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message 1: by Cheryl, first facilitator (last edited Mar 17, 2021 06:50AM) (new)

Cheryl (cherylllr) | 692 comments Mod
I use a lot of 'em. They work, but sometimes it seems like I'm using them out of laziness and my review would be stronger without them. Books to me a 'charming' or 'thrilling' and characters are 'stereotyped' or 'authentic' etc.

There are some great tips in "Kill Your Adjectives--Well, Most of Them," by Leah McClellan: https://simplewriting.org/kill-your-a...

But what do you think? What are your tips?


message 2: by L J (new)

L J | 117 comments Adjectives, adverbs, and descriptive phrases are useful in reviews. Some words have meaning in reviews beyond their everyday definitions but if overused may lead to readers skimming rather than reading review.

Some of the most helpful reviews I've read over the years are ones that use descriptive words and phrases at beginning. There are reasons this style is used for blurbs.

Example with edits (strike unnecessary, underline needed):

Not Your StereotypicalUsual Cozy Mystery -- Charming Couple -- Thrilling Adventure but Nothing too Scary -- Settings feel Authentic-- Can be read as stand-alone

Reactions: Smiles, Occasional Laughs, and a few nose wrinkles due to very detailed descriptions of authentic locally popular dishes. I had a genuine desire wanted to see where couple went next and what mystery or, at least problem they had to solve.

Those who read the series are used to Sarah and George being content to run their small hotel and let the world come to them. When a long term guest asks them to track down her adult grandchildren and hand deliver invitations to her birthday party they readily agree. The staff can run the place for a week or two. This is all expenses paid vacation or is it? All expenses are paid but it's not exactly the vacation they expect as they...

Not a real book.


message 3: by Cheryl, first facilitator (new)

Cheryl (cherylllr) | 692 comments Mod
What a helpful example, very creative, thank you!


message 4: by L J (new)

L J | 117 comments Cheryl wrote: "What a helpful example, very creative, thank you!"

You're welcome. I find it easier and briefer to show rather than tell and explain.


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