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Made myself a nook finally

Here is my synopsis (I know it’s long. Forgive me)


• Gemini disappeared the night her uncle died. No calls, no contact, no sign. Everybody assumes she ran away… or worse. She had nothing left, her parents gone, her little sister gone, and now her uncle. But her best friend Jason knew better than to give up on her. She would have never left him. And one week after her disappearance he wakes up in a room that he did not go to sleep in. George is there with him, a stuck up kid with more money than Jason would ever see in his life. George had always tried to hang out with Jason and Gemini, but Jason hated him. And now, according to the people in the room they were going to the Alternate Universe, the past of the Alternate Universe. 1991 our time he’s told. Because that’s where Gemini was. And although all his questions are answered something just doesn’t add up. Which isn’t surprising with all the information he had just taken in. Before he can even process it all he’s there, but he’s not himself. He’s sent to the alternate universe to find Gem and bring her back. But in order to travel to the Alternate universe, the passenger must transfer their consciousness into a hosts from the alternate universe, and the longer they stay the more they lose Lucidity, the harder it becomes to distinguish their own memories from the hosts. But to make this worse, Jason and George’s hosts are on two different sides of an ongoing war. Jason, a soldier fighting for justice and peace for the king. And George, fighting for freedom from the tyrannical government and the wrath of the soldiers. So as Jason fights the war, him and George trying to find Gemini, he also fights to keep his sanity from the war going on inside his mind.

So far...

31 pages

10,644 words

5 main characters

8 chapters

Wow! That synopsis totally sucked me in.

@Niharika Thanks!

Rain wrote: "So far...

31 pages

10,644 words

5 main characters

8 chapters"

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