chosen it will be publicly announced at the long awaited coronation. The prophesy spoke that on the day of the coronation their journey begins. The journey that will risk their lives. They must all become one. One family. And one person. And as one, they must fight the one that carries the dragon curse that will betray them and restore the Kingdom of Cawnin to its original glory and lift the curse. One of the Kings or Queens posses the curse of the dragon. They themselves don’t know they posses it. Until their 18th birthday will they become aware they are possessed by the curse. And together they must fight it.


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Carrlene Ray | 1 comments Woah! This has the makings of a seriously incredible book! I could picture myself checking it out at the library! Love it


message 19: by Zoeisbookhooked (new)

Zoeisbookhooked Thank you!!
And oh my gosh haha😂 it could be...


message 20: by aarja (new)

aarja (aarjak) | 23 comments Wow! I am looking forward to it!!! It sounds soo interesting, with these elements!


message 21: by Zoeisbookhooked (new)

Zoeisbookhooked Thanks! Glad you think so! I have the main points down. But I feel like it won’t turn out good because I can’t think of much to put in between these big important chapters. But I’m planning that right now. I just know it has so much potential, I’m just scared I’m gonna ruin it😬


message 22: by aarja (new)

aarja (aarjak) | 23 comments Well, it would only make you learn what else should be added, and how you can make it better :)


message 23: by Zoeisbookhooked (new)

Zoeisbookhooked True true😂


taylor ˚୨୧⋆。˚ ⋆ (taylorangelina) | 31 comments omg it sounds so good!!! i can’t wait for it to be published😌


message 25: by Zoeisbookhooked (new)

Zoeisbookhooked Haha thanks :))


message 26: by Sofia (new)

Sofia (sofloaf) I'M SO EXCITED!!! This is going to be AWESOME


message 27: by Zoeisbookhooked (new)

Zoeisbookhooked Aw glad your excited!!


taylor ˚୨୧⋆。˚ ⋆ (taylorangelina) | 31 comments yeah me neither honestly😂 i’m not sure how to send it in when you’re finished but i don’t know if i can even do it😂💀


message 29: by Zoeisbookhooked (new)

Zoeisbookhooked While you guys are so patiently waiting for me to start giving you chapters of my book, I thought I’d give you guys a sneak peek at the main characters if you want :) it’s just my inspiration for them!


https://pin.it/1VyZ7iE


message 30: by Zoeisbookhooked (new)

Zoeisbookhooked Oh and ignore the T2 and T3🤣


taylor ˚୨୧⋆。˚ ⋆ (taylorangelina) | 31 comments wow, I'm doing the same thing ahhahh! I LOVE YOURS! I'm genuinely so excited to meet the characters hehehe


message 32: by Zoeisbookhooked (new)

Zoeisbookhooked Thanks!

Oh my gosh😂 PLEASE DO! And that’s good to hear! My friends always love Esther and Lu the best for some reason😂


message 33: by Akshita (new)

Akshita Oh my!! They are sooo good!! I am super excited for Lu and Orenda!!
(view spoiler)


message 34: by Zoeisbookhooked (new)

Zoeisbookhooked Good! I love them both a lot!


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Minerva (mm0808) | 2 comments Hai!


message 36: by Lizzie (new)

Lizzie Stone I did NaNoWriMo Last year btw and if you are on the Young Writer's Program Website I know how to operate that. You just have to wait until it starts and then you can make all you're 'notes' into chapters. It's really easy to operate that site, now if you are on the adult one, I have no idea. Also, I had help cause my friend is the one that introduced me to it and got me into NaNo.


message 37: by Lizzie (new)

Lizzie Stone It's the website kids can use for NaNoWriMo, so the main website is for adults. Here's the link to The Young Writer's Program: https://ywp.nanowrimo.org/home


message 38: by Lizzie (new)

Lizzie Stone Ofc! :P


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Wow Zoe this book sounds wonderful. I already have a feeling that I am going to love it. I am so excited for the book!


message 40: by Zoeisbookhooked (new)

Zoeisbookhooked Aw thanks Nimrat!


message 41: by Zoeisbookhooked (new)

Zoeisbookhooked I NEED HELP! I’m tied between writing it in 1st Person POV or 3rd Person POV. Yup that’s right! I started writing my first chapter! But I can’t decide which I want to write in...


taylor ˚୨୧⋆。˚ ⋆ (taylorangelina) | 31 comments are you going to be having different characters points of view for each chapter or is it just one?


message 43: by Zoeisbookhooked (new)

Zoeisbookhooked Yah I thought I’d have every 8 characters POV


message 44: by aarja (new)

aarja (aarjak) | 23 comments I think 1st person would be better, you know?


message 45: by Zoeisbookhooked (new)

Zoeisbookhooked Yah I feel ya. I posted a poll for people to vote on which I should do. 1st one but just by 5. There were like 33 votes!


message 46: by aarja (new)

aarja (aarjak) | 23 comments Oh okay! Cool then ^^


taylor ˚୨୧⋆。˚ ⋆ (taylorangelina) | 31 comments ok i was going to say i think 3rd person would be better😂 but honestly just do whatever is best for you to write!


taylor ˚୨୧⋆。˚ ⋆ (taylorangelina) | 31 comments idk of that made sense😂


message 49: by Zoeisbookhooked (new)

Zoeisbookhooked Yah it did. I’ve written a tiny bit of the first chapter and I was thinking I’d write it in 1st and 3rd and then see what everyone thought.


message 50: by Zoeisbookhooked (new)

Zoeisbookhooked It’s just as first person you get to know the characters thoughts and I feeel you get to experience their personality’s. But I love third person cause it feels like you’re in the story and that’s so fun. I just don’t know


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