aspiring authors discussion

Here ya go!

ahhh thank you!!

oh you're active! You scared me

ahahaha i havw school in 15 min 😩

hmm. I didn't write anything today either

Genna wrote: "ahahaha i havw school in 15 min 😩"

omg have fun, schools the worst :/

i havwnt written in like two days cause i cannot come up with fallons backstory

And Brynne, excuse me, Brynn and Fallon marry

Niharika wrote: "And Brynne, excuse me, Brynn and Fallon marry"

uhhhh...Fallon dies before they can. whoops

im going to post what i have so far, i'd prefer not to get feedback on small grammar things as this is the first draft.

Wow, that's a lot

ahah it’s only like 28 pages on my google doc. i really need help with coming up with fallons backstory

Genna wrote: "Niharika wrote: "And Brynne, excuse me, Brynn and Fallon marry"

uhhhh...Fallon dies before they can. whoops"

But didn't you say there would be a way to bring him back?

no...

Well, if Fallon only lives for 28 pages.....
*cries*

ahaha nooo he’ll live until the last chapters or so

Phew

Genna wrote: "no..."

*pouts*

i'd really like advice on how to create Fallon's backstory or if you have any ideas. also his character arc :)

*shakes head* lemme read the chapters first

can y’all tell me when u finish reading them the long papers are making the app crash whenever i try to open my book so i’m delete them

yeah you’re right

Omg Genna you are so good at writing!!!

That's so sad!

So I read the whole thing and it's really good!

oh my gosh yaaaaay! im gonna delete them now cause it crashes the app each time i try to open it :(

Goodreads really needs to get itself together

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0nyGt...
This a playlis and since your story has someone poisoned I thought you might like it (I didn't make it, just found it)

Do you mind if I use the name Fallon for one of my own characters or would you rather I use another name?

depends. i know Fallon is a gender neutral name so is it a male or female you’re using it for? also, what’s the characters role in the story? like more of a main character or side or flat

Genna wrote: "depends. i know Fallon is a gender neutral name so is it a male or female you’re using it for? also, what’s the characters role in the story? like more of a main character or side or flat"

Male. I don't exactly know his role yet, but I know he's one of the main character's best friends and a soldier in my "military"system. And the main character is male, not female and the brother of my the main main character. Am I making sense?

Brooke wrote: "Genna wrote: "depends. i know Fallon is a gender neutral name so is it a male or female you’re using it for? also, what’s the characters role in the story? like more of a main character or side or ..."

So he’s secondary

Niharika wrote: "Brooke wrote: "Genna wrote: "depends. i know Fallon is a gender neutral name so is it a male or female you’re using it for? also, what’s the characters role in the story? like more of a main charac..."

yes

i guess this is kind of a weird question but when you write the synopsis for your story will he be in it?

Umm...I don't really know, but most likely not

yeah u can use it then. i’d feel bad if u weren’t able too 😂

Genna wrote: "yeah u can use it then. i’d feel bad if u weren’t able too 😂"

I just wanted to make sure it was okay with you before I went ahead with it. And thank you!

So I decided to change his name, because it didn't feel right, using it. So now his name is Killian.

Brooke wrote: "So I decided to change his name, because it didn't feel right, using it. So now his name is Killian."

ooo i like that name

it’s literally been forever since i’ve written i feel so bad but i’ve been so busy 😭 thankfully i only have about two weeks for school left

Genna wrote: "it’s literally been forever since i’ve written i feel so bad but i’ve been so busy 😭 thankfully i only have about two weeks for school left"

Same