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message 2: by Charlotte (new)

Charlotte  | 1701 comments Why thank you very much Elsie


Elisabeth aka Elsie(Taylor's version) | 2092 comments Why your welcome very much Char.


message 4: by kyla (last edited Feb 27, 2021 10:07AM) (new)

kyla Gasp why haven't I found this before


message 5: by kyla (new)

kyla Aja wrote: "I'm gonna be a little cruel and post this....hehe.....here's the summary to my WIP:

There have always been two sides; good and evil, otherwise known as Light and Darkness in the city of Everhall..."


I want more... THAT MEANS I FUDGEING LOVE IT


message 6: by kyla (new)

kyla Yes yes


message 7: by Charlotte (new)

Charlotte  | 1701 comments Oh wow, that sounds so cool I would love to read it. How old are you Aja?


message 8: by Charlotte (new)

Charlotte  | 1701 comments Kaz Brekker wife(we have kids together) wrote: "Aja wrote: "I'm gonna be a little cruel and post this....hehe.....here's the summary to my WIP:

There have always been two sides; good and evil, otherwise known as Light and Darkness in the city ..."


I’m proud of you Kazzy


message 9: by kyla (new)

kyla Charlotte wrote: "Kaz Brekker wife(we have kids together) wrote: "Aja wrote: "I'm gonna be a little cruel and post this....hehe.....here's the summary to my WIP:

There have always been two sides; good and evil, ot..."


Thank u char mmm should I write a book too no ok then I won't XD


message 10: by kyla (new)

kyla Aja wrote: "Cool, you have two options to read them: One I could post them here. Two you can join my group and read everything I've written.

I have really wanted to say my age but I think it's time I say it [..."


Thought u was 14 ooooooooo


message 11: by Charlotte (new)

Charlotte  | 1701 comments Aja wrote: "Cool, you have two options to read them: One I could post them here. Two you can join my group and read everything I've written.

I have really wanted to say my age but I think it's time I say it [..."


Ah, thanks! I’m 11


message 12: by Charlotte (new)

Charlotte  | 1701 comments Kaz Brekker wife(we have kids together) wrote: "Charlotte wrote: "Kaz Brekker wife(we have kids together) wrote: "Aja wrote: "I'm gonna be a little cruel and post this....hehe.....here's the summary to my WIP:

There have always been two sides;..."


Lol I was proud bc you said fidgeting instead of fucking


message 13: by Charlotte (new)

Charlotte  | 1701 comments Kaz Brekker wife(we have kids together) wrote: "Aja wrote: "Cool, you have two options to read them: One I could post them here. Two you can join my group and read everything I've written.

I have really wanted to say my age but I think it's tim..."


Lol same


message 14: by Charlotte (last edited Feb 27, 2021 10:18AM) (new)

Charlotte  | 1701 comments I was scared youre younger than me or my age bc I really like your book and all of a sudden everyone 12 is geeeting rly poetic and wise and I feel like a potato lol


message 15: by kyla (new)

kyla Charlotte wrote: "I was scared youre younger than me or my age bc I really like your book and all of a sudden everyone 12 is geeeting rly poetic and wise and I feel like a potato lol"

I like potatoes


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

Aja wrote: "But really should I post some chapter blurbs here?"

Sure, I say go for it!! They really should know how talented you are!!


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm just stating the facts, but your welcome!!


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Told ya she's talented. Probably the next Jennifer Nielsen I'd say (BTW that is a compliment, usually no one is as good as Jennifer)


message 19: by angela (new)

angela (bookishcloudy) Just had to make me cry for all my mistakes, even if IDK if this is about me...

I hope you find a bright light in your life since I'm not it.

I look forward to reading your poetry and how you express what you feel and I hope life gets better soon for you and everyone else...


message 20: by angela (new)

angela (bookishcloudy) No, Aja. It was my fault, space you gave me, that was needed. For me to realize and have time to think of what I did wrong and for you to take a break from me, Goodreads life was a whirlwind and you forced me to take a break that I really needed. So thank you. And I don't expect us to be the friends we were before, but I hope we can build up to friends with a few months' time, work our way slowly up the ladder. And don't blame yourself, you have nothing to apologize for, it was as much my fault as yours. :) Cloudyxoxo


message 21: by angela (new)

angela (bookishcloudy) Aja wrote: "So, um this is a rant/brain-dump that is apart of a letter to my parents.....It's about guess what, my depression.

I can feel every time a little bit more of my joy fades. I can feel everytime my ..."


Okay I haven't read this but I need to say sorry for everything before I do...just before I start blabbering


message 22: by angela (last edited Mar 01, 2021 08:58PM) (new)

angela (bookishcloudy) If you dont want others to see that, delete it...I copied it, putting it in a doc, and Im reading it over and over before I respond elaborately, truthfully

im crying
and dont tell me not to cry


message 23: by angela (new)

angela (bookishcloudy) Aja wrote: "꧁☁ᴄʟᴏᴜᴅʏ☁꧂ wrote: "No, Aja. It was my fault, space you gave me, that was needed. For me to realize and have time to think of what I did wrong and for you to take a break from me, Goodreads life was..."

I would too. Remember last time? We started messaging and joking like 4 days into getting to know each other. Let's take it slowly this time, and if anyone is feeling uncomfortable, let the other person know, and maybe take a few days break or warn the other person to cool it down a bit...yeah space to think help, a lot...
And okay, if you are okay and comfortable, I won't complain...I can't tell you it in words and a paragraph so I'm writing a poem, I'll message it to you, dunno if you want others to see it, for privacy sake...

Goodnight, it's 10:31 school day, we best both get some sleep!


message 24: by Jace (new)

Jace (jace_is_reading) Cause it's been a while and I'm nice/bored....Here's a peek at what's to come wayyyy later in my novel...

Each step away from the cabin sends ash swirling around my feet.
“Where are we going?” My own voice is foreign to my ears, rough and empty.
“You’ll see when we get there.” he says. We walk in silence for a long time. I take in the trees and notice how much the ash reminds me of snow and happier days.
We come to a clearing in the trees and Will stops, looking to the sky.
“Here? Is this the place you wanted to take me?” it comes out more harsh than I intended, my mind still in other places, other times.
“I want you to look up into this beautiful night sky and tell me what’s on your mind.” Will says calmly. I sigh and look up. A dusting of stars far away brighten up an almost black sky with a fog like smoke obscuring it all.
“You know what’s on my mind.”
“Only Terence has that power actually. I can only guess.” I sigh knowing there’s no use.
“Will, I’m afraid. What if she…”
“You can’t think like that, not now, not ever. Understand?”


message 25: by Jace (new)

Jace (jace_is_reading) The TBR Saga P1:

Me: ;-;
My tbr: .........................................(+forever)
Me: READING SLUMP WHY????
Me *muffled sobs*
My tbr: *laughs*
Me: why you hate me so much???
My tbr: you're the one who keeps adding and adding and never reading
Me: i do read!! and i try to not add more!!!
My tbr: you sus girl, and you lying to yourself about try not to add to me
Me: ;-;
Me: *whispered sob* i'm sorry
My tbr: ....
Me: i'll stop
My tbr: no, you stop i die....
Me: *walks away*
My tbr: come back!! i need you!!
Me: *stops* you need me?
My tbr: yes
Me: ;-;

*end of part 1*


message 26: by Charlotte (new)

Charlotte  | 1701 comments Lamon😂 so true! I love it


message 27: by Jace (new)

Jace (jace_is_reading) Charlotte wrote: "Lamon😂 so true! I love it"

Thanks! >u<


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