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✖ Qᴜᴇᴇɴ ✖  (notonguewithbutt) Follow the template given for mermaids.


message 2: by Puddingtalk (Marie) (last edited Feb 11, 2015 01:37PM) (new)

Puddingtalk (Marie) (puddingtalk) | 46 comments


• Full Name •

➨﹙June﹚Young/Latin.
➨﹙KiaRoyal, Kings/Persian.
➨(Aphrodite﹚Goddess of love/Greek.



•Biological BackGround •

➨﹙Age﹚ 1,789, but appears around 18 to 20 years old
➨﹙D.O.B﹚ September 7th
➨﹙Place Of Birth﹚ Neverland
➨﹙Species﹚Mermaid



• Appearance •
Kandyse Mcclure
Her body isn't close to hourglass. That's total bullshit, mermaids have some serious muscle from swimming and drowning people. She's about 6'2 including her tail, which is the same color of her light brown skin with hints of silver when it reflects off of the sun. Her skin is a light brown, and her eyes are almost golden in color, with flecks of green.

•Personality •

Vain Like most mermaids, June thinks highly of herself. She is almost never seen not looking in a mirror, or brushing her hair, or doing anything to make herself look even more beautiful than she already is. She considers herself amazing.
Clever She is known for the antics and tricks she pulls on the inhabitants of the island. Blackmail is her specialty.
Romantic Romantic might be pushing it. June is a hopeless, clueless, blind, clinging-for-life romantic. When she finds an object of attraction, she won't let go. It turns into an obsession. Her love affairs never end well, she has a tendency of drowning them if they try to leave her.
Psychotic Yep. She is genuinely crazy. There isn't a trace of empathy in her body. She'll kill in cold blood for trivial reasons, and the slightest insult can set her off.
Vengeful She will hold onto a grudge for all eternity, until her anger becomes so great that she lashes out on an innocent bystander. She will always make sure to have the last word. Not achieving revenge damages her bloated ego.
Bitchy There is a reason she has only a few friends. She is a total queen bitch. You'll never see her being nice, considerate or anything remotely related to social decency. She finds it fun, pointing out flaws in her mermaid friends/enemies. Their reactions are what she lives for
Selfish Whatever June does, it's for herself. She puts herself before anyone else, and has no regrets doing that. The only person that she would have given her life for was her sister, Marian.
Artificial Whenever she is nice, it's not for real. Her smiles are always fake. Occasionally, she'll adapt a overly sweet persona to trick people into liking her.


• History •

➨﹙Father)Unknown
➨﹙Sister﹚ Unknown
﹙Sibling﹚ Marian; 15; sister; Love - 2/10


June wasn't always a cold-hearted bitch...well...actually she was. She's been on Neverland since the very beginning, and has seen the change it has overcome. But honestly she could care less. As long as there are pretty boys for her to play with, she doesn't give a damn. She didn't remember ever having family, or anyone that she loved except her younger sister Marian. Unfortunately, Marian died when she tried drowning a Lost Girl who survived. Since then June has been thirsty for revenge. But until then, she kills anyone she can get her hands fins on.

She is never in one place, and always shows up when people really have no desire for her to show up. She is infamous for snatching pirates right off their ships, tearing them to pieces, then blowing a kiss after them later. The only person that survived the ordeal was Eli Sparrow, a pirate who tricked her into falling in love with him, then escaped by pretending to die of hypothermia.







✖ Qᴜᴇᴇɴ ✖  (notonguewithbutt) You need to add a bit more to her history.


✖ Qᴜᴇᴇɴ ✖  (notonguewithbutt) APPROVED


Puddingtalk (Marie) (puddingtalk) | 46 comments YAY.


