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Eric Brown (manaxshl) | 6 comments Dear yogis. I am currently polishing my new novel about a yoga retreat on the beautiful island of Crete. A group of urban neurotics gather in a seclueded village deep in the folds of the Creten mountains for a week of fun and games. Deep in the throes of a midlife crisis, their American yoga teacher does his best to teach them some of the deeper truths of yoga, and almost dies in the process.
The book is a comedy, a satire, and an attempt to make sense of all that yoga has become in the past 20 years.
Would anyone in the group be willing to give it a quick read and maybe offer some critique about character developement, congurity, and readability?
Thanks so much for your consideration
Eric Brown


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