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Chapter Two, “The Girl” : 10 years later…. “Ghost boy this is witchcraft. Do you copy? Code red!” “I repeat, Ghost boy this is witchcraft do you copy? Code red!!!” *on walkie talkie.* “Shut the h__l up, I’m asleep.” Said kid. “Zayn. I swear to god just answer! I saw a monster!” “Leo?! What monster?” Said Zayn “It appears to be a very powerful blood-controlling monster. Over.” Said Leo. “What is it’s name? Over.” Said Zayn.
“I don’t know. Come to me and Jona’s house so we can play uno and investigate. Over and out.” *glass breaks while boys play uno* “What the h__l just happened?!” Said Leo. *Crying* *They go over slowly* “I have to go back!” “I have to go back, back!” “Hey, hey, hey!” “You’re going to be okay.” Said Zayn “Now Jona get the towel and get it wet!” Said Leo. “How the h__l are we going to help her?!” Said Jona. “Just get it wet you big idiot!” Said Zayn. “She is in pain! She is burning! I feel her pulse!” Said Zayn. *Puts girl on couch* *Zayn puts wet, folded, towel on head.* “Oooh. It looks like Zayn has a crush on her!!” Said Leo. “Shut the h__l up I just met her.” Said Zayn. “Everyone shut up! She is waking up!” Said Jona. “H-hi.” Said the mysterious girl. “Hello.” *Both Zayn and girl make eye-contact.*
“I-I’m Zayn.” “I-I am Bria.” “I-I am a centaur.” “P-people tried to cut my legs off.” Said Bria. “That explains the S__t-load of blood on you.” Said Zayn. “I don’t know how life is like..” said Bria. “M-Maybe I can teach you h-“ *Leo impersonates smooching* “SHUT UP MAN!” Said Zayn. “It’s the truth.” Said Jona. “C-can I spend the night here?” Said Bria. “Of course Bria. You can stay as long as you want.” Said Zayn. “By the yes of me and Jona of course!” Said Leo. “But it’s fine.” Said Jona and Leo. * At night * “Good night Bria.” “Good night Zayn.” *Leo whispering* “I totally ship them both!” “Ima ship them in my dream” said Leo “haha very funny..” said Zayn. “Good night everyone.” Said Leo.
The end of chapter two.
✨Neena✨ wrote: "ooo is it based on wednesday or smth?"It’s based off of stranger things 3.
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It’s based off of stranger things 3."
ohhhh alr
Maybe a bit of stranger things 1 tho.
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It’s based off a song called “ Take Me To Church “ by hozier.
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Chapter Three, “The Anguish” : “Here I am, Rock you like a hurricane!” Sang Leo. All of a sudden. *Bria’s glass cut burned through* *Bria starts screaming* “BRING IT BACK! BRING IT BACK! BRING IT BACK!” Said Bria. “Holy S__t!” Said Jona. “OH MY GOD WHAT IS IN HER GODD__N CUT?!” Said Zayn “PROBABLY A SLUG?” Said Leo. “Rhinestone bloody slug filled with jewelry.” Said Jona. “HOW THE H__L DID YOU KNOW THAT IN EXACT FORM?!” Said Zayn. “Monster instincts I guess.” “It must be..” *in unison* “THE TITANIUM MONSTER.” “INTER DIMENSIONAL, ALUMINUM MONSTER!” Said Jona. *Zayn grabs naily bat* “STAY AWAY FROM HER!” *Wacks monster in gut* *monster weakly walks away* “Sleepover?” Said Leo “You know it!” Said Jona and Zayn. “Zayn…” Said Bria, weakly. “Yes?” Said Zayn. “Can I sleep now?” “Of course here.” *Zayn builds tiny blanket fort* “You can sleep in here with the unlimited snacks and water.” Said Zayn “And if you need anything, call me, yell, for me to wake up.” Said Zayn. “Ok good night Zayn.” “Good night Bria.” The end of Chapter three.
Chapter Four, “Aluminum”: “We must be approaching.” Said Sheriff.“If we can find that ‘Metal’ Monster everyone has been talking about.” “And we can get a raise” Said Detective. *Light growl* “Show yourself!” “Put your hands up!” Said Sheriff. *Bite* “It got me!” “Now you little s__t let’s see how a scar would fit you.” *Stabs* *Roaring* all of a sudden.. *Screaming* “BRIA! ARE YOU OK?!” Said Zayn. “I FEEL.. A STAB.” Said Bria. “LEO GRAB A TOWEL!” Said Zayn “HOLY S__T! THATS A LOT OF BLOOD!” Said Leo. “JONA! PUT THIS BANDAGE ON HER!” Said Zayn. *Jona puts bandage but notices something* “Guys I think there is an animal bite through the cut.”
“ANIMAL BITE?!” “WHAT IS SHE?! A GODD__N PSYCHO?!” Said Leo. “WELL SHE COULDN’T GET HELP IN THE WOODS YOU IDIOT!” Said Zayn. *Jona interrupts* “GUYS CAN YOU SHUT UP AND LISTEN?! BRIA IS IN PAIN AND ALL YOU TWO ARE DOING IS FIGHTING. THAT WILL NEVER HELP! NOW ACT LIKE MEN AND HELP THIS INJURED PERSON!” All of a sudden.. *Bria screams while cut spreads through whole body* “HOLY S__T! YOU JUST LET HER ALMOST DIE.” Said Zayn. “HOW DID I DO THIS?!” Said Leo. *Bria starts to heal self* “Guys shut up! Look at this! She has magic!” “Oh my god!” Said Leo “Oh my god! She can heal?!” Said Zayn “You just witnessed it” Said Jona. “Haha.. very funny Jona.” Said Zayn. “Anyways. Should I take Bria home?” Said Zayn “Nah it’s fine we have the whole summer to be total nerds.” Said Leo.
