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Zoiy wrote: "Hi,
so I'm figuring out which blurb to use for the back of my book, or a combination. Which appeals to you more/Which would you read?
1.
One Princess in search of her Prince Charming.
Twelve nobl..."
4th one is nice:)
so I'm figuring out which blurb to use for the back of my book, or a combination. Which appeals to you more/Which would you read?
1.
One Princess in search of her Prince Charming.
Twelve nobl..."
4th one is nice:)
Number 3rd is the best, 2nd is nice but less detailed.
Number 3 is best. 2 seems to have tense continuity issues but is second best
Honestly... none I think? 1st one is too chaotic and makes you forget about what is it about imaddietly after you are done reading. 2nd starts in a way that I think lots of authors have used already. it's like this typical "yep that's me, you're probably wondering how I got here"-way. It is the second part of the 2nd option that I find alright. "soon I was about to discover...": I like this sentence :) and the 3rd one is too long. I think it should end at "gets swept off in different directions" and that's it. I feel like it's too many information. Like those trailers of movies where you already see the whole plot of a movie in it. Not trying to be mean or anything but in my opinion, it needs to be changed a bit
so I'm figuring out which blurb to use for the back of my book, or a combination. Which appeals to you more/Which would you read?
1.
One Princess in search of her Prince Charming.
Twelve noble princes and elves, and a commoner vying for the princes’ heart.
One Assassin among the nobles, pretending to love the princess in order to killer her and bring the empire to its knees.
Warning, this Romantic-Comedy contains dangerously hot princes, sexy elves, and a heart-throbbing peasant. Read at your own risk of laughing and crying at the same time. For this fairy-tale will surely knock your knickers off.
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Not everything in life goes as planned. Soon I’d find that many contestants for my heart would give me the surprise of my life. Some will inspire my heart. Others will test my resolve. And my Royal Matchmaking Competition will be rigged in ways I never imagined possible. Soon I was about to discover that choosing a life partner would become the greatest challenge of my life and would completely turn my world upside down.
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Princess Qloey is the heir to the Velazian Empire and of age to choose a husband. Twelve boys are invited to compete in a month long competition to win her heart and a seat on the throne. She thinks finding the right husband will be an easy and swift process. But after she meets the charming princes, beautiful elves, and a commoner, her heart gets swept off in different directions.
But more is at stake than a simple proposal or a broken heart, at the opening ceremony, an assassin tries to kill her. They soon discover the mastermind is one of her twelve bachelors. Amidst several assassination attempts, centaur attacks, publicized group dates, and royal favoritism towards some competitors, choosing a husband becomes the hardest decision of her life, and threatens her very right to inherit the throne.