Pyro’s Den discussion

Have a scene you need feedback on?



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I have a scene that I need feedback on. Let me know if you'd like tp help and I can send it in a message.

You know you can always turn to me when you need help on something Tristan.

Kara, if you know anyone into books like Redacted can you see how they feel about the scare factor of Chapter 20?

I can ask around to see if anyone is interested.

Thanks.