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Alpha : ♡ Senior Year ♡ (desiebookie) Skye can post their writing here!


message 2: by Sadieeeee (new)

Sadieeeee (sadieperson) | 16 comments Thank youuuuu


Alpha : ♡ Senior Year ♡ (desiebookie) np! If you want me to edit anything in here just PM me!


message 4: by Sadieeeee (new)

Sadieeeee (sadieperson) | 16 comments :)


message 7: by Sadieeeee (last edited Apr 20, 2021 10:00AM) (new)

Sadieeeee (sadieperson) | 16 comments (I’m not finished)
“She should be here any second now,” Amber said nervously. “Fearne. Unless her parents have found out and ban us from love since they’re homophobic...”
“Fearne! Yes!” Amber rushed to the window as she saw Fearne in her dress and her beautiful brown hair tied back in a braid.
They rushed upstairs.
Amber sighed affectionately as she stoked Fearne’s hair.
“Baby,” she whispered, “no one will hurt you when I’m here. And I’m always here when you need me.”
Fearne giggled.
“I-I’ll cya Amby.” She walked off after kissing Ambers neck.

That night Amber couldn’t sleep at all.
She rolled over again and again thinking of Fearne.
At the palace, Fearne couldn’t sleep either.
She dressed up in a silk nightgown, and packed a back. Then she tiptoed to Amber’s house.
When she got in she jumped on Amber’s bed.
“Amber,” she whispered.
“F-Fearne! Whadda ya doin—”
“I’m moving here. I can’t handle my parents, the king and queen.”
“Fearne! I would love that but my parents . . . Nvm,” she said and she undressed Fearne. Fearne slid down Amber’s pyjamas.
Amber tied her legs around Fearne’s waist.
Eventually they fell asleep.
Amber woke up gasping.


message 8: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa | 30 comments In the first dialogue, who is she talking to?

Packed a back??? backpack??


dang, their security, especially in a castle/palace, is lax...


message 9: by Sadieeeee (new)

Sadieeeee (sadieperson) | 16 comments Ik, she escaped them. And yeah, a backpack. First one... herself


message 10: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa | 30 comments is her family poor?

ok!


message 11: by Sadieeeee (new)

Sadieeeee (sadieperson) | 16 comments No, they’re the king and queen


message 12: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa | 30 comments then how is the security so lax?


message 13: by Sadieeeee (new)

Sadieeeee (sadieperson) | 16 comments She’s sneaky


message 14: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa | 30 comments uh...

sure, ok...


message 15: by Kai (new)

Kai I can't help but comment, I loved that! It was so cute! Please write more! I would LOVE to read it!!!

Sorry for commenting on your space,
Kay


message 16: by Sadieeeee (new)

Sadieeeee (sadieperson) | 16 comments It’s ok! And I will write more!


message 17: by Kai (new)

Kai YAY!


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