aspiring authors discussion

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Brooke wrote: "What's your book about?"

So sorry for the late reply...as I said I am in a deadline and am scrambling to make it and for some reason I am moderator of two other groups...What the heck was I thinkin?! Anyways...So my story is about Two child hood friends Rhianon and Hannah having a dream of being a kpop idol because of their obssession over kpop. They both get into an audition and only Hannah makes the cut. Ten years later Hannah is a kpop idol and is pretty famous but she let the fame get all to her head. While hannah is geting high on the fame, Rhiannon uses that to strike back and get revenge on her becuase Hannah had gotten to be an idol while leaving Rhianon in the dust..........Sooo what do you think? I have also written the prologue if you want to read that. I just dont know what to write after the prologue. Dont you need help with your own writing? I can definitely give some pointers or advice.

Brooke wrote: "I have a couple questions, so does Hannah end up realizing what she's become? Is their friendship repaired or does Rhiannon take the revenge right off the edge and end up in jail? Does Rhiannon hav..."

Hanah realizes at the end what she has become but only after her mother and father leave her and she gets shamed by all her fans and the music industry. The entertainment company hannah works for sues Rhiannon and at the end she dies...Somehow..idk how to make rhianon die......... and basically the prolugue is when hannah and rhianon are thirteen and they are best friends. They audition and hannah gets in...thats the prologue but in more details ofcourse...the stiry starts ten years later after hannah is already a kpop idol...but idk how to start that...im guessing i need it all to be mapped out into a timeline storyline thing so i can start writing but my ideas are just all over the place.

......like Hannah is singing and then boom a light fixture drops out of nowhere and everyone blames the backstage staff memeber which causes the staff memeber to get fired. and then things keep occuring like that which gets hannah almost killed but everyone things its that backstage staff member who wants ti get revenge but at the end while hannah is on the hospital bed they find out its rhianon. Then rhianon tells hannah why she did it and uses a syrijnge to pour arsenic in the i.v drip which causes hannah to die?......OMG I HAVE GOT IT.......

SQEEEEE I FINALLY HAVE IT..EVERYTHING CLICKED TOGETHER...THANK YOU THANK YOU THABK YOU

Brooke wrote: "Your welcome!! Are you planning on publishing? And does it have a title?"

Yeah I plan on publishing it ut after i publish this other book. This ones title is "Illusion"

Brooke wrote: "For my own writing currently I have the idea and characters and background but don't know how to start it."

Tell me your idea and background. I'll help!

Basically it near the beginning of the world there were three main families, two who hated each other, a blood feud. Eventually it cooled down through the third families peacekeeping but they never stopped hating each other. Now in present times each family has thousands and thousands of descendants, essentially splitting the world in three. And the blood feud is returning. But the third family knew this and made an object for their descendants to stop the feud, before everyone was killed in the crossfire. So the third family is kind of like an orginization, as the world takes sides. So this girl named Sloane( the main character) is one of the descendants(they must be between 16-20 to operate this machine)(I also don't know what the machine is yet)
and so they find sloane and bring her into the orginization( the part i'm struggling with) and this machine is split into 15 pieces hidden around the world, so it's kind of like a huge scavenger hunt with clues and everything. And they all know how to fight in hand to hand combat( kind of a random detail I threw in) and they're all trained from the time they turn 10 because all of the third family knows the division and what's coming while the rest of the world does not. So for some undetermined reason Sloane did not grow up in this orginization, and she is not the "chosen one" or the only one able to operate the machine, she's one of 15 so each piece goes to a specific person within the age limit, but they are all trained because they don't know who is able to operate it until they hit the age bracket.

Wow....Thats a whole lot......hmmm theres alpt of thingswe need to break down...

So the questions u need to focus on is:
Why was there a fued in the first place?
Who started the feud?
What does this object do?

Yes. I'll start brainstorming

Brooke wrote: "Yes. I'll start brainstorming"

Make a abc diagram....like this
I. (topic)
1. Subtopic
A. details
B. details
II. (topic)
1.
2.
A.
B.
....So on and so forth....its helpful....sometimes

Thats actually not a bad idea at all and same...im always getting stuck. i will have so much ideas but just can never figure it out

Brooke wrote: "And I have another idea.
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ahaahha i feel youuu. My novel is coming along pretty great actually although um i kind of switched the whole thing and made it more comedy and guess what...while writing it i had another idea and then for some reason i started writin a spinoff. and now i just have o many writing pieces to finish but its slowly coming along

so whats ur other idea abt?

Ouu so its like a dystopian fiction?

wait what u get?

Lol im happy for you! How did the idea come to you? honestly i will just be having acup of tea and boom IDEA