Denver -writes poems drinks wine- | 62 comments





• Full Name •

➨﹙Nahla﹚A drink of water/Arabic
➨﹙Orabelle﹚beautiful seacoast/Latin
➨﹙Araxie﹚a river said to inspire poetic expression/Armenian
➨﹙Delmare﹚of the sea/Spanish and Old French
Often called Nixie by the Lost Boys



•Biological BackGround •

➨﹙Age﹚ 677 (physically appears to be in the age range of 17-23)
➨﹙D.O.B﹚ April the 27th
➨﹙Place Of Birth﹚ Neverland
➨﹙Species﹚ Mermaid



• Appearance •
﹙Emma Stone﹚
Nahla can be the picture of innocence, if she so chooses. But does she often? No, no t particularly. Nahla has to appear strong and in control, for she is the Head of the Mermaids. But when the Lost Boys come around, often her face softens from its usual, stern gaze. From the tip of her tail to the top of her head, she is approximately 5'6. She has appropriate curves, which she has been known to lure her prey with, but don't be fooled. Beneath her milky pale skin are years of muscle and deadly ability. Her weight is about 127 pounds. Nahla's hair is a beautiful red hue and her eyes are green like sea glass.



•Personality •

﹙Hot-Tempered﹚ Nahla has a temper as fiery as her hair. If you get on her bad side, watch out. Because she is Head Mermaid, she holds a great deal of power and won't hesitate to use it as vengeance. Unfortunately for many, Nahla angers rather easily. To qualm her angers, she often needs someone to grasp her by the arms, look her dead in the eye, and explain the misunderstanding. Perhaps she will become calm. If not, I do suggest getting much farther than an arms length away from the mermaid.
﹙Protective﹚ Nahla is very protective of her troupe of mermaids. She often feels a rather motherly instinct towards them--unless they approach a boy she has her eye on, Pan particularly. But if anyone dare look at them the wrong way, much less lay a finger on them, watch out.
﹙Flirtatious﹚ As many mermaids are, Nahla is flirtatious. But one could describe her actions as...above par. She goes out of her way to be coy, cute, and drop in sexual-innuendos when deemed appropriate. She is also very territorial about who she flirts with, and becomes very irrational if anyone attempts to win the attention of someone which she has 'claimed.'
﹙Witty﹚ Nahla loves witty and clever jokes which makes her think. She is rather clever, if you get past the flirtatiousness and the anger of the red-headed sea creature. Riddles are one of her favourite activites, and she loves entertaining others with them, and with clever little jokes.
﹙Calculating﹚Being a leader, Nahla often has to look at things analytically. It is no wonder she has become as calculating as she is. Unless provoked or angered, or it is something affecting her personally, she often takes a step back and analyzes the situation before making a move. Often, member of her troupe come to her for advice because of this personality trait she possess.
﹙Cynical﹚ Nahla distrusts humanity as a whole. While she generally has faith in her mermaids, in any other species, this same trust is rather lacking. She finds it very difficult to believe in the sincerity and integrity of human being particularly. Having lived as long as she has, she has seen many come and go. They all seem to lie, in some way or another. Her distrust of them as a species has grown greatly over time.
﹙Hopeful﹚ Nahla does her best to remain optimistic, and when that doesn't work, to at least remain hopeful. Often times, this is difficult, especially when she has lived so long and seen so many horrible things. Yet, she retains this hope that in the end things are going to be okay. Many say she is foolish for this behavior, but she quickly silences them. Afterall, who dares call a leader foolish?
﹙Standoffish﹚ Upon first meeting her, Nahla can often appear standoffish. Perhaps it is because she is studying you, calculating you, or perhaps admiring your physique. It's also quite possible she's lost in a daydream. Or, the most likely, she just doesn't care enough about you to warrant her attention.


• History •

➨﹙Father﹚Unknown; Unknown; Unknown; Love -2 out of/10 Nahla has not seen her father since birth and has long since forgotten him.
➨﹙Sister﹚Coral; 268; Living; Love - 9.5 out of/10


Nahla grew up being groomed for the role she now holds today. Her aunt was once the leader of the Mermaids of Neverland, and Nahla was her eldest living descendant. Her childhood was rather controlled. When she often wanted to spend time playing, diving, and exploring, she was instead taught to study, analyze, and strategy. She was taught to go after what she wanted, and to defend what was hers. She was raised sheltered and cold, raised to be a leader.
That is, until she met Peter Pan.
Nahla met Peter right after her aunt died. He came to meet her because she was the new leader, or at least that is what he told her. Surprisingly, she enjoyed his company. And the flirting. Good Lord, she loved the flirting. It was such an adrenaline rush. Being as innocent as she was, untouched by the harshness of emotions and relations with boys and men, she was never too sure whether it was a simple flirtationship between them, or something bigger. Often times, she still questions this. Pan was the one who coined the name Nixie for her, which quickly stuck and is often how the lost boys refer to her. Because he gave her such a nickname, she decided to only refer to him as Pan, rather than Peter.
Nahla is still currently the leader of the Mermaids. Sometimes, her elders question her position. But she has been bred for such a role, and she fits it well. She cares for the members of her school more than the world itself, and would do anything for their wellbeing.







