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Darth Xadir - Aakim Xadir || Dark Side - Sith Lord || Daria Sidorchuk
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Darth Xadir - Aakim Xadir || Dark Side - Sith Lord || Daria Sidorchuk
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HEY, all those who are way more knowledgeable in star wars than me! Could you read my characters backstory and affirm that everything there checks out? I googled quite a bit, but wasn't sure what I was doing.I'm even more rusty than I thought. :_3
Its pretty good and you could collab with mine if you want.
YES! I'd love to!Do you have anything in mind, or should I shoot something off the top of my head? :D
And thank you BTW, glad it checks off okay.
Well it still needs some work but have a look at mine in the character creation area.
Did you put a picture up? Not sure if my computer is being a jerk or if you just don't have anything, lol.He looks good to me!
Also, I hate to ask, but I'm sort of a freak about this. Are you pretty detialed? I write books in my pastime, so I generally crank out 3-4 arduously detailed paragraphs. Anything less and I get bored.If you're not really into that, we can just have them start out friends, that will be lively enough. :) I can collab her with someone else without much issue.
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[Ƒιяѕт Ɲαмє:] Lir
[MιɗɗƖє Ɲαмє:] Jonathan
[Lαѕт Ɲαмє:]Sorenson
[ƬιтƖєѕ:] Li; John; Nathan
[Agє:] 22
[Sρєcιєѕ:] Human
[AffιƖιαтιση:] Light
[Ɠєηɗєя:] Male
[Ɯєαρση (ǀf Aηу):]
[ƤєяѕσηαƖιту:]
Lɪʀ ɪs sᴜᴀᴠᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ᴇʟᴇɢᴀɴᴛ. Hᴇ ʟᴏᴠᴇs ᴛᴏ ᴍᴏᴠᴇ ɪɴ ʜɪɢʜ ᴄɪʀᴄʟᴇs. Iɴғᴀᴄᴛ ʜᴇ ɪs ᴀ ᴅᴇʙᴏɴᴀɪʀ ᴡʜᴏ ᴇɴᴊᴏʏs ʙᴇɪɴɢ ᴡɪɴᴇᴅ ᴀɴᴅ ᴅɪɴᴇᴅ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʀɪɢʜᴛ ᴋɪɴᴅ ᴏғ ᴀᴛᴍᴏsᴘʜᴇʀᴇ. Tʜᴇ ᴡᴏʀᴅ ·ᴄʟᴀss· ɪs ɢʟᴜᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜɪᴍ. Aᴛ ᴛɪᴍᴇs ɪᴛ·s ʜᴀʀᴅ ᴛᴏ ᴘʟᴇᴀsᴇ ᴏʀ sᴀᴛɪsғʏ ʜɪᴍ. Wʜɪᴄʜ ʜᴀᴘᴘᴇɴs ᴛᴏ ʙᴇ ᴀʟᴍᴏsᴛ ᴀʟʟ ᴛʜᴇ ᴛɪᴍᴇ. Hᴇ ɪs ʀᴏᴍᴀɴᴛɪᴄ ɴᴀᴛᴜʀᴇᴅ ᴀɴᴅ ɴᴇᴇᴅs ᴛᴏ ʙᴇ ʀᴇᴍɪɴᴅᴇᴅ ғʀᴏᴍ ᴛɪᴍᴇ ᴛᴏ ᴛɪᴍᴇ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ʜᴇ ᴘᴏssᴇss ɪɴᴛᴇʟʟᴇᴄᴛᴜᴀʟ ᴘᴏᴡᴇʀ ᴀs ᴡᴇʟʟ. Lɪʀ ɪs ᴀʟsᴏ ᴀ ʙɪᴛ ʀᴇsᴇʀᴠᴇᴅ.
[ƤнуѕιcαƖ Aρρєαяαηcє:]
Hαιя: Dark Brown
Ɛуєѕ:Dark Brown
Ɯєιgнт: 128lbs
Hєιgнт: 5' 11"
Ɗιѕтιηgυιѕнєɗ Mαякιηgѕ (ǀf Aηу): Birth mark similar to his Sisters. A heart shaped on the side of his neck. Opposite of Alex's.
