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Zayn's Journal By Rafia > Critique and Commentary

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message 1: by Rafia (new)

Rafia  (rafiagreste) | 83 comments Mod
Here we can talk about my writing yayyyyy! I am fine with negative feed back. I believe they help me move forward, so all commentary is accepted! Thank you for reading!


message 2: by A.J. (new)

A.J. (ashhh_xoxo) yippe :))


message 3: by Sarah (new)

Sarah | 2 comments I enjoyed the start to your story especially chapter 0.5; that was some deep shit right there. This is kind of random but your story gave me ‘Grown’ vibes. I have a feeling that your story is going to take a dark turn for some reason.


message 4: by Rafia (new)

Rafia  (rafiagreste) | 83 comments Mod
Sarah wrote: "I enjoyed the start to your story especially chapter 0.5; that was some deep shit right there. This is kind of random but your story gave me ‘Grown’ vibes. I have a feeling that your story is going..."

I can't say much without giving the whole thing away so all I am going to say is, Thank You! This piece has been edited so many times. Not to mention this is not even the first of its series it has a prequel and this is basically a spinoff from a different story which I will share on here as soon as I am done with this one! :)


message 5: by A.J. (new)

A.J. (ashhh_xoxo) my oh my.. are we gonna have theories? i'm not good at them T-T


message 6: by Rafia (new)

Rafia  (rafiagreste) | 83 comments Mod
A.J. wrote: "my oh my.. are we gonna have theories? i'm not good at them T-T"

lmaoooo.sorry a.j


message 7: by A.J. (new)

A.J. (ashhh_xoxo) i'll try to keep up :D don't worry xD


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