✖ Qᴜᴇᴇɴ ✖  (notonguewithbutt) I love it!!!!!! She is most certainly approved.


message 8: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 13, 2015 10:24AM) (new)

• Full Name • Evangeline Arabella Cornelia Von Vanderbilt

➨﹙Name﹚Meaning/Origin/Etc.: Good news, bringer of good news, Greek
➨﹙Name﹚Meaning/Origin/Etc.: Beautiful, graceful, Latin
➨﹙Name﹚Meaning/Origin/Etc.: Strong willed, Irish
➨﹙Name﹚Meaning/Origin/Etc.: From the hill, Dutch



•Biological BackGround •

➨﹙Age﹚ 737, looks 16
➨﹙D.O.B﹚ january 17th
➨﹙Place Of Birth﹚: Mermaid Island
➨﹙Species: Mermaid



• Appearance •
﹙Face Claim Here﹚ N/A

Description. Eva is five feet eight inches including her long blush colored tail with gold scales. She has pale milky skin, a sharp foxy face, and large green eyes fringed with thick black lashes. She has no scars whatsoever. She's lean and toned with sparkling razor sharp teeth.



•Personality •

➨Vain: Eva is very conscious about her natural beauty, and spends hours on the prime rock sun bathing and brushing her hair, crooning sweet tunes like a siren.

➨Vicious: Eva is the most viscous mermaid, ripping people to shreds for fun, giggling afterwards.

➨Cruel: Eva will do anything to get what she wants, no matter what.

➨Conniving: Eva often does immoral things for terrible reasons, wheedling reasons out of the most unwilling victims.

➨Charm: Eva is very sweet and charming if you're a mermaid, with perfect manners and grace.

➨Graceful: Eva can swim so beautifully, each dive like a ballet concert

➨Bossy: Eva is used to many people obeying her.

➨Strong willed: Eva will never give up. Ever. So watch out, or your throat will be ripped out.


• History •

➨﹙Father, Allan Vanderbilt; 46; King Mermaid; Love - 3 out of/10
➨Mother,﹚Bernadette Vanderbilt; 42; Queen Mermaid; Love - 2 out of/10


Eva was born to the King and Queen mermaid on a sunny winter's day in their marble underwater palace. She wanted to rule over the mermaid as their head, but decided not to, despite her parent's urging- she'd rather sun bathe, her favorite activity. Her parents never paid much attention to her, so she never cared about them. She never visits them anymore, now that she's a teen.


Denver -writes poems drinks wine- | 62 comments So just a quick question on your charrie...there are no royals I dont think, and arent they all born to the same mother? I knwo youre a mod but i wanted to clarify that I'm a little confused >.<


avery ♞ do something revolutionary (averyreadsbooks) Um, Angel, I know you're a moderator, but please use proper html.


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

I will, if I have time. I'm really busy this week.


message 12: by avery ♞ do something revolutionary (last edited Feb 23, 2015 11:20AM) (new)

avery ♞ do something revolutionary (averyreadsbooks)





•Quinn Alexandria Chase•

➨﹙Quinn﹚Descendent of Conn/Irish/This name was chosen by her mother, who wanted a boy (even though it was impossible.) She wanted Quinn to not be feminine and such, so he gave her a unisex name. Plus, it just sounded pretty.
➨﹙Alexandria﹚Defending men/Greek/Alexandria was chosen by Quinn's mother because it was a total girl's name. If Quinn grew up not to want a boys' name, she could switch to Alexandria. Also, Quinn's grandmother was named Alexandra.
➨﹙Chase﹚Surname/English



•Biological BackGround •

➨﹙Age﹚345 (Appears 17)
➨﹙D.O.B﹚July 28
➨﹙Place Of Birth﹚Neverland
➨﹙Species﹚Mermaid