[ƑαмιƖу:]
Mary Tell- Mother- Deceased- 43
Thomas Albert- Father- Deceased- 48
Alexandrina- Twin Sister- 22
[Ɓαcкѕтσяу:] Bᴏʀɴ ᴛʜᴇ sᴀᴍᴇ ᴛɪᴍᴇ ᴀs ʜɪs sɪsᴛᴇʀ﹐ Lɪʀ ᴡᴀs ᴡᴇʟᴄᴏᴍᴇᴅ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴏʀʟᴅ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴀ ʙᴏᴏᴍ. Tʜᴇɪʀ ʜᴏᴍᴇ ᴡᴀs ᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ᴀᴛᴛᴀᴄᴋ ᴀs ᴡᴇʟʟ ᴀs ᴛʜᴇ ᴛᴏᴡɴ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ʜɪs ғᴀᴍɪʟʏ ʜᴀᴅ ʙᴇᴇɴ ʟɪᴠɪɴɢ ɪɴ ғᴏʀ ᴀ ᴡʜɪʟᴇ. Tɪᴍᴇ sᴇᴇᴍᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ sʟᴏᴡ ᴀs ᴛʜᴇ ʜᴏᴍᴇs ʙʟᴇᴡ ᴀᴘᴀʀᴛ ғʀᴏᴍ ᴛʜᴇ Dᴀʀᴋ sɪᴅᴇ·s ᴛᴇᴍᴘᴛᴀᴛɪᴏɴs. ʜɪs ғᴀᴛʜᴇʀ ᴛᴏᴏᴋ ᴛʜᴇ ᴛᴡɪɴs ᴀɴᴅ ʜɪᴅ ᴛʜᴇᴍ ғᴏʀ ᴛʜᴇɪʀ ᴘʀᴏᴛᴇᴄᴛɪᴏɴ. Oɴʟʏ ᴛᴏ ғɪɴᴅ ᴏᴜᴛ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ʜᴇ ᴛᴏᴏ ʜᴀᴅ ᴅɪᴇᴅ. Tʜᴇ ᴛᴡᴏ ᴛᴡɪɴs Sᴏᴏɴ ᴡᴇʀᴇ ғᴏᴜɴᴅ ʙʏ ᴏɴᴇ ᴏғ ᴛʜᴇ Dᴀʀᴋ sɪᴅᴇ ᴄʀᴇᴀᴛᴜʀᴇs﹐ ᴅᴜᴇ ᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ Tᴡɪɴs ᴄʀɪᴇs. Bᴜᴛ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴍᴇʀᴄʏ ᴛʜᴇ ᴏɴᴇ ᴡʜᴏ ʜᴀᴅ ғᴏᴜɴᴅ ᴛʜᴇᴍ ᴀʟsᴏ ғᴏᴜɴᴅ ᴛʜᴇᴍ ᴀ ʟᴏᴠᴇʟʏ ʜᴏᴍᴇ
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[RєƖαтισηѕнιρ Sтαтυѕ:] Sɪɴɢʟᴇ
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I'm glad you caught that, thought it might be funny xDAlrighty, I'll put him up to be reviewed!
.:. U N D E R || C O N S T R U C T I O N .:.
Unknown || Neutral - Dark Jedi || Nadia Ezra
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Unknown || Neutral - Dark Jedi || Nadia Ezra
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Nyla Ayva Dæmon || Mechanic / Smuggler / Thief / Con-Artist
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[First Name:]Zatane[Middle Name:]Wilton
[Last Name:]Kansar
[Titles:]lieutenant
[Age:]28
[Species:]Human.
[Affiliation:]neutral,leans towards dark.
[Gender:]Male
[Weapon (If Any):]Assault cannon (Couldn't find a pacific one.)
[Personality:] Is a very truthful person,tending to be very defensive. He doesn't care who you are or if your important,he's still rude and sassy. He does anything it takes to get the job done,no matter the consequences.
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Hair:Messy,silver,short.
Eyes:Blue.
Weight:165 pounds,mostly muscle.
Height:6'8
Distinguished Markings (If Any): He has scars crisscrossing his face and cybernetic implants near is ears. There is a look of hidden emotion on his eyes,buried by a slight look of insanity,anger,and fear.
[Family:]Deceased.
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[Sexuality:]Straight.
[Relationship Status:]Single.
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