Storytellers discussion

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So, seeing someone else active again inspired me, and I'm starting a new story... 😬
I'm trying to put a lighter spin to the somewhat very depressing stuff I've been writing lately, and I would really appreciate it if someone would give me advice on how to go about doing so, ideas for the plot, critiques, etc. I do want this to be a project that I put together, rather than a collab, but I would really appreciate some input. I put part one in my thread, so you can see it there... I really don't know what to do from here.
The only things that I do know past this point are that a.) I want to write in some lighter scenes, some laughter. b.) I ship Zia and Drax.

And c.) I want him to find out about her habits, and be seriously... other word for mad. 😛