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Adjectives, adverbs, and descriptive phrases are useful in reviews. Some words have meaning in reviews beyond their everyday definitions but if overused may lead to readers skimming rather than reading review.Some of the most helpful reviews I've read over the years are ones that use descriptive words and phrases at beginning. There are reasons this style is used for blurbs.
Example with edits (strike unnecessary, underline needed):
Not Your
Reactions: Smiles,
Those who read the series are used to Sarah and George being content to run their small hotel and let the world come to them. When a long term guest asks them to track down her adult grandchildren and hand deliver invitations to her birthday party they readily agree. The staff can run the place for a week or two. This is all expenses paid vacation or is it? All expenses are paid but it's not exactly the vacation they expect as they...
Not a real book.



There are some great tips in "Kill Your Adjectives--Well, Most of Them," by Leah McClellan: https://simplewriting.org/kill-your-a...
But what do you think? What are your tips?