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message 1: by Brooke (new)

Brooke W (thereadersgame) | 32 comments Here it is!


message 2: by Isabella (new)

Isabella Artino | 28 comments Awesome, thank you!


message 3: by Isabella (new)

Isabella Artino | 28 comments This is my very condensed synopsis...

In a world full of psychic abilities, only the strongest prevail…
Ersa is the last living member of the Metry Clan, a clan that drove themselves to madness and disarray. She is blessed with the power to learn information about an object or person by touching it. Even the floors speak to her. She wants her life to be easy, but knows that such a fate is near impossible to reach.
Adrian is the crown prince of Ivory, and with the king’s health failing, he needs a wife to be his queen. Thus the renown competition of minds opens for one lady from each clan to come and present themselves and their skills to him. Many girls pry for a chance at the prince; Ersa has been dreading it. But once Ersa gets to know Adrian, she learns there’s much more to him- and the kingdom- than even she knew.


message 4: by Brooke (new)

Brooke W (thereadersgame) | 32 comments I'll have to come back in an hour or so, I have school! I look forward to being writing buddies!


message 5: by Isabella (new)

Isabella Artino | 28 comments Sounds good! :)


message 6: by Brooke (new)

Brooke W (thereadersgame) | 32 comments Oh my gosh your story sounds amazing!! Sorry I'm reading about it so late! That is an amazing idea!


message 7: by Isabella (new)

Isabella Artino | 28 comments Brooke wrote: "Oh my gosh your story sounds amazing!! Sorry I'm reading about it so late! That is an amazing idea!"

Thank you! It's gonna be quite the project


message 8: by Brooke (new)

Brooke W (thereadersgame) | 32 comments Hi Isabella! I've got Chapter One of my story revised on my writing group! what an accomplishment I still have 24 more chapters + an epilogue to go!


message 9: by Brooke (new)

Brooke W (thereadersgame) | 32 comments How is your story going? I love what you have so far!


message 10: by Isabella (new)

Isabella Artino | 28 comments Thank you! Unfortunately I've been busy packing for college so I have no new updates on the story, but I did some worldbuilding work if you'd like to see that :)


message 11: by Brooke (new)

Brooke W (thereadersgame) | 32 comments I'd love to see that! Have fun in college! That must be a lot of packing.


message 12: by Isabella (new)

Isabella Artino | 28 comments Haha no kidding it is!


message 13: by Isabella (new)

Isabella Artino | 28 comments Here's a breakdown of each Clan and their abilities/jobs in society...

Proj: When they astral project they can see the stars and planets, they are the astrologers
Aurad: Sort through trauma and people's emotions, they are the counselors
Autowry: Produce written words without writing, they are the scribes
Bilo: Can be in two places at the same time as long as they know the name/geography of where they’re going, they are the explorers
Chann: Can talk to past spirits of Psyche (not Onceworld), they are the priests (kinda)
Alien: can smell scents and have adept knowledge about smell, they are the gardeners
Audi: Can hear spirits that haunt others, they are the exorcists
Cozin: Can think and know what someone is blessed with, they are the mathematicians
Gusta: Heightened sense of taste and have adept knowledge about taste, they are the chefs
Senti: know when something is not right, they are ½ of the soldiers
Voyan: Can gain direct visual info about an event happening then, they are the spies
Divan: Adept at performing rituals/ceremonies for all clans, they are the ritualists
Dow: Can track down any object/treasure, they are the seekers
Enge: Mend physical and energetic wounds, they are the healers
Leva: Can lift themselves and one other person, they are the scouts
Preco: Can see future up to two years ahead, they are ½ of the advisors
Kinesis: Manipulate and move objects, they are ½ of the soldiers
Metry: learn information about an object or person by touching it, they are the interrogators
Retron: Can see the past up to five years behind, they are ½ of the advisors
Teltha: Transfer of thoughts or words from one mind to another, they are the royals


message 14: by Brooke (new)

Brooke W (thereadersgame) | 32 comments Ahhh that's so cool and well organized!! *standing ovation*


message 15: by Brooke (new)

Brooke W (thereadersgame) | 32 comments I haven't been thinking properly for the last week and all my revisions are trash but I'm trying


message 16: by Isabella (new)

Isabella Artino | 28 comments That's all that matters!


message 17: by Brooke (new)

Brooke W (thereadersgame) | 32 comments :)


message 18: by Brooke (new)

Brooke W (thereadersgame) | 32 comments I declared myself in a slump last night. Any advice?


message 19: by Brooke (new)

Brooke W (thereadersgame) | 32 comments Hei! I just wanted to check-in and see how your overall life is going with the pandemic, college, and writing! I'm hopefully going to really get to work on my second draft in the next week or so!


message 20: by Isabella (new)

Isabella Artino | 28 comments Heya! Sorry for being so inactive. Writing has been slow because college is picking up the pace, but I hope to get back into a good system soon!


message 21: by Brooke (new)

Brooke W (thereadersgame) | 32 comments I am so sorry I didn't see this earlier!
It's okay of course! I understand school!

Camp NaNo started (its an April and June thing) so I have a little motivation!

School also happened to get really stressful when Camp started but I set a reasonable goal


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