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message 1: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) I just need a place to dump all of my random writing stuff so please either ignore, or enjoy lol


message 2: by jillian ౨ৎ (last edited Jul 03, 2021 08:14AM) (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) Character template:
Name:
Age:
Location:
Nationality:
Occupation:
Height:
Eye color:
Hair color:
Build:
Distinguishing features:
Outfit:
Accessories:
Speech style:
Posture:
Sense of humor:
Emotions:
Type of childhood:
Siblings:
Friends:
Enemies:
Significant others:
Group dynamic:
Habits:
Secrets:
Desires:
Flaws:
Strengths:
Fears:
Do they want to be remembered and if so what for:
What makes them angry:
Goal in story:
Motive in story:


message 3: by Emary, Head MOD (new)

Emary | 769 comments Mod
good template! I would also put in some habits they have :)


message 4: by Niharika✩ (new)

Niharika✩ (ilikebooksandyou) | 297 comments Can I steal this template, Jillian?


message 5: by Emary, Head MOD (new)

Emary | 769 comments Mod
I know in the Scrivener template, it has external and internal conflict on there. Don’t have to put that but it’s just a suggestions :)


message 6: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) Niharika✩ wrote: "Can I steal this template, Jillian?"

Yeah, go ahead! I am adding random suggestions and stuff that Em puts here, but I also take certain things out depending on the character but please feel free to use it.


message 7: by jillian ౨ৎ (last edited Jul 05, 2021 06:09PM) (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) World-building template dump:
World name:
Flora+fauna (plants and animals):
Landscapes:
Diseases:
Capitol:
Flags+symbols:
Weather+climate:
Race of people:
Mannerism of people:
Customs and rituals:
Language(s):
Social framework:
History:
Culture:
Art forms:
Clothing:
Food:
Religion:
Gods+deities:
Holy texts:
Magic systems:
Rules of magic:
Technology:
Weaponry:
Signature weapons:
Common weapons:
Trade:
Currency:
Major imports+exports:
Natural resources:
Transportation:
Business:
Government:
Law:
War systems:


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

That is a really good world building temp


message 9: by Emary, Head MOD (new)

Emary | 769 comments Mod
It is *my nodding respect*


message 10: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) I know! I can't take much credit, I had help from Em and writing websites but it has been very useful! I am still world-building, but I already have several things done with it.


message 11: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) How I find my names and their meanings:
https://www.behindthename.com/random/


message 12: by Niharika✩ (new)

Niharika✩ (ilikebooksandyou) | 297 comments interesting
I got Jocelyn Etelka Weasley


message 13: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) Here are also some questions I ask myself when doing magic system development:
How does magic work in your world?
Where does it come from?
Is there a language that’s needed in order to call forth magic? If so, what are its roots?
Is magic regulated in any way?
What is the governing body?
What are magicians’ status in society? Are they trusted advisors of kings or charlatans on the road?
How many magicians exist in your world?
How do they perceive one another?


message 14: by Mint (new)

Mint | 12 comments Y’all don’t mind if I steal these templates right- like, hehe, imagine actually coming up with these things in your own….


message 15: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) Yeah go ahead! These are free to use if you want.


message 16: by jillian ౨ৎ (last edited Aug 25, 2021 06:16PM) (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) This is a life saver if you are struggling with developing your plot (great for plotters or pantser!)

https://www.goodreads.com/photo/user/...


message 17: by jess (new)

jess (jess_the_best) Jillian wrote: "This is a life saver if you are struggling with developing your plot (great for plotters or pantser!)

https://attachments.office.net/owa/20......"


we did a thing on english on the hero's journey


message 18: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv)

(Ignore that)


message 19: by Niharika✩ (new)

Niharika✩ (ilikebooksandyou) | 297 comments Jillian wrote: "This is a life saver if you are struggling with developing your plot (great for plotters or pantser!)

https://www.goodreads.com/photo/user/..."


This is very similar to the three act stry structure you know … except more visual


message 20: by Niharika✩ (new)

Niharika✩ (ilikebooksandyou) | 297 comments Life saver fr


message 21: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) Niharika✩ wrote: "Jillian wrote: "This is a life saver if you are struggling with developing your plot (great for plotters or pantser!)

https://www.goodreads.com/photo/user/..."

T..."

I've never heard of anything like this until quite recently, and it's saved my plot!


message 22: by Emary, Head MOD (new)

Emary | 769 comments Mod
Haha I actually took a whole Reedsy course about plot structure! It was tremendously helpful


message 23: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) Jillian wrote: "Niharika✩ wrote: "Jillian wrote: "This is a life saver if you are struggling with developing your plot (great for plotters or pantser!)

https://www.goodreads.com/photo/user/......"

I lied, this did not save my plot but it helped until I realized that my story has zero plot lmao.


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

Jillian wrote: "Jillian wrote: "Niharika✩ wrote: "Jillian wrote: "This is a life saver if you are struggling with developing your plot (great for plotters or pantser!)

https://www.goodreads.com/photo/user/......"


lol


message 25: by jillian ౨ৎ (last edited Aug 29, 2021 06:53PM) (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) It's alright, though because I started writing a short story that I love so much that I might just cry. I have barely started writing, and I already have the best freaking part of the climax. It's too cute:

“You drove me into this life!” she screams over the roar of the waterfall, tears streaming down her face.
I step closer to her, the water coming up to my knees. “I know...and I can drive you out of it as well.”

(Our MC took her basically on a road trip that led to her breaking down, revealing her dark past which brought back her emotions and thoughts of suicide. The life she had been literally driven to was really stressful for her. ALRIGHT! I say no more.)


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

Jillian wrote: "It's alright, though because I started writing a short story that I love so much that I might just cry. I have barely started writing, and I already have the best freaking part of the climax. It's ..."

Where can I read this!?


message 27: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) I can send you the final copy when I'm done!


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

Jillian wrote: "I can send you the final copy when I'm done!"

Yes Please!


message 29: by Bonnie, New full-time mod! (new)

Bonnie (thedaylightreader) | 155 comments Mod
Yes! Send me it too pls and thx!


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

Jillian wrote: "It's alright, though because I started writing a short story that I love so much that I might just cry. I have barely started writing, and I already have the best freaking part of the climax. It's ..."

If that's not a quote I don't know what is


message 31: by Emary, Head MOD (new)

Emary | 769 comments Mod
Omg, Jillian, you’ve reached the moment where an author starts obsessing their own work. They may be biased, but THEY CANT GET OVER HOW MUCH THEY LOVE IT!!!!!


message 32: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) I am so excited for this story! I have to kinda put it on hold because we have an assignment for English class where we have make and original hero and story so I am going to finish that first. I may write a full story for that one, but I'm not sure.


message 33: by Emary, Head MOD (new)

Emary | 769 comments Mod
Cool! Good luck!


message 34: by Emary, Head MOD (new)

Emary | 769 comments Mod
How long are your stories usually, Jillian?


message 35: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) If I try really hard to make real short stories, they will max out at 40 pages. I have written a weird in between in the past, where it's not long enough to be a book, but it's too long to be a short story. So yeah, I really dont know!


message 36: by Emary, Head MOD (new)

Emary | 769 comments Mod
I get that. I don’t write a TON of short stories. Usually they are for contests or school. For contests, the max is usually like around 5,000 words (super short), so that’s how long my short stories are. But for school there really isn’t a limit, and my stories end up being around 40 pages (don’t really know how many words that is)


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