Share Your Story! discussion

So I thought there should be a place where we can share the articles we like. I wrote one on Climate Action. It's quite provoking. Not thought-provoking, but provoking. You can check it out on my blog: https://groovythoughtsa.blogspot.com/...

I was quite angry when I wrote this, I am hot-headed for this kind of stuff, lol. Let me know what you think ^-^

It was really good. But I think you should written a bit longer, specially if you're about a topic such as this. I hope you take this as constructive criticism. But one thing I can assure you, that the way you write is appealing.

Nimrat wrote: "It was really good. But I think you should written a bit longer, specially if you're about a topic such as this. I hope you take this as constructive criticism. But one thing I can assure you, that..."
Oh, thanks for the honest feedback! I'll definitely work on it ^^