• Appearance •
﹙Audrey Hollister﹚
Quinn is a short girl, coming in at only 5'2". Her hair is a bright red that stands out. Her eyes are green, and they appear different shades based on her clothes. Quinn has plenty of muscles. What would you expect from someone who's swimming all day? The main thing you notice, though, when you look at Quinn, isn't her hair, build, eyes, or height: it's her tail. Made for swimming through the ocean, her tail is mainly functional. Her tail is slightly red (view spoiler), but not a lot. Nothing compared to her hair!
(view spoiler)



•Personality •

﹙Deceitful﹚ Quinn is one of the most deceitful people you'll ever meet. She'll trick you before you can even have a second to think. She'll use her charms to mislead you into her trap.
﹙Charming﹚ Quinn is just oh-so charming and nice. She'll make herself out to be a sweet, naive, innocent little girl who could never do anything wrong. Then, just when you were feeling safe, bam! She'll bite down on you.
﹙Persuasive﹚ Quinn can convince you to do just about anything. You'll meet her thinking one thing, and leave thinking the exact opposite. She can twist your brain into thinking things you don't want to think, have never thought of before.
﹙Flirtatious﹚ Quinn is one of the most flirty people ever. She'll flirt with anyone and everyone, regardless of the circumstances. It's one of her tricks: make you fall in love (or at least think so), follow her, and get killed and eaten. It's just another one of her little tricks.
﹙Vain﹚ Quinn cares an awful lot about her appearance. If she wanted to, she would spend just hours in front of the mirror all day. Quinn also thinks that she's one of the prettiest mermaids there is.
﹙"Nice"﹚ Quinn is a fake-nice type of gal. She can appear cordial and sweet, generous and giving, but beneath the outer layer is a whole other type of girl.
﹙Competitive﹚ Quinn is super competitive. She just feels this inner-need to be the best. Regardless, Quinn will fight you over anything and everything.
﹙Cruel﹚ Quinn has no opposition to telling the truth. Your hair's messed up? She'll make sure everyone knows. Say something stupid? She'll never let you forget it. Get in her way, and be prepared for a showdown.



• History •

➨﹙Father﹚James Weederman; Would be 377; Dead; 4/10
➨﹙Sister﹚Mary Chase; 341; Alive; 8/10


Quinn Alexandria Chase was born like most mermaids: with a human father Her father, James Weederman, was a sailor who came near the mermaid's place. He got himself lured by the mermaids and managed to create Quinn.

James loved Quinn. He loved his daughter, and wanted to raise her. Still, it was impossible: they were a different species. James sailed back to England. He found himself thinking about Quinn, about her. James still wanted to be with her. He sailed on another trip, and met the mermaids again. He had another child, named Mary.

James and his ship crew encountered a storm on their return home. The ship sunk, and James died, never to be seen again. Quinn was a bit sad, sure, but she was too young to really feel all that sad. Anyways, by this time, Quinn was 4 years old, and getting into plenty of trouble.

Quinn was an adventurous sort. She was always playing pranks in her youth, tricking others. When she was older, Quinn became flirtatious and great at killing men. It worried some older mermaids, that Quinn would get into trouble, but she managed fine.

Quinn got along great with her younger sister, Mary. They were great friends because of their small age difference, and were often confused for twins. Still, as all sisters do, they fought often and still do today. Quinn eventually made other friends.

Quinn continues with her ways even today. She's great at killing men for their flesh, and at fighting with her younger sister. While Quinn has matured lots from her younger years, she remains the same way at heart.







avery ♞ do something revolutionary (averyreadsbooks)
// i d e n t i t y ;   ᴀ ᴘʀɪɴᴄᴇss ᴄᴜᴛ ғʀᴏᴍ ᴍᴀʀʙʟᴇ



( nᴀᴍᴇ :: melody marie jackson
( nɪᴄᴋɴᴀᴍᴇ :: mel

( tɪᴛʟᴇ :: mermaid
( aʟɪᴀs :: daughter of ariel

// d e t a i l s ;   sᴍᴏᴏᴛʜᴇʀ ᴛʜᴀɴ ᴀ sᴛᴏʀᴍ



( aɢᴇ :: 145 :: appears 16
( bɪʀᴛʜ dᴀᴛᴇ :: may 10
( pʟᴀᴄᴇ oғ bɪʀᴛʜ :: neverland

( gᴇɴᴅᴇʀ :: female
( sᴇxᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ :: bisexual

// v i s a g e ;   ᴛʜᴇ sᴄᴀʀs ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴍᴀʀᴋ ᴍʏ ʙᴏᴅʏ



( fᴀᴄᴇ ʟᴀɪᴍ :: daria sidorchuk

Melody is a beautiful girl. She has fiery red hair, passed down to her by her mother. On the other hand, she has her father's eyes. Melody is considered tall, at 5'6". She's very fit, being mermaid and all. One of her least favorite things about herself are her freckles. Melody's tail is a perfect shade of tan (view spoiler) She has no tattoos or piercings.

// p e r s o n a l i t y ;   sɪʟᴠᴇʀ ᴀɴᴅ ɢᴏʟᴅ



Melody is very creative. When she was little, Melody would come up with all sorts of games and puzzles that she could spend time solving. Even today, she makes an excellent artist. Melody is insightful. One of her least favorite things is dishonesty; she can always see right through it. Melody is convincing. She can persuade you to do anything, even something you never imagined doing in your entire life. The best part is, she can do it without dishonesty. Melody is also decisive. Making a decision in a moment's notice is something she does often. Melody is very flirtatious. As a mermaid, you'd have to be, but Melody is especially good at it.

However, even Melody has weaknesses. She's very sensitive to criticism and hatefulness. Often times, if somebody says one thing bad about her or her idea, she'll give up on it entirely. Melody is also private. Although she likes to be around other people, she doesn't like to tell them much about herself. In addition, Melody is a perfectionist. She believes that everything has a way that it's meant to be, so why would you do it anyway else? Melody always has to have a cause. She won't do anything unless it has a strong, good purpose. However, she can burn out easily. Melody has always put too much on herself, just naturally, but it's really become bad just recently. Stress is common for her.

// h i s t o r y ;   ᴛʜᴇ ғɪʀᴇ's ғᴏᴜɴᴅ ᴀ ʜᴏᴍᴇ ɪɴ ᴍᴇ



Melody was never meant to be born. That may sound cruel, but her parents were never even meant to be together. Her father, Eric, was a prince of a small island country. Her mother, Ariel, is a mermaid-still is alive today. Ariel fell in love with Eric from afar, and turned into a human so that she could meet him. Eric fell in love with her too. Then, they had Melody, their one and only child.

Eric was happy. He was with Ariel, whom he loved, and his newborn daughter. But, he didn't know that Ariel was a mermaid. Ariel had to take Melody with her back to the ocean where she was raised. Eric had no warning that they were leaving. A month later, he was found dead. Most suspected that he committed suicide, but it could never be proved.

Melody was raised happily as a mermaid. She grew up as most mermaids do, swimming around the ocean surrounding Neverland and eating human flesh. All Melody knew about her father was that he impregnated Ariel. That was all she needed to know, then again. Hearing a story about your mother leaving your father might be hard to comprehend for a 5-year-old. On Melody's 16th birthday, though, she finally learned the truth. Honestly though, Melody was fine with it. Nobody she knew had a father, so why should she?

Melody lived a happy life after that. She never dated another man, but she also didn't really care. She was somewhat successful at being a mermaid. Life was, and still is, good.

// f a m i l y ;   ʙᴏʀɴ ᴀɴᴅ ʀᴀɪsᴇᴅ



( fᴀᴛʜᴇʀ :: eric jackson :: deceased
( mᴏᴛʜᴇʀ :: ariel jackson :: alive



✖ Qᴜᴇᴇɴ ✖  (notonguewithbutt) Avery, your characters are approved.

@Angel: Please use proper html, as this is an advanced rp. You need more for your personality, at least 5 sentences for each trait. You need a face claim, or make her description much more detailed. Also, her parents cannot be royals, as you did not ask, and that's also not apart of the plot. All mermaids have the same mother. Please place her back in the character workshop folder until she has been fixed.


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

Queen, I might not have time until next week. Just saying.


✖ Qᴜᴇᴇɴ ✖  (notonguewithbutt) Thats fine, you can complete her whenever you want.


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