Episode discussion

Feel free to review my poems ^^
I'm still a beginner and your opinion sand advice would help a lot!!

So I'm reading and reading and reach the end.
And I got this warm fuzzy feeling, because I love happy endings. I love how your poems are not repetitive and most importantly how they tell a story. Its not too long and not too short. I honestly do not have anything negative to say about this because it was pretty good. If I had to rate it, I would give it an 8/10. Mostly because I know you will upload a lot of more beatiful poems and If i give you a 10/10. People might think I am biased lol. But this is definitely a great start!

Your poem was very descriptive! I feel like all I read is sad poetry so I was very happy to read something with a happy ending! Great start I can't wait to see what else you write!

Sarah wrote: "Your poem was very descriptive! I feel like all I read is sad poetry so I was very happy to read something with a happy ending! Great start I can't wait to see what else you write!"

Yeah I can vouche for that. Half my poems are all depresso :(

Rafia wrote: "So I'm reading and reading and reach the end.
And I got this warm fuzzy feeling, because I love happy endings. I love how your poems are not repetitive and most importantly how they tell a story. I..."

well, I do write sad poems but it's winter- can't bring more coldness in the room xDD but thank you Rafia! means a lot!!
And yeah!! I love telling stories through my poems (mostly because I can't write one as they are long- and I'm lazy ._.) lol

Sarah wrote: "Your poem was very descriptive! I feel like all I read is sad poetry so I was very happy to read something with a happy ending! Great start I can't wait to see what else you write!"

Thank you so much Sarah~! :D

Feel free to review my new write-up ^^
Thanks!

Ahem...just sending this to Hybe and telling them I found a better composer than anyone in their company.

THAT WAS GREAT, I like how the stanzas were nicely done and it made sense with the composition… and I have to ask this but are you okay? Pm me if you want to talk anytime! :)

So I read the new one "Stay" and I feel like you kind of lost your vibe. The feeling was there and I understand you were trying to convey but it was very robotic? It did not have that nice flow that your previous poems had. A bit too much repitition that came in every stanza which was not necessary. I feel like this can be redone in a better way. Don't take it in a wrong way :)

Keep going!

Thanks for the review Rafia! I'll take care in the future :)!

A.J. wrote: "Thanks for the review Rafia! I'll take care in the future :)!"

Welcome!

Look who just came out from the writer's block and wrote a goddamn poem after 2 months ^^