The end of Chapter Four.
Chapter Five, “Siege Of The North Pt 1.” *in Russian* “Shoulders back, stomach in, and face forward.” Said head sheriff. “You are men and we will find this monster.” Said head sheriff. *Whispering* “This is h__l.” Whispered one of the sheriffs. “At least we get that s__t-load of money.” “NO TALKING WHILE I SPEAK GENTLEMEN.” “Sorry” Said both sheriffs. “Now, there are four monsters in total. Metal/Metallic, Mud/Earth, Blaze/Fire And Aquatic/Water. This year we are looking for... Metal/Metallic. They can magnify themselves to other items. Which means they can have HUGE weapons. Our job is to defeat this blood kill and kill it!“ “You hear me?“ “Yeah“ Said all the sheriffs. “I Said. DO YOU HEAR ME?“ “YEAH!“ Said all the sheriffs. *In English* *At Zayn’s house.* “Zayn do the dishes honey.“ Said Zayn’s mom. “Mom I always do the dishes. Why can’t Britney do them?“ Said Zayn. “ZAYN I SAID TO DO THE DISHES!“ Said Zayn’s mom. “Ugh, Fine..“ Said Zayn. *Cough Cough* “Bria? You okay?“ Said Zayn. *In Russian* “EAT FIRE YOU BIG BEAST!“ *In English* “Oh s__t! She's burning up!” *Over walkie* “Leo? Do you copy? This is code red! I repeat, Code Red!!” “Yes! This is Leo! I do copy! I will be there in 5! Over and out.” *5 Minutes later.* *Knocking* “Zayn who are these dipsticks?” Said Britney. “Britney shut up they are my friends. We are going to play Uno.” Said Zayn. “You all are nerds.” Said Britney. “Anyways come, hurry!” “Look!” Said Zayn. “In the news it said the Metallic monster was burned.” “Over here, Bria is burned!” Said Zayn. “So your saying… BRIA IS CONNECTED TO THE MONSTER?!” Said Leo. “It’s obvious” Said Jona. “Oh shut up you little-“ “There is not just one monster. There is 3 more!” Said Zayn. “But with Bria’s powers-“ “We can’t she is connected to all of the monsters.” “So we know the metallic monster hates being burned, so, we can burn the connection out of her!” Said Leo. “But that’s going to hurt her!” Said Zayn. “Weather you like it or not. We are going to burn the monster connection out of her tomorrow.” All of a sudden.. *Bria starts lifting up* *Bria roars* *Leo starts screaming* “OH MY GOD WHAT THE H__L JUST HAPPENED?!” End of Chapter Five.
Chapter Six, Siege of the North pt. 2: *In Russian* ¨Ew, what is this bullcrap?¨ One of the slaves asked in disgust. ¨It is a nutritious souffle¨ The lunch lady exclaimed. ¨Nutritious Souffle¨ The slave mocked in disgust. ¨Say that again and I will report you to the Head-sheriff.¨ The lunch lady exclaimed. *At Zayn's house* ¨Bria, we need to talk.¨ Jona said. ¨Hm?¨ Bria asked. ¨You´re too dangerous here.¨ Jona said. ¨Jona! Stop.¨ Zayn exclaimed. ¨Oh, oh, oh, so I am too mean to your ´Girlfriend´¨ Jona said. ¨She is NOT my girlfriend!" ¨Someone fell off their bed this morning, you guys I should be a comedian.¨ Leo said, laughing. ¨Jona, just leave. You´re not allowed here anymore!" Zayn exclaimed. ¨God d__n I hate you all." Jona yelled as he slammed the door. After the slam, Bria feels tension in her ears. They rang so loud. Bria starts covering her ears. ¨Bria, you good? Or are ya just being that same-old drama queen?¨ Leo asked. ¨Ow.¨ Bria said, in pain. ¨Here, I have some headphones, you must have sensitive ears like me!¨ Zayn exclaimed. ¨Thanks, Zayn¨ Bria said, gratefully. Bria started blushing. She giggled across the room. Meanwhile, Jona started writing a poem in the woods. Titled: I Am Me. ¨I am me throughout the woods.
They thought I wasn´t good.
I tried hard to stay calm,
but they weren´t taking my palm.
That boy was so nice.
But he treated me like lice.¨
As Jona finished, he felt proud to actually share his feelings on paper and in writing. As he finished walking home, he got startled. ¨SHOW ME WHERE YOU LIVE, LITTLE BOY!¨ The kidnapper exclaimed.
End of Chapter Six
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*Monster gallops toward unknown Russian.* “NO. PLEASE I WILL GIVE YOU WHAT YOU WANT. JUST DO NOT KILL ME!!” Said the unknown Russian. *monster gets ready to eat body* all of a sudden.. *SCREAMING* *uses telekinesis and throws monster to tree* *monster gets injured and weakly walks away* “Never Ever hurt my dads.” Said girl.
“Thank you so so much for saving us.” Said unknown Russian. “I would’ve saved myself idiot.”
*starts yelling in Russian* “Just stop. It’s fine! Let’s celebrate by having some slurpees!”
Said girl. *gets slurpees* “Hey hey! Cheers!” They all say.
The end of chapter one.