Hi, at the moment my blurb begins with ‘Darkness is falling... ‘ and then describes that children with magic are being twisted by dark energy etc.
I am wondering if before that I was to put ‘Can Nalani save the children?’ people might get ‘hooked’ into reading the rest of the blurb. Adam Croft reckons questions posed to the potential reader make good hooks. What do you think?
I am wondering if before that I was to put ‘Can Nalani save the children?’ people might get ‘hooked’ into reading the rest of the blurb. Adam Croft reckons questions posed to the potential reader make good hooks. What